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[Foxx]

I was looking through my old character sheets and came upon an old character of mine. Thinking of putting him into a game as the teams magician should we lack players, I came upon a spell my old GM came up with.

I present it for your preusual and comments to make better. I was originally for Second Edition and now converting it to 4th edition. I have an idea what I want to do but I would like some input.

The Ancient Kodiak
This is a special critter form spell that transforms only bear shamen into an extinct bear known as the Anicent Kodiak. it stood only 5 meters tall and weighted in about 2,000 kg. It's claws were roughly 20 cm long and it had a pair of 60 cm fangs. This formula also tells of the messafe of the Kodiak 'Only you can protect the Forest.'

Type: Physical Range: Limited Target: Self Duration: Sustained Drain: F5

B: 13 A: 3 R: 3 S: 15 C: - I: - W: -
Reach: +2 Qualities: High Pain Tolerance R3

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What you see is what I have been tinkering with already. Input on improves are sought and welcome. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)