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I am new to Shadowrun and my local group is going to start playing the game soon using SR 4e. I determined my niche in the group would be that I would make a character that took care of our need for a breaking and entering specialist (covert-ops), but I also wanted to play a character that would be a martial arts melee MASTER and that could shoot some when needed. My first attempt at this character contains a mistake that I will be fixing soon. I took a few specialties and skills that were part of a couple skill groups I had taken. I know now that this is forbidden by the game rules and can only be done when you are actually playing the game, earning karma. I will rectify this in the near future. I also was going to make this guy an adept as well at first but thought I wouldn't be able to afford the points to do so. So I would be open to another version of this character that was an adept build as well. I would be honored if anyone could help me either make this character much better to better achieve the goals have stated previously in being a melee monster covert-ops specialist or someone that would be willing to rebuild this character all-together with those concepts in mind. I am enlisting your expertise and would appreciate any feedback to help me out. Thanks in advance!
Metatype: Human Bod: 3 Agi: 5 Rea: 5 (7) Str: 3 Cha: 2 Int: 4 Log: 3 Will: 3 Initiative: 9 Edge: 4 Essence: 3 (-3 due to Wired Reflexes 2) Magic: 0 Resonance: 0 Skills -Close Combat skill group (Blades (+2 spec), Clubs, Unarmed (+2 spec)): 4 -Dodge: 3 -Stealth skill group (Palming, Infiltration (+2 spec), Shadowing, Disguise): 4 -Perception: 2 -Etiquette: 1 -Athletics skill group (Climbing, Gymnastics, Running, Swimming): 2 Qualities -SINner -Weak Immune System -Allergy (uncommon/mild)=platinum -Martial Arts (Ninjutsu): 2 advantages [+1 die to Infiltration checks, +1 die to Dodge] -Martial Arts (Tae Kwon Do): 1 advantage [+1 die to Unarmed Combat when attacking multiple targets] -Martial Arts Maneuvers: Disarm, Finishing Move, Iaijutsu, Full Offense, Multi-Strike, Two Weapon Style, Off-Hand Training, Throw -Wanted -Lost Loved One (sister) -Sensei (Ninjutsu) -Toughness (+1 dice poll to Body when making damage resistance tests) -Will to Live (+2 boxes to damage overflow) Knowledge Skills -History (American): 3 -Security Procedures (Saeder Krupp): 4 -Security Design (Corporate): 5 -Seattle Street Gangs: 3 -Literature (American): 4 -Biology: 2 Gear -Wired Reflexes 2 - core book -2 Vibro Blades: Swords - core book -SA Puzzler light pistol - Arsenal pg 21 -HK Urban Combat SMG - Arsenal book -300 rounds of Frangible bullets - Arsenal pg 35 -Chameleon Suit - 4e core book pg 316 -Commlink (Sony Emperor) - 4e core book pg 319 -Biometric Reader - 4e core book pg 319 -Grapple Gun - 4e core book pg 328 -Goggles (Ultra Sound, Vision Magnification, Image Link, Low Light)- 4e core book pg 324 -1 EMP Grenade - Arsenal pg 57 -Autopicker - 4e core book pg 327 -Cellular Glove Molder - 4e core book pg 327 -Chisel - 4e core book pg 327 -Keycard Copier - 4e core book pg 327 -Lockpick Set - 4e core book pg 327 -Miniwelder - 4e core book pg 327 -Monofilament Chainsaw - 4e core book pg 327 -Shock Gloves - 4e core book pg 305-306 -3 Smoke Grenades - 4e core book pg 314 -Smart Pack - Arsenal pg 62 Contacts 1) Saeder Krupp middle executive: Connection 4/Loyalty 4 2) Seattle Street Ganger: Connection 2/Loyalty 2 Condition Tracks Stun: 6 Physical: 6 Cash: 1,300 Lifestyle: Middle (5,000/month) - 4e core book pg 261 |
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daddystabz Help me make a better character Jun 5 2009, 06:54 AM
Glyph Some general advice off the top of my head:
You d... Jun 5 2009, 07:18 AM
Bob Lord of Evil Unlike so many others on here I am not a SR4 guru,... Jun 5 2009, 07:43 AM
Octopiii For what you want your guy able to do, you're ... Jun 5 2009, 08:52 AM
daddystabz QUOTE (Octopiii @ Jun 5 2009, 04:52 AM) F... Jun 5 2009, 09:48 AM
Mäx QUOTE (daddystabz @ Jun 5 2009, 12:48 PM)... Jun 5 2009, 10:36 AM
Ard3 Just quick note, you cant have Critical Strike wit... Jun 5 2009, 09:27 AM
Stingray QUOTE (daddystabz @ Jun 5 2009, 09:54 AM)... Jun 5 2009, 10:14 AM
Doc Chaos If I see this correct, you are missing an operatin... Jun 5 2009, 11:02 AM
daddystabz What about the astronomical cost of the cyberware ... Jun 5 2009, 08:04 PM
Mäx QUOTE (daddystabz @ Jun 5 2009, 11:04 PM)... Jun 5 2009, 08:53 PM
Octopiii QUOTE (daddystabz @ Jun 5 2009, 12:04 PM)... Jun 5 2009, 10:32 PM
daddystabz QUOTE (Octopiii @ Jun 5 2009, 05:32 PM) I... Jun 5 2009, 11:08 PM
Octopiii QUOTE (daddystabz @ Jun 5 2009, 03:08 PM)... Jun 5 2009, 11:39 PM
Shinobi Killfist QUOTE (Octopiii @ Jun 5 2009, 07:39 PM) T... Jun 5 2009, 11:45 PM
Octopiii QUOTE (Shinobi Killfist @ Jun 5 2009, 04... Jun 5 2009, 11:59 PM
Shinobi Killfist My biggest problem with Octopii's build is the... Jun 5 2009, 09:41 PM
Doctrine I actually just built a 500BP B&E guy for a hi... Jun 5 2009, 10:25 PM
Zenyen You guys realize he will need to spend at least 40... Jun 5 2009, 10:43 PM
daddystabz QUOTE (Zenyen @ Jun 5 2009, 05:43 PM) You... Jun 5 2009, 11:06 PM
Zenyen QUOTE (daddystabz @ Jun 5 2009, 04:06 PM)... Jun 5 2009, 11:10 PM
Octopiii QUOTE (Zenyen @ Jun 5 2009, 03:10 PM) Ah,... Jun 5 2009, 11:40 PM
Shinobi Killfist QUOTE (Octopiii @ Jun 5 2009, 07:40 PM) ?... Jun 5 2009, 11:46 PM
daddystabz So what I am asking is if there are errors in Ocot... Jun 6 2009, 12:07 AM
Octopiii The only thing that needs to be changed is drop cr... Jun 6 2009, 12:35 AM
daddystabz QUOTE (Octopiii @ Jun 5 2009, 07:35 PM) T... Jun 6 2009, 12:51 AM
daddystabz Infiltration dp: (7 agility + 4 infiltration + 2 A... Jun 6 2009, 10:10 PM
Octopiii I changed them with everything else. You have two... Jun 6 2009, 10:13 PM
daddystabz Would you like to take a try Octopii at making thi... Jun 10 2009, 01:33 AM
Cthulhudreams Make him an Orc by taking 10 points from strength ... Jun 10 2009, 02:00 AM
daddystabz You want to try adapting your changes to Octopii... Jun 10 2009, 02:47 AM
Cthulhudreams Not really, takes ages to punch it into a characte... Jun 10 2009, 03:32 AM
daddystabz I would love to get my dice pool for unarmed up to... Jun 10 2009, 05:58 AM
Shinobi Killfist QUOTE (daddystabz @ Jun 10 2009, 12:58 AM... Jun 10 2009, 06:31 AM
Dumori Ill get in to this soon see if I spot any thing. Jun 10 2009, 06:19 AM
Octopiii Well, you're not getting 20 die in unarmed and... Jun 10 2009, 06:53 AM
Cthulhudreams You need to know more about your game. ditching at... Jun 10 2009, 08:51 AM
daddystabz What do you mean exactly cthuludreams? Jun 10 2009, 09:13 AM
Cthulhudreams Well, whats the set up. If you go for 20 dice in u... Jun 10 2009, 10:07 AM
daddystabz I will be the covert-ops B&E guy but I also wa... Jun 10 2009, 10:16 AM
Octopiii Oh god, the list again. Tell me again why I need ... Jun 10 2009, 10:17 AM
Cthulhudreams The reason he wants it is because if you've go... Jun 10 2009, 10:47 AM
Octopiii QUOTE (Cthulhudreams @ Jun 10 2009, 03:47... Jun 11 2009, 12:08 AM
daddystabz The main areas of Athletics that would interest me... Jun 10 2009, 10:49 AM
Cthulhudreams Climbing a brick wall imposes a -2 DP penalty, mak... Jun 11 2009, 01:14 AM
daddystabz I just want you all to know I really totally appre... Jun 11 2009, 01:21 AM
daddystabz Here is another experiement: Anyone want to tack a... Jun 13 2009, 01:10 AM
daddystabz I assume it would probably be better for me to bec... Jun 13 2009, 06:16 AM
daddystabz I ended up dropping Etiquette 1 for Climbing 1. I... Jun 13 2009, 10:42 AM
daddystabz I will assume from the lack of responses that I am... Jun 14 2009, 12:12 AM
daddystabz When you said Unarmed skill and had (Ninjutsu) lis... Jun 14 2009, 06:04 AM
Shinobi Killfist QUOTE (daddystabz @ Jun 14 2009, 01:04 AM... Jun 14 2009, 03:04 PM
The Jake On a side note, has anyone considered investing th... Jun 14 2009, 11:57 AM
daddystabz I am focused on two things: 1) Unarmed death machi... Jun 14 2009, 12:08 PM
daddystabz I thought that was the case, Shinobi. Thanks. Jun 14 2009, 03:33 PM
Dumori One thing to conciser is dropping the athletics gr... Jun 14 2009, 05:54 PM
daddystabz I will try to post it up a bit later. Jun 14 2009, 07:03 PM![]() ![]() |
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