Satyr Magician Build Check, Basically, Gearing Him Up... Options

[Bleak]

Well, I managed to find a SR4 game afterall. My GM hasn't decided between BP or Karmagen yet, but I think he's leaning towards BP. Anyway, I've drawn up identical builds in the two and could use some advice for gear and a basic build check. I've read through a few threads here and the basic suggestions are a point of cyber/bioware and/or a Force 4 Power Focus. Is it possible for me to do both? What else should I have?


First of all, here's my build (in BP). I'm still working on background and thus haven't decided on a tradition. If I'm allowed to build a custom one (none of them really fit), I'll probably be going with an Intuition tradition as I imagine my character as, well, intuitive.


BP: 400

Metatype: Satyr (25 BP)

Qualities: Magician (15 BP), Mentor Spirit (5 BP), Restricted Gear (5 BP), Dayjob (+10 BP), In Debt (+10 BP)


Stats: BOD 4 (0 BP), AGI 3 (20 BP), REA 3 (20 BP), STR 3 (0 BP)
CHA 3 (20 BP), INT 5 (40 BP), LOG 3 (20 BP), WIL 5 (40 BP)
ESS 6, MAG 5 [40 BP], INI 8, EDG 3 (20 BP)

Skills: Spellcasting 5 (20 BP)
Summoning 5 (20 BP)
Counterspelling 4 (16 BP)
First Aid 2 (8 BP)
BP: 400

Metatype: Satyr (25 BP)

Qualities: Magician (15 BP), Mentor Spirit (5 BP), Restricted Gear (5 BP), Dayjob (+10 BP), In Debt (+10 BP)


Stats: BOD 4 (0 BP), AGI 3 (20 BP), REA 3 (20 BP), STR 3 (0 BP)
CHA 3 (20 BP), INT 5 (40 BP), LOG 3 (20 BP), WIL 5 (40 BP)
ESS 6, MAG 5 [40 BP], INI 8, EDG 3 (20 BP)

Skills: Spellcasting 5 (20 BP)
Summoning 5 (20 BP)
Gymnastics 1 (10 BP)
Counterspelling 4 (16 BP)
First Aid 2 (8 BP)
Etiquette 1 (4 BP)
Assensing 1 (4 BP)
Perception 1 (4 BP)

Spells: 10 Spells (30 BP)

Knowledges/Languages/Gear/Contacts: 39 BP remaining

If I were to do this with Karmagen, I would have 255 Karma remaining.

Any suggestions? Thanks in advance.