REQ: Build advice for a magician, self explanatory Options

[Eleazar]

Here is what I have so far.

Fredericke
Dwarf Magician

***********THE CHARACTER HAS BEEN UPDATED A 2ND TIME*********

---ATTRIBUTES---
Body: 5
Agility: 2
Reaction: 3
Strength: 3
Charisma: 2
Intuition: 4
Logic: 5
Willpower: 6

Edge: 1
Magic: 5
Initiative: 7
Essence: 6

---Knowledge Skills---
English : N
Japanese (Speak) : 4

Magic Background (Path of the Mage) : 4
Spirits : 2
Black Markets (Magical Items) : 4
Security Procedures : 4
Safe Houses (Runner Safe Houses) : 3
Lone Star : 4

---Active Skills---
Assensing : 4
Spellcasting (Manipulation) : 6
Perception (Visual) : 3
Counterspelling (Combat spells) : 4
Con : 2
Etiquette : 1
Computer : 1
Data Search : 1
Summoning (Air Spirits): 4

---Qualities---
Raven Mentor Spirit -5BP
Magician -15BP
Sensitive System +15BP
Bad Luck +20 BP


---Tech Gear---
Commlink : CMT Clip
Sim Module
Trodes
Tag Eraser
Commlink : Renraku Sensei
Response Upgrade (5)
OS : Vector Xim
System UPGRADE (Rating 5)
Firewall UPGRADE (Rating 5)
Edit (Rating 5)
Browse (Rating 5)
Analyze (Rating 5)
Mapsoft (Rating 5)
Datasoft (Rating 5)

---Equipment---
Mage Sight Goggles
+Flare Compensation
+Image Link
+Vision Enhancement (Rating 3)
+Vision Magnification
Earbud
+ Audio Enhancement (Rating 3)
+ Select Sound Filter (Rating 3)
Plasteel Restraint
Plasteel Restraint
Stimulant Patch (Rating 6)
Stimulant Patch (Rating 6)
Stimulant Patch (Rating 3)
Fake Sin (Rating 4)
Fake Sin (Rating 1)
Fake Sin (Rating 1)
Magical Lodge Materials (Rating 6)
Combat Fetishe
Healing Fetishe
Sustaining Focus (Rating 3)
Detection Fetishe
Manipulation Fetishe
Biomonitor

---Spells---
Stunball
Heal
Increase Reflexes
Improved Invisibility
Physical Mask
Physical Barrier
Deflection
Fashion
Levitate
Mind Probe
Influence
Stunbolt

---Contacts---
Naomi (Talislegger) (L:4 C:4)

---Lifestyle---
LOWx3

---Vehicles---
Suzuki Mirage (Racing Bike)

---BP Allocation---
Metatype 25
Attributes 180
Special Attributes 40
Skills 112
Gear 14
Resources 36
Contacts 8