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Fyndhal
post Aug 30 2013, 12:53 AM
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Hey, all. Starting in my first 5e game soon and wanted to have folks take a look at the mechanics of the character I've put together. He's a Cat Shaman who minors as a Face. Any suggestions on ways to improve on the basic theme or, more importantly, are there any big mistakes I made?

Priorities:
Skills C
Stats B
Magic A
Race D
Resources E

Race: Elf Type: Magician
Race Bonus: Low-Light Vision

Player Name: Celondon
Character Name: Jerry Driver
Street Name/s: Lynx
Size, weight, phsical details:

Karma (total earned) : 0 Account 1: 125
Karma (unspent) : 0 Account 2:
Street Cred : 0 Account 3:
Notoriety : 0
Public Awareness : 0

Attributes Rating Modified Rating
Body (1/6) 3 3
Agility (2/7) 3 3
Reaction (1/6) 3 3
Strength (1/6) 1 1
Willpower (1/6) 5 5
Logic (1/6) 4 4
Intuition (1/6) 4 4
Charisma (3/8) 8 8

Special Attributes Rating Modified Rating
Edge 2 -
Initiative 7 7
Initiative Dice 1d6
Resonance
Magic 6 6
Inititation Grade 0 -
Essence 6.000 -

Attribute-Only Tests
Composure: 13
Judge Intentions: 12
Memory: 9
Lifting/Carrying: 4
Base carrying cap: 15kg
Physical Monitor Boxes: 10
Stun Monitor Boxes: 11

Limits Limit modified Limit
Physical 3 3
Mental 6 6
Social 9 9

Positive Qualities Rating
Focused Concentration 3
Mentor: Cat
Spirit Affinity: Beast

Negative Qualities
Low Pain Tolerance
Incompetant: Firearms
Distinctive Style
Prejudiced (common/biased -- Trolls)

Group Skills Rating Modified Rating
Influence 2
-- Etiquette 2
-- Leadership 2
-- Negotiation 2

Skills Rating
Alchemy 1 (Karma)
Arcana 3
Assensing 4
Astral Combat 1 (Karma)
Binding 5 (Magic A)
Con 6
Perception 2 (Karma)
Sneaking 3 (5 -- Totem)
Summoning 5 (Magic A)
Gymnastics 1 (Karma)
Counterspelling 6
Spellcasting 6

Knowledge Skills
English N
Current Fashion 3
Magical Communities 3
Magical Security 3
Nightclubs 3
Sperethiel 3
Spirit Theory 1

Spells
Agony
Chaotic World
Increase Reflexes
Physical Mask
Trid Phantasm
Stunbolt
Mindlink
Heal
Improved Invisibility
Chaotic World (Alchemy)

Contacts
Name Type Rating Loyalty
Talismonger 3 3
Police Detective 3 3
Fixer 3 3
Mob Lieutenant 3 3
Security Hacker 3 3

Equipment Rating Additional Info
Armored Jacket (Armor Rating 12)
Renraku Sensei Commlink
Stylish Eyeglasses 4 Double Cost for Style Points
- Aug: Image Link, Flare, Thermo, Enhance 1 Availability 8
Earbuds
- Aug: Spatial Recognition, Enhancement 1
Gas Mask
Gloves, AR
Platinum Credstick
Fake License: Magic Use 4
Fake Sin 4
Magical Lodge Materials 5
Reagents: 50 Drams

Karma Use:
10 Resources
6 Contacts
10 Edge > 2
10 Skills
13 Positive Qualities
-24 Negative Qualities

EDIT: Modified version based on feedback so far. Changed Magic C to Magic A, Changed Skills A to Skills C, changed some Qualities, Dropped one off INT and added it to AGI.
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- Fyndhal   [5e] Mage/Face Character   Aug 30 2013, 12:53 AM
- - Jack VII   - I think you're 2 points shy on contacts. - W...   Aug 30 2013, 02:27 AM
|- - Fyndhal   QUOTE (Jack VII @ Aug 29 2013, 09:27 PM) ...   Aug 30 2013, 02:43 AM
- - Jack VII   I count 46 skills/10 skill group, which is what yo...   Aug 30 2013, 02:54 AM
|- - Fyndhal   QUOTE (Jack VII @ Aug 29 2013, 09:54 PM) ...   Aug 30 2013, 03:21 AM
- - Jack VII   When I counted, all 46 skill points were accounted...   Aug 30 2013, 05:50 AM
|- - Fyndhal   QUOTE (Jack VII @ Aug 30 2013, 12:50 AM) ...   Aug 30 2013, 12:02 PM
- - Shemhazai   Your cat mentor gives you +2 to illusion spells, r...   Aug 30 2013, 02:29 PM
|- - Jack VII   QUOTE (Shemhazai @ Aug 30 2013, 08:29 AM)...   Aug 30 2013, 03:25 PM
||- - Shemhazai   QUOTE (Jack VII @ Aug 30 2013, 10:25 AM) ...   Aug 30 2013, 03:41 PM
||- - Jack VII   QUOTE (Shemhazai @ Aug 30 2013, 09:41 AM)...   Aug 30 2013, 03:49 PM
||- - Shemhazai   QUOTE (Jack VII @ Aug 30 2013, 10:49 AM) ...   Aug 30 2013, 06:51 PM
|- - Fyndhal   QUOTE (Shemhazai @ Aug 30 2013, 10:29 AM)...   Aug 30 2013, 04:26 PM
- - Fyndhal   Based on Feedback, I'm going to restructure th...   Aug 30 2013, 03:51 PM
- - Fyndhal   Updated first post with new version of the charact...   Aug 30 2013, 04:56 PM
- - ElFenrir   I'd be a bit concerned with a 1 Strength and n...   Sep 1 2013, 11:50 AM
|- - Shemhazai   QUOTE (ElFenrir @ Sep 1 2013, 06:50 AM) I...   Sep 1 2013, 01:46 PM
|- - Fyndhal   QUOTE (Shemhazai @ Sep 1 2013, 08:46 AM) ...   Sep 1 2013, 02:22 PM
- - Sendaz   He is a Face, running makes you sweaty and while w...   Sep 1 2013, 12:05 PM
- - Jack VII   Combat Spell Choice: I really think you should alw...   Sep 1 2013, 02:47 PM
- - Shemhazai   You didn't find it helpful to have a spell sus...   Sep 1 2013, 03:17 PM
|- - Tymeaus Jalynsfein   QUOTE (Shemhazai @ Sep 1 2013, 09:17 AM) ...   Sep 1 2013, 04:07 PM
||- - Shinobi Killfist   QUOTE (Tymeaus Jalynsfein @ Sep 1 2013, 12...   Sep 1 2013, 05:36 PM
|- - Fyndhal   QUOTE (Shemhazai @ Sep 1 2013, 10:17 AM) ...   Sep 1 2013, 07:10 PM
|- - Shemhazai   QUOTE (Fyndhal @ Sep 1 2013, 03:10 PM) FC...   Sep 1 2013, 07:31 PM
|- - Fyndhal   QUOTE (Shemhazai @ Sep 1 2013, 03:31 PM) ...   Sep 1 2013, 08:43 PM
|- - Shemhazai   QUOTE (Fyndhal @ Sep 1 2013, 04:43 PM) I ...   Sep 1 2013, 10:22 PM
- - Shinobi Killfist   Yeah the only spells that matter are ones where fo...   Sep 2 2013, 03:54 PM
- - Fyndhal   Thanks for all the suggestions, everyone! He...   Sep 2 2013, 06:26 PM
- - Fyndhal   Focused Concentration costs 4 Karma per Rank and l...   Sep 3 2013, 04:50 PM
- - Shinobi Killfist   Yeah definitely take focused concentration 1 it is...   Sep 4 2013, 05:46 PM


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