 One Last Time, Some Fan Fiction |
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 Nov 15 2005, 01:48 PM
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Great Dragon  Group: Members Posts: 6,748 Joined: 5-July 02 Member No.: 2,935  |
McNope. But McMaybe McLater.
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Nov 16 2005, 03:09 AM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 68 Joined: 9-October 04 Member No.: 6,738 |
Drek, why am I craving a happy meal?
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Nov 16 2005, 06:46 AM
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Uncle Fisty Group: Admin Posts: 13,891 Joined: 3-January 05 From: Next To Her Member No.: 6,928 |
Good deal on both. THe first story sotr of felt chopped. Like you had a neat idea that you wanted to get out and didn't really have teh inclination to expand on. But I like some of the visuals it had. Lots of grit to it. Very harsh.
I really enjoyed the second, especially with Fastjack as Thor, and the whole legend of Thor and Jormungard (spelling, what the hell) in Ragnarok battling. 'Cept Cpt. dies instead of Thor in this one. Made for a good read. Like the symbolism tie in, the whole hanging from the tree for doing divintation/sortialage. |
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Nov 16 2005, 04:02 PM
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Man In The Machine Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 2,264 Joined: 26-February 02 From: I-495 S Member No.: 1,105 |
So having now read Countdown, I fully agree that its just wickedly creepy. It screams Halloween run. But I also agree that it somehow felt, erh... aborted. It had some great points, but felt like it was a great idea that came out on 'paper' too fast to be fully worked thru.
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