SR3: The Face, Some constructive criticism please Options

[Iceheart2112]

So there is soon to be a SR3 game in my future, and I was looking forward to playing a Face type character. Someone who can blend in, walk the walk, and tell you the sky is a nice shade of pink believably whilel still being able to provide some support. What I came up with is the following:

Attributes - A, Skills - B, Resources - C, Magic - D, Race - E

Human Face

Body - 4
Quickness - 6
Strength - 4
Intelligence - 5
Charisma - 6
Willpower - 5

Reaction - 5
Essence - 4.23

Active Skills:
-Pistols - 5
-Shotguns - 4
-Unarmed Combat - 4
-Stealth - 4
-Athletics - 4
-Electronics - 4
-Etiquette - 5
-Negotiation (Bargain) - 4(6)
-Interrogation - 3
-Intimidation - 2

Knowledge Skills:
-Criminal Organizations - 3
-Corp Society - 3
-High Society - 3
-Psychology - 3
-Drama/Acting - 2
-Politics - 2
-Lone Star Tactics - 2
-Police/Security Procedures - 2
-Law - 2
-Music (Guitar) - 2(4)

Languages:
-English (R/W) - 4(2)
-Japanese (R/W) - 2(1)
-Sperethiel (R/W) - 2(1)

Cyberware/Bioware: Tailored Pheremones L1, Cyberear Recorder, Cybereye Replacement (Low-light, Image Link, Retinal Clock, Camera), Smartlink-II, Datajack, Head Memory (50mp)

Weapons: Walther PB-120 w/ Ex SL-II, Int. Gas Vent-II, Silencer, Conceal Holster, 50 rds in clips
-Ares Predator III w/ Int. Gas Vent-II, Silencer, Conceal Holster, 60 rds in clips
-Franchi SPAS-22 w/ Gas Vent-IV, Shock Pads, 50 APDS rds

Armor/Gear: Auctioneer Line (Suit Jacket, slacks, hi-collar shirt, long coat), Form Fitting Body Armor (Half-body), Securetech Long Coat, Ordinary clothing, Earbug Cellphone, Pager, NavDat GPS

Contacts: Fixer (L1), Cop (L1), Bartender (L1), Clothier (L1)

Lifestyle: 2 Months Middle, 3 Months Low

Roleplay wise I was looking for something similar to 'Gentleman' Johnny Marcone from the Dresden Files, but with a cyberpunk flair. As for the Guitar skill, I was looking at having a guitar case that held the shotgun (because carrying it around in plain sight isn't the smartest of things) and I could play it as a roleplay/possible cover story if necessary.

So any ideas?

This post has been edited by Iceheart2112: Aug 10 2010, 05:09 AM