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zenpoetsix
post Jan 12 2005, 04:17 PM
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a returning player to my game e-mailed me this character for my approval. it looks interesting but i've never had a character so complex in my game. would you allow it??? she doesn't use edges/flaw but i'm thinking about giving her some since the character is so handicapped. is 6 extra skill points too generous???

Thanks for the feedback:
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Background: Ariel was born into an abusive family, so abusive that the only way for her to survive was her mind had to splinter. She developed M.P.D. (multiple personality disorder), or, as it’s known by its clinical term, disassociate personality disorder. Treatment at a local mental asylum proved unsuccessful, she was discharged after her family’s health care stipend ran out. Rather than return back home, one of her personalities took over and she ran away. She joined a gang, The Screaming Amazons, for survival.

Personality: Ariel is the “whole” personality that is so deeply buried that she hasn’t surfaced since early childhood. Crimson is the protective personality, man-hating and quick to fight. Mercy is the submissive personality, shy and a pacifist. Mercy isn’t aware of Crimson and blacks out when she is dominate. Crimson knows about Mercy and thinks of her of weak. Other personalities may emerge over time.

Priorities:
A: Magical Adept
B: Attributes-27
C: Skills-34 (17/17)
D: Resources 20K
E: Human

Attributes:
Body-6
Quickness-4 (6)*
Strength-4
Intelligence-4
Willpower-5
Charisma-4
Essence-6
Magic-3
Mercy’s Reaction/Initiative-4+1d6
Crimson’s Reaction/Initiative-5 (7) +1d6 (+2d6)
Mercy’s Combat Pool-6, Mercy’s Spell Pool-4
Crimson’s Combat Pool-7

Skills:
Crimson’s Skills: Mercy’s Skills:
Brawling-4 Socery-5
Pistols-5 Conjuring-5
Intimidation-4 Bio-tech-4
Stealth-2 Etiquette-3
-Sneaking-4

Knowledge Skills:
Crimson’s Skills: Mercy’s Skills
Gang identification-3 Medicine-4
Gang turfs-3
The Screaming Amazons politics-4

Language Skills:
Crimson’s Skills Mercy’s Skills
English-2 English-3
-Street Slang-4 French-5

Adept Powers:
Crimson’s Powers Mercy’s Powers
Improved Reflexes-1* Magic Power-3*
Improved Physical Ability: Empathic Sense
-Quickness-2* True Sight-1
Attribute Boost: (Geas: Exclusive to Mercy)
-Strength-2
Improved Sense:
-Night Vision
(Geas: Exclusive to Crimson)

Mercy’s Magic*
Magic Tradition: Street Shaman
-Totem: Mouse (+2 for detection/healing spells, +2 for hearth/field spirits, -2 for combat spells)
Heal-5(exclusive for drain)
Antidote-3
Cure Disease-3
Diagnosis-3
Invisibility-4(exclusive for drain)

Contacts:
The Screaming Amazon gang leader (level 2); bought w/resources
The Screaming Amazon gang member (level 1)
Street Doc (level 1)*
*exclusive to Mercy
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- zenpoetsix   feedback   Jan 12 2005, 04:17 PM
- - Moon-Hawk   Please don't make us re-derive everything that...   Jan 12 2005, 04:28 PM
- - James McMurray   I've toyed with running MPD characters in the ...   Jan 12 2005, 04:29 PM
- - OurTeam   Way cool. It appears to me that the player has don...   Jan 12 2005, 04:33 PM
- - zenpoetsix   thanks for the replies!!! Moon-Hawk: ...   Jan 12 2005, 06:20 PM
- - Mensche   the multiple personalities shouldnt have differene...   Jan 12 2005, 06:28 PM
- - Moon-Hawk   Why not? While it may be more generally true for ...   Jan 12 2005, 06:35 PM
- - Botch   QUOTE (Mensche) the multiple personalities shouldn...   Jan 12 2005, 06:37 PM
- - Jrayjoker   I could see this as a way for Mouse to hide the re...   Jan 12 2005, 06:42 PM
- - Mr.Sinister   Different personalities "come to the surface...   Jan 12 2005, 06:57 PM
- - Jrayjoker   This is starting to remind me of the Flashback cha...   Jan 12 2005, 07:08 PM
- - Jrayjoker   I would let the player choose edges to balance the...   Jan 12 2005, 07:09 PM
- - zenpoetsix   Thanks Jrayjoker!!! the idea that her...   Jan 12 2005, 10:39 PM
- - Jrayjoker   Glad I could help.   Jan 12 2005, 11:50 PM
- - Jrayjoker   Just make sure I get credit on her Character sheet...   Jan 12 2005, 11:51 PM
- - Jrayjoker   Also, keep me informed as to how the character dev...   Jan 12 2005, 11:52 PM
- - Fortune   There is an 'Edit Post' feature, just so y...   Jan 12 2005, 11:55 PM
- - Jrayjoker   I've got my kids all over me, I'm lucky to...   Jan 12 2005, 11:56 PM
- - MagicalGirlPrettyMatt   I played as a shaman with DID/MPD for about a year...   Jan 13 2005, 12:32 AM
- - Jrayjoker   I'd like to see someone RP a MPD character wit...   Jan 13 2005, 12:40 AM
- - MagicalGirlPrettyMatt   Well, I did Arizona/Rebecca/Camiela's personal...   Jan 13 2005, 12:47 AM
- - Frenzy   a few thoughts ... From what I understand (do t...   Jan 13 2005, 05:31 AM


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