My new character.. tweaking advice, I likes being the scary cute girl in games.. Options

[MortVent]

Not going to post the detail of the background yet, some of it is in motion based on tweaking. I know it's a suboptimal build in many ways.. but meant to be a kid (teen) found and trained by her mentor who disappeared during a run and now she's looking for them. Mainly looking at the powers/qualities (been awhile since I played adepts)

400BP

Metatype - Elf (30) + Drake (65)

Attributes (170)
B 3
A 4
R 4
S 3
C 4
I 3
L 3
W 4

Magic 6 (65) [Yeah I know pricy at start]
Edge 2 (10)

Qualities (-30)
Adept (5)
SINner I (-5) [UCAS Orphanage raised and uses it on her commlink for now. Has it's pluses and drawbacks. Is known as a drake... which is one drawback]
Lost loved one (-5) [Mentor]
Indebt I (-5) [Owes fixer for helping her get started in Seattle]
Phobia: Moderate, Uncommon (-10) [Great Dragons, based on what she's learned about how they view drakes]
Prejudice: Outspoken, specific (-10) [still working on who, but something that will come up in play; leaning towards technomancers due to media portrayal during emergence]

Active skills (86) [focused training by mentor on her strengths]
Assensing 3
Astral combat 2 [taught the basics]
Computer 2 [she always liked playing on them]
Dodge 4
Etiquette 3 [polite and reserved]
Perception 3
Unarmed Combat 4
* Natural weapons +2 [claws/bite]

Knowledge skills (18 free)
LG - english N
LG - Japanese 3
LG - Sperethial 3
Computer Games 3
Industrial Music 3
Local Clubs 3
Magical Background 2
Meditation techniques 1

Contacts:
Fixer 2/2 [mentor's fixer]

Adept powers: [Intended to enhance her drake form more than the metahuman one]
Combat Sense 2 [better defense]
Critical Strike 3 [Hit a little harder]
Improved Reflexes 2 [Speed]
Mystic Armor 2 [defense increase]
Penetrating Strike 3 [gives her claws/bite some AP!]

Gear:
1mth Squatter lifestyle
Backpack [can stuff all she owns/needs in and shift. Usually keeps a couple sets of spare flats in it or salvation army clothing. cheap/disposable outfits]
Lined Coat (6/4) [Easy to slip off before shifting, worn over flats or cheap clothing]
Sony emperor commlink w/renraku Ichi OS (R 2/ sig 3/ Sys 2 /FW 2) [Cheap comm, not really for running]
*std sim module
*Basic user suite (Analyze 2, browse 2, command 1, edit 2)
* 4 VR games
* 50 Virtual surround music chips (industrial punk/rock music)
* Wall space ARE software
Trodes
Subvocal Microphone [or drake form trodes]
Ar gloves
Rtg 2 Goggles w/ Image link, Flare comp
Rtg 1 Headphones
Rtg 6 Respirator [combined with goggles = instant disguise]
2 rtg 6 stimpactchs
Trama patch
Certified credstick