critique my character Options

[Big Jim Slade]

I'd like to get some opinions on this build
I created this occult investigator character using 500BP, my original idea was to have a blend of kolchak the nightstalker and harry callahan

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Stats
human magician
B:3 A:4 R:3 S:3 C:4 I:4 L:4 W:4
E:2 M:4

Active skills
Athletics group:1
Conjuring group:3
Spellcasting:3
Counterspelling:3
Assensing:3
Dodge:2
Unarmed combat:3
Pistols:2
Stealth group:2
locksmith:1
Datasearch:3
Influence group:2
Perception:4
Pilot groundcraft:2

knowledge skills
security procedures:3
street drugs:3
magic trids:2
conspiracy theories:4
local area knowledge (seattle):3

Qualities
analytical mind
perceptive(1)
school of hard knocks
bad luck
day job (10 hours)
SINNER

Spells
Mind probe
imp invisibility
stunbolt
lightning bolt
magic fingers
detect life form ex. area

Gear
autopicker (4)
lockpick set
sequencer
maglock passkey (4)
keycard copier
glasses(4) w/
image link
low light
thermographic
flare compensation
earbuds(3)w/
audio enhancement(2)
select sound filter(1)
goggles(6) w/
image link
flare compensation
low light
thermographic
image mag
image enchance(3)
3 micro cameras
3 micro microphones
direction microphone
holo projector
laser microphone (3)
radio signal scanner (3)
tag eraser
20 stealth tags
flashlight
2 plasteel restraints
magical lodge materials (4)

Combat
lined coat w/
concealed holster
gel packs
chemical protection(4)
ruger super warhawk w/
barrel reduction
increased cylinder
personalized grip
custom look
firing selection change SA
50 rounds of normal and gel
25 silver bullets
5 speed loaders


sony emperor w/renraku ichi
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also a mecury comet with gridlink, gridlink override

2 months low lifestyle

Contacts
bartender (L:1 C:2)
fixer (L:1 C:2)
beat cop (L:1 C:2)
talismonger (L:1 C:2)
street snitch (L:1 C:1)
blogger (L:1 C:3)

This post has been edited by Big Jim Slade: Jul 10 2010, 11:07 AM