Submitted here, for some feedback, The Shadowrun version of The Punisher Options

[HMHVV Hunter]

Alright, ever since I saw "The Punisher" and played the video game, I wanted to create a character like him for Shadowrun. So here he is. Feedback and comments welcome.

I'll put up his back story later; trust me, it won't be a total carbon-copy of Frank Castle's story.

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Name:
Race: Human
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Concept: Vigilante

Build Points (130)
Attributes: 27 (54 points)
Skills: 45 (45 points)
Resources: 1,000,000 nuyen (30 points)
Race: Human (0 points)
Magic: Mundane (0 points)

Attributes (27)
Body: 5
Quickness: 4 (7)
Strength: 4 (7)
Charisma: 4
Intelligence: 5 (6)
Willpower: 5
Essence: 5.04
Bio Index Used: 5.70
Reaction: 4 (6)

Initiative: 4 (6) + 1D6 (3D6)

Dice Pools:
Combat: 7 (9)

Edges/Flaws:
-Bravery (+1)
-Extra Contact (+1)
-Resistance to Toxins (+1)
-Friends in High Places (+2) extra Level 2 contact in important position)
-Will to Live (Level 3) (+3) (3 extra boxes of overflow damage)
-Combat Monster (-1)
-Hunted (-6) (Several organized crime syndicates and gangs)

Contacts
-Chief Dockworker (Level 1)
-Fixer (for shadowruns) (Level 1)
-Private Investigator (Level 1)
-Arms Dealer (Level 2) (10,000 nuyen)
-Bounty Hunter (Level 2) (10,000 nuyen)
-Decker (Level 2) (10,000 nuyen)
-Fixer (for anti-organized crime and anti-gang activities) (Level 2) (10,000 nuyen)
-High-Ranking Lone Star (Seattle Branch) Officer (Level 2)
-Professional News Reporter (Level 2) (10,000 nuyen)
-Redmond Street Doc (Level 2) (10,000 nuyen)
-Snoop (Surveillance Guy) (Level 2) (10,000 nuyen)

Active Skills (45)
Assault Rifles: 6
Athletics: 5
Demolitions: 5
Launch Weapons (Grenade Launchers): 4 (6)
Pistols: 6
Shotguns: 6
Stealth: 6
Unarmed Combat: 6

Knowledge Skills
Criminal Organizations: 5
Gang Identification: 5
Local Neighborhood: 5
Magic: 5
Police Security Procedures: 5

Language Skills
English (R/W): 5 (2)
Italian (R/W): 3 (1)
Japanese (R/W): 3 (1)
Russian (R/W): 3 (1)

Cyberware:
-Cybereyes (with Low-Light, Flare Compensation, and Thermographic Vision) (all alpha-grade) (0.16 Essence) (26,000 nuyen)
-Cyberears (with Dampener, Amplification, and Spatial Recognizer) (all alpha-grade) (0.24 Essence) (24,400 nuyen)
-Internal Transducer (alpha-grade) (0.08 Essence) (4,000 nuyen)
-Smartlink II (with Range Finder) (all alpha-grade) (0.48 Essence) (11,000 nuyen)

Bioware:
-Sleep Regulator (0.30 Bio Index) (20,000 nuyen)
-Synthacardium (Rating 2) (0.30 Bio Index) (15,000 nuyen)
-Cerebral Booster (Rating 1) (0.40 Bio Index) (50,000 nuyen)
-Pain Editor (0.60 Bio Index) (60,000 nuyen)
-Symbiotes (Rating 2) (0.70 Bio Index) (35,000 nuyen)
-Synaptic Accelerator (Rating 2) (1.00 Bio Index) (200,000 nuyen)
-Muscle Augmentation (Rating 3) (1.2 Bio Index) (60,000 nuyen)
-Muscle Toner (Rating 3) (1.2 Bio Index) (75,000 nuyen)


Gear:
Weapons:
-Ares Predator III (with integral Smartlink II; silencer, range-finder, concealable holster, 20 spare clips, 150 rounds of Regular ammo, 150 rounds of EX Explosive ammo) (3,300 nuyen)
-Ares Alpha Assault Rifle (with integral Smartlink II, 2 points of recoil compensation (frame) and underbarrel grenade launcher; Gas Vent IV, range-finder, sling, 20 spare clips, 420 rounds of Regular ammo, 420 rounds of EX Explosive ammo, 80 Offensive High-Explosive mini-grenades) (13,110 nuyen)
-Franchi SPAS-22 (with integral Smartlink II and folding stock (1 point recoil compensation); Gas Vent IV, range-finder, underbarrel weight, sling, 200 rounds of Regular slug ammo, 200 rounds of EX Explosive slug ammo) (4,620 nuyen)
-C-4 (100 kilos; with timer and radio detonator) (8,350 nuyen)

Armor:
-30 sets of Ordinary Clothing (1,500 nuyen)
-Armor Jacket (with Gel Pack modification) (4,500 nuyen)
-Secure Long Coat (650 nuyen)
-Secure Clothing (450 nuyen)
-Combat Vest (190 nuyen)

Surveillance Counter-Measures Gear:
-Bug Scanner (Rating 6) (3,000 nuyen)
-White Noise Generator (Rating 6) (9,000 nuyen)
-Data Encryption System (Rating 6) (6,000 nuyen)
-Dataline Scanner (600 nuyen)

Surveillance Gear:
-Dataline Tap (Rating 6) (6,000 nuyen)
-Micro-Camcorder (2,500 nuyen)
-Micro-Recorder (Rating 6) (3,000 nuyen)
-Tracking Signal (Rating 6) (3,000 nuyen)
-Signal Locator (Standard) (Rating 6) (1,200 nuyen)

Security Gear:
-Chem Sniffer (Doorway) (Rating 5) (100,000 nuyen)
-Cyberware Scanner (Doorway) (Rating 5) (20,000 nuyen)
-Maglock (Rating 6) (600 nuyen)

Misc. Gear:
-10 pistol pouches (80 nuyen)
-10 rifle pouches (110 nuyen)
-20 shotgun pouches (160 nuyen)

Lifestyles:
-Low (apartment on outskirts of Downtown) (10 months prepaid) (10,000 nuyen)
-Squatter (Safehouse in Redmond) (permanent) (10,000 nuyen)
-Squatter (Safehouse in Puyallup) (permanent) (10,000 nuyen)
-Squatter (Safehouse in Bellevue) (permanent) (10,000 nuyen)
-Squatter (Safehouse in Tacoma) (permanent) (10,000 nuyen)
-Squatter (Safehouse in Everett) (permanent) (10,000 nuyen)

Starting Cash: 9,768 + (3D6 x 100) nuyen