 Dudukain's Dedicated Character Thread, I wanted one too.... |
 Jun 12 2006, 10:22 PM
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Okay, I decided to start a "dedicated" thread for criticism and advice about my characters.
so let's start! Ten Kalos Race: Human (0 BP) Attributes (195 BP) Body: 3 Agility: 6 (.8.) Reaction: 5 (7) Strength: 3 Charisma: 1 Intuition: 3 Logic: 2 (4) Willpower: 2 Edge: 3 Essence: .6 Initiative: 8 (11) Initiative Passes: 1 (3) Physical Damage Track: 10 Stun Damage Track: 9 Notoreity: 1 Active Skills (148 BP) Automatics (assault rifles): 7 Heavy Weapons (assault cannon): 3 Longarms: 4 Pistols (revolvers): 4 Armorer (weapon Accesories): 4 Cybertechnology (Bioware): 4 First Aid (combat wounds): 2 Electronics skill group: 1 Pilot Ground Craft (wheeled): 3 Knowledge Skills (15 free BP+8 BP) Cybernetics History: 2 Language Skills: English: N Or'Zet: 4 Spanish: 4 Japanese (techie): 4 Chinese: 4 Sperethiel: 4 Qualities (+15 BP) Toughness (10 BP) Aptitude (Automatics) (10 BP) Uncouth (+20 BP) Spirit Bane (Watcher Spirits): (+10 BP) Incompetent (pilot anthroform) (+5 BP) Cyberware: Aluminum Bone Lacing Wired Reflexes 2 Bioware: Muscle Toner: 2 Bone Density Augmentation: 2 Cerebral Booster: 2 Lifestyle: Low Gear: Urban Explorer Jumpsuit W/helmet, Sony Emperor W/ Response 2, System 2, Firewall 2, Signal 3; Ak-97 W/Gas vent 3, Shock Pad, Smartgun Link (Internal), 10 spare clips; 40 Rounds Ak-97 ammo, Ruger Superwarhawk W/Internal Smartlink;, 10 rounds ruger super warhawk EX explosiver rounds, 15 rounds Ruger Super Warhawk Ammo, Goggles W/Smartlink, image link, vision enhancement 3; Fake SIN rating 4, Fake Firearms License rating 4, Medkit Rating 6, Cybertechnology tools, GPS, Chisel, Wire Clippers, 2 Plasteel restraints, 30 plastic restraints. Programs: Browse 2, Encrypt 2, Data Bomb 2, Scan 2, Reality Filter 1 Contacts (13 BP) Fixer (Connection 4/Loyalty 2) Street Doc (Connection 1/Loyalty 6) Backround: Born in Atlanta in 2044, Ten Kalos was a typical middle-class child. He attended school, and after graduating joined the CAS Marines, specializing in treating wounds. After serving his term, he attended an academy to learn cybertechnology, and was especially fascinated by biotechnology. His SIN was lost in the crash of '64 |
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Dudukain Dudukain's Dedicated Character Thread Jun 12 2006, 10:22 PM
GrinderTheTroll General criticism I give to my players is usually,... Jun 12 2006, 10:37 PM Shrike30 Just a minor quirk with the gear: did you really i... Jun 12 2006, 10:51 PM Geekkake QUOTE (Shrike30) Just a minor quirk with the gear:... Jun 12 2006, 11:21 PM Backgammon Charisma 1 and no social skills. Classic newbie mi... Jun 12 2006, 11:34 PM emo samurai Not AWESOME enough. Jun 12 2006, 11:40 PM Geekkake I agree with Backgammon on all counts. This is som... Jun 12 2006, 11:44 PM emo samurai My only problem is he's boring. Ex-military, l... Jun 13 2006, 12:19 AM Lagomorph My suggestions, Make him an elf adept, with powerp... Jun 13 2006, 01:09 AM Dudukain Funny you should mention "classic newbie mist... Jun 13 2006, 01:15 AM emo samurai Dude, just do what I do, start your own game and m... Jun 13 2006, 02:05 AM Dudukain Okay, after looking at your suggestions and critic... Jun 13 2006, 02:43 AM Squinky I don't see any ware listed, so how did he get... Jun 13 2006, 02:58 AM Jaid the 3 IPs are from an adept power, if i'm not ... Jun 13 2006, 03:11 AM Squinky Wow, I totally missed that. My bad. It does add re... Jun 13 2006, 03:14 AM ornot I'm not surprised you missed it. There is no M... Jun 13 2006, 04:02 AM Tetsuyama To follow on Squinky's point, if you drop your... Jun 13 2006, 04:40 AM Glyph Even with a Magic of 6, I'm getting:
30 point... Jun 13 2006, 08:06 AM Witness QUOTE (Backgammon) [*] Spirit Bane(Watcher) spirit... Jun 13 2006, 08:27 AM UndeadPoet QUOTE (Witness @ Jun 13 2006, 03:27 AM) QUOTE... Jun 13 2006, 09:39 AM Dudukain QUOTE (Glyph) Even with a Magic of 6, I'm gett... Jun 13 2006, 03:10 PM wavydavy QUOTE (Dudukain @ Jun 13 2006, 10:10 AM) QUOT... Jun 13 2006, 03:20 PM Dudukain Oh joy. YES!!!! Jun 13 2006, 03:36 PM UndeadPoet I suggest to remove the 4 points in dodge. Every s... Jun 13 2006, 04:13 PM Dudukain Okay, I edited him. Jun 13 2006, 04:52 PM UndeadPoet Note that you should have unarmed combat to defend... Jun 13 2006, 05:00 PM Dudukain Switched Armorer to Unarmed Combat. Jun 13 2006, 05:14 PM coolgrafix QUOTE (UndeadPoet) I suggest to remove the 4 point... Jun 13 2006, 05:39 PM UndeadPoet Dodge is only required for the full dodge action. ... Jun 13 2006, 06:06 PM coolgrafix I was very recently caught out in the open with mu... Jun 13 2006, 06:26 PM Squinky Yeah I agree that you don't need dodge. But, y... Jun 13 2006, 06:42 PM UndeadPoet QUOTE (coolgrafix @ Jun 13 2006, 01:26 PM) I ... Jun 13 2006, 07:23 PM Cang 6 languages... wow. Even linguists in the military... Jun 13 2006, 07:53 PM Dudukain I don't see anything in the rulebook about usi... Jun 13 2006, 08:10 PM coolgrafix QUOTE (Dudukain @ Jun 13 2006, 03:10 PM) I do... Jun 13 2006, 08:23 PM coolgrafix Note that Gymnastics Dodge is only an option when ... Jun 13 2006, 08:38 PM bigdrewp QUOTE (Squinky)I wonder where they have dodging sc... Jun 13 2006, 08:49 PM X-Kalibur Honestly, I don't find the Spirit Bane: Watche... Jun 13 2006, 08:54 PM Ophis QUOTE (coolgrafix) Note that Gymnastics Dodge is o... Jun 14 2006, 07:52 AM coolgrafix All shadowrunners are not gymnasts. It's not D... Jun 14 2006, 02:44 PM coolgrafix Let me see if I can summarize this succinctly and ... Jun 14 2006, 02:51 PM Ophis Most runners find jumping a useful thing to do. Th... Jun 14 2006, 02:54 PM Squinky QUOTE (coolgrafix) All shadowrunners are not gymna... Jun 14 2006, 04:15 PM coolgrafix QUOTE (Squinky) Everyone having some tumbling abil... Jun 14 2006, 04:34 PM coolgrafix It seems strange that jumping in SR4 is based on G... Jun 14 2006, 04:47 PM Glyph I don't know how "pure" of an adept ... Jun 15 2006, 05:29 AM Dudukain No bioware, and can we get back on the topic of my... Jun 18 2006, 03:52 PM Dudukain Dudukain's background:
Born in Atlanta in the... Jun 20 2006, 12:30 AM Grogs Hey, cool. I've got a character with a former... Jun 20 2006, 01:41 AM coolgrafix Perhaps he's been away from DocWagon too long ... Jun 20 2006, 03:02 AM coolgrafix QUOTE (Grogs) The biggest thing that stands out to... Jun 20 2006, 03:09 AM coolgrafix QUOTE (Dudukain) Born in Atlanta in the CAS in 204... Jun 20 2006, 03:12 AM Grogs QUOTE (coolgrafix)Perhaps he's been away from ... Jun 20 2006, 03:29 AM Glyph Did he actually convince his team? It sounded mor... Jun 20 2006, 03:34 AM coolgrafix From The Neo-Anarchists Guide to Real Life (from S... Jun 20 2006, 03:56 AM coolgrafix Additionally on this point, NAGRL page 98 lists an... Jun 20 2006, 04:04 AM Dudukain Whoops, It's the second character that was the... Jun 22 2006, 09:20 PM Geekkake And here I was, hoping these ridiculous dedicated ... Jun 22 2006, 09:25 PM
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