Character Critique: Troll Combat Monster / Tank, Improvements? Mistakes? Options

[widdlyskwids]

Ex-boxer cybertroll that can soak and deal damage. I want him to be able to withstand non-magical and non-matrix attacks, although I'd like to slightly improve his ability to fight magic, if you have any ideas. He only has 2 Initiative Passes (Synaptic Boosters) because that's the way my GM wants it.

I want to get Chug to the point where he can just run up to people with his combat axe and cut 'em up, or where he can just full burst fools all day. (Can I do anything beyond getting him a Pain Editor and better armor?)

Recoil compensation improvements? When wielding his Ares Alpha two-handed, he has 13 points of recoil compensation. (3 points for each Cyberarm Gyromount [GM ruled that the bonuses are cumulative], 3 points from Strength, 2 points from the "special chamber design" of the Alpha, 1 point from Shock Pad, and 1 point from the Personalized Grip.)

Am I doing anything wrong in the way I calculated Armor Encumbrance or Recoil Compensation?

I'm sorry if this is the wrong place to ask. I'm new, but I saw that a couple of character critique posts have been made here.

Attributes:

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BOD: 9/10(15)
AGI: 2(7)/5(7)
REA: 4(5)/6(9)
STR: 7(14)/10(15)
CHA: 3/4(6)
INT: 3/5(7)
LOG: 2/5(7)
WIL: 4/6(9)
EDG: 3/6
INI: 8/11(16)
ESS: 2.28

Qualities:

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Positive:
Ambidextrous
High Pain Tolerance (3 ranks)
Magic Resistance 1
Common Sense

Negative:
Bad Luck
Combat Monster

Skills:

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Pilot Ground Craft (REA): 2
Dodge (REA): 3
Intimidation (CHA): 4
Perception (INT): 3
Automatics (AGI): 6
Assault Rifles Specialization
Blades (AGI): 2
Combat Axe Specialization
Heavy Weapons (AGI): 3
Unarmed Combat (AGI): 3
Cyberlimbs Specialization

Cyber:

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Cyberarms:
BOD: 3+0
STR: 3+7
AGI: 3+2
Cyberarm Gyromount (4 Cap.)
Armor Enhancement Rating 2: (4 Cap.)
Agility Enhancement Rating 2: (2 Cap.)
Strength Enhancement Rating 5: (5 Cap.)

Cybertorso: (Capacity 10)
BOD: 3+0
STR: 3+0
AGI: 3+0
Armor Enhancement Rating 2: (4 Cap.)
Internal Air Tank (3 Cap.)
Smuggling Compartment (2 Cap.)
Olfactory Sensor 3 (1 Cap.)

Cyberears Rating 3 (Cap. 12):
Damper (1 Cap.)
Audio Enhancement Rating 3 (3 Cap.)
Implanted Commlink (2 Cap.)
Fairlight Caliban
Novatech Navi
Satellite Link ($500)

Cybereyes (4) (Cap.16) ($1500) (-0.5 ESS)
Smartlink (Cap.3)
Low-Light Vision (Cap.2)
Vision Enhancement (3) (Cap.3)
Vision Magnification (Cap.2)
Ultrasound Sensor (Cap.2)
Protective Covers
Thermographic Vision (Cap.2)
Flare Compensation (Cap.1)

Weapons:

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Combat Axe
lvl.2 Custom Look. (Think D&D Greataxe)
Personalized Grip

Ares Alpha
Ultrasound Smartlink Camera Enhancement
High-Velocity Modification
Drum modification (100)
Shock Pad
Personalized Grip

x2 Steyr TMP
x2 Quickdraw holster
x2 Gas-Vent System 3
x2 External Smartlinks
x2 Personalized Grip

Hardliner Gloves
x2 Flash-Bang Minigrenade
x2 High Explosive Minigrenade
x3 Smoke Minigrenade
x6 Pepper Punch Gas Minigrenade

Armor: 22 / 20 or 27 / 21

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Armor Jacket
Nonconductivity 6 (Stick-n-Shock D:<)
Fire Resistance 6

Form-Fitting Half-Body Suit
Nonconductivity 2
Chemical Protection 4

Helmet
PPP Forearm Guards
PPP Leg and Arm Casings
PPP Shin Guards
PPP Vitals Protector
Dermal Deposits
Armor from Cyberlimb Enhancements
Optional: Ballistic Shield (Sometimes I have him drop a little PPP so he use this and stay unencumbered.)

This post has been edited by widdlyskwids: Dec 5 2010, 12:23 AM