Help me with my weapon (and/or build) choices!, very munchy Troll sammy build Options

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First off don't whine about his munchiness, I'm going for that for a special reason. If you see something wrong please point it out <WITH THE PAGE NUMBER AND BOOK!>. If you got ideas for a better start lets hear um. No adepts or magic please

Edges:

Toughness - 3
Bonus attribute - 2 (BOD) (can only choose 1 attrib, and only once)
Quickhealer - 2

Flaws:

Dependant +3
Hunted +4

Priority choices:
A- Money: 1 Million
B- Attribute 27
C- Troll
D- Skills 30

Strength: 6 (10)/ 15
Quickness: 6 (5)/ 9
Body: 7 (12)/ 15 [17] +1 dermal +1 toughness
Intelligence: 7 (5)/ 7
Willpower: 1
Charisma: 2 (0)

Reaction: 8 (10)
Combat Pool: 8
Initiative: 3d6 + 10

Other special notes:
+1 body from toughness for damage resists
+1 dermal
+1 reach
+2 to healing/biotech checks from Quickhealer
+3d6 to athletics (sythacardium/enhanced articulation)
+1d6 to task pool (for knowledge skills)

Cyberware:
1. Titanium bone lacing (+2 body, +1 ballistic +1 impact)
(str+4 unarmed blows) 75k 2.25 essence cost
2. Smartlink 2 ,deltaware .25 essence 32k
3. Cybereyes (2k) w/ electronic mag 3 (11k) + w/ flare compensation (2K), thermographic (3K), low-light (3k) and protective covers ($500) (21.5k total) .3 essence
Total Essence 2.8 Total: $128,500

Bioware:
Platelet Factory (30k) .4 bdy, -1 from physical or mental Damage
Symbiotes lvl 3 (60k) 1.0 bdy, 50% Heal time
Synthacardium Lvl 2, (15k) .3 bdy, +2d6 to athletics and heart tests
Orthoskin Lvl 3 (100k) 1.5 bdy, +1 ballistic +2 impact
Suprathyroid Gland (50k) 1.4 bdy, +1 reaction, strength, body, quickness
Cerebral Booster Lvl 2 (110k) .8 bdy, +2 intelligence, + 1d6 task pool for int
Synaptic Accelerator Lvl 2 (200k) 1.6 bdy, + 2d6 initiative
Enhanced Articulation (40k) .6 bdy, +1 reaction, +1 die for active skills
Muscle Augmentation Lvl 4 (180k) 3.2 bdy, +4 quickness + 4 strength
Total Body Cost 10.8 Total Cost $785,000
Total Cost of both Cyberware and Bioware = $913,500

Money left $86500

Armors:

Normal daily armor (the default): 10b/9i

Forearm guards (0/1) $250
form fitting body armor level 3 (4/1), $500
secure long coat, black Italian leather style (4/2, +50% concealability) $650
coveralls, heavy (4/4) $1000

For social/formal business: 10b/6i

Great coat line (4/2) $2k
Armante' Dallas line (double breasted jacket, vest, slacks, shirt) 4/2 $2250
Form fitting body armor level 3 (4/1)


Weapons:
· Custom (+750) Combat Axe (StrS, +2 reach) $750 ($1500)
· Custom (+1200) Ranger-X bow (Str+4M) $1200 for str 10 w/ bow mount (+100) and external smartgun 2 link (+800) ($3500 total)
w/ 20 arrows $200

· (x2) Custom ($1k) Ruger Thunderbolt 12S ($1k), integral smartgun 2 ($400) and gas vent 4 ($1k) concealable, quickdraw holster ($150) ($3,550 total each) note: special burst fire rules apply, 4 points total RC (P&T permit +100 x2) *worn under arms
· Custom (+1k) Franchi SPAS-22 , 10Df ($1k) +gas vent 4(+1k) + shock pad (+200) folding stock, foregrip, underbarrel weight and retractable bayonet (GM allowing a custom 3 in 1 piece for 1k> (+$1000), +internal smartgun link, + sling (+$10) ($4210 total) loaded w/ buckshot, 8 points total RC, Choke rating of a 5 *worn on the back via a sling
· Custom (+300) Remington roomsweeper ($300) with smartgun 2 link ($450) and concealable, quickdraw holster (+150) ($1200 total) buckshot, choke rating of a 2 *worn in small of the back (P&T permit +30 x2)


Skills:

Active skills:

Edged weapons (Axes): 5 (7)
Unarmed attack (kenpo): 5 (7)
Pistols: 6
Projectile weapons (pullbows): 5 (7)
Biotech: 6

Knowledge skills:

Gang Identification: 4
Police hangouts: 4
Police procedures: 4
Security procedures: 4
Gunsmithing:4
Fence hotspots: 4
Black market prices: 4
Cybertechnology: 4
Car theft: 3


Language skills:
English:4
English (r/w):2
Spanish:2
Spanish(r/w):1

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