Character Critique: Haywire, Combat Mage build Options

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This is a conversion of an old SR2/3 character.

Haywire

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Haywire's background was that she was part of Ares' KE Bug Hunting squads, and left the corp after an operation went horribly wrong - she's persuaded it was sabotaged by a superiour to further his own career, and blames the corps in general for such a mentality. So, she received rather specialised and rushed training by KE to hunt insect spirits, not much law enforcement or other military training.

Haywire in a jungle

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Game Stats: Haywire

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Game Stats: Haywire

Attributes: (240 BP)
Body:       4    30    
Agility:    4    30
Reaction:   4    30
Strength:   2    10
Charisma:   4    30
Intiution:  3    20
Logic:      4    20
Willpower:  4    30
Essence:    5.04
Magic:      4.0  40
Initiative: 7
Edge:       2


Skills: (134 BP)

Active Skills:          Rating     BP:    Notes
Spellcasting (Combat):    5        22    
Counterspelling:          3        12    
Astral Combat:            3        12    
Pistols (Semi-autom.):    3        14    
Automatics (Assault):     3        14
Dodge:                    3        12        
Perception:               1        4
Pilot Ground:             1        4

Skill Groups:     Rating    BP:    Notes                
Conjuring:          3       30    
Influence:          1       10

Knowledge Skills: (21 free BP)
Insect Spirits             3
Magic Theory               2
Rock Music                 2
Ares Corp Politics         2
Motorbikes                 2
Corporate Security Tactics 2
Magic Background           2

Languages:    Rating    Notes:
English        N        Native language
Spanish        3
Japanese       3


Qualities: (+10 BP)

Positive Qualities:
Magician    15

Negative Qualities:
Sinner    5
Moderate Addiction (Alcohol): 10
Spirit Bane: Insect Spirits: 10


Gear: (19 BP)

Name:        Notes:           Cost:
Survival Knife                   50
Ares Monofilamentsword          750
Stunbaton                       400
Shock Glove                     200

Ares Predator IV                350
+5 clips of regular ammo        175
+5 clips of ExEx ammo           800
+Silencer                       200
+Quick-Draw Holster             100
+Concealed Holster              100
Ares Alpha                    1’700
+ Gas-Vent System 3             400
+ Shock Pad                      50
+5 clips of regular ammo        420
+2 clips of ExEx ammo           840
+ 5 HE minigrenades             225      
+ 5 Fragmentation minigrenades  175
+ 5 Thermal smoke minigrenades  175
+ 5 RAID Gas minigrenades       250

Camouflage Suit (8/6)         1’200
+ Full Set of PPP (+2/+6)     1’000
Form-Fitting Body Armor (4/1)   900

SIM Module                      100
+ Skinlink                       50
Iris Orb O/S                  1’000

Medkit-6                        600

Suzuki Mirage                 6’500

                             18’710

Skillsofts:
Blades-2                      6’000
Athletics-2                   6’000
Infiltration-2                6’000

Fake SIN-4                    3’000
Middle Lifestyle              5’000

                             26’000

Total:                       44’710

Cyberware (all Alphaware):
Name:        Notes:                                  Essence:        Cost:
Commlink     Transsys Avalon (Response 4, Signal 4)     0.16         14’000
Cybereyes-2    
(Low-Light Vision, Flare Comp, Smartlink, Vision
Enhancer-2,Image Link, Eye Recording Unit)              0.24        18’000
Skillwires-3                                            0.48        12’000
Skillwire Expert system                                 0.08         6’000
            
Total:                                                  0.96        50’000


Spells (15 BP):    Cost:
Heal
Mana Barrier
Mana Static
Slaughter Insect Spirits
Manabolt


Contacts: (3 BP)
KE Sergeant (Infkuence 2/ Loyality 1)

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