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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 208 Joined: 9-October 05 Member No.: 7,827 ![]() |
These are my first two--First a quadriplegic hacker (He is always in the matrix- never stops hacking) Second A Human-Looking,Ork-Poser, Troll, Steet Sam (Basically a Mongelized Look)-Who is Also Good a Disguise {Has the Cross Dressing Ability}- and One Cyber arm Has a Cross Bow and a microwave laser, The other Cyber arm can spray Mace/Peppper Spray and has a Blowtorch in the palm
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Dragon ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 4,589 Joined: 28-November 05 Member No.: 8,019 ![]() |
How can any troll look like a human without losing, like, all his stat bonuses?
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 208 Joined: 9-October 05 Member No.: 7,827 ![]() |
well at the worst he just does't have any horns or dermalplateing(or the dermal deposits are lessened) but he is still troll sized (so in tweaking he could be a giant metavariant), so he just decided to get some fake tusks and be a ork posser (and he likes to cross dress too)
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Dragon ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 4,589 Joined: 28-November 05 Member No.: 8,019 ![]() |
Is there anything more to the character's personality besides cross-dressing and tusks?
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#5
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 208 Joined: 9-October 05 Member No.: 7,827 ![]() |
so course an other mongrelization character could be an Elf looking, Human, Troll Poser (Mongrelization should be rare-This is when a character of one Metatype looks like another Metatype but Poses as a Third Metatype
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 135 Joined: 8-November 05 From: Toronto, Ontario - Canada Member No.: 7,934 ![]() |
@emo samurai: Does there need to be? I mean, a flamingly gay troll is an awsome character concept, and an easy one to write a history for. For extra fun, make him a cat shaman.
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Dragon ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 4,589 Joined: 28-November 05 Member No.: 8,019 ![]() |
.........
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#8
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 208 Joined: 9-October 05 Member No.: 7,827 ![]() |
Is A Kidnap/Extraction/Grab-up specialist-Likes to use Disguises (Doesn't just cross dress for fun) The others in his crew are the human Male Quadriplagic Hacker- A Militiaite Female Dwarf Sorcery Adapt (Like the Pinkskins but MUCH more militant and they admit ALL RACES AND METATYPES-basicly just Very anti Corp-Cort and UN[unless you count the PINKSKIN MAFIA but that is another story] (AND THEY REMEMBER WACO AND MOVE!!!!!!! ;) ) and also the FIRST WINDLING/SPRITE TECHNOADAPT (just a SR4 version of the oft-therorized but rarely used O-RIGGER) [These are ment to be very experimental characters], {and I have more ideas :rotfl: }
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 208 Joined: 9-October 05 Member No.: 7,827 ![]() |
He isn't limited to being GAY- he is more METASEXUALL- he will basicly do it with almost ANYTHING, and all his cyberarm weppons are quiet for extractions
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 208 Joined: 9-October 05 Member No.: 7,827 ![]() |
didn't see the cat shaman part- he isn't a magic user he is a Street Sam
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Freelance Elf ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 7,324 Joined: 30-September 04 From: Texas Member No.: 6,714 ![]() |
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 208 Joined: 9-October 05 Member No.: 7,827 ![]() |
you responded to emo samuri, Critas- can I at least get some real input?
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Freelance Elf ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 7,324 Joined: 30-September 04 From: Texas Member No.: 6,714 ![]() |
The quadripegic hacker is nothing new or exciting. There've been wheelchair-bound deckers in novels stretching back...well...pretty far. And, similarly, there've been plenty of crippled/handicapped/whatever-term-you-like decker and rigger player characters running around for quite some time. Nothing terribly shocking or clever to it. Sorry. Oh, hey, wait. I just said they were "running" around. Woo, I kill me. Anyways, moving on:
As far as the other, it's such a mish-mash of really weird shit I'm largely incapable of commenting on it without remarkable vulgarity being involved, of the level that gets me those oh-so-friendly PM's from Bull with subject lines like "time out" or "warning" or "you've been a naughty puppy." But, since you specifically asked for me to comment, I'll do my very best to give some input and keep Bull of my back. No promises. Crossbows and flamethrowers and shit built into arms are bad enough. A human-looking ork-poser troll is...like...calling something a housecat-looking jackal-poser timberwolf (see how silly that sentence looks?). Then, on top of having a crossbow and a flamethrower in his arms, for some silly reason he's a cross dresser (to make him even more subtle and covert, for extractions!). Picture that, in your head. Picture some dude that's about four feet taller and three feet wider than you, IRL, but is somehow supposed to be "human looking" despite all that. Give him tusks, now. Give him cyberarms, now. Put a crossbow in one arm, a flamethrower in the other, and toss in a lasergun and a mace-sprayer for good measure. Now put him in a dress. What about that says "covert operative/subtle professional criminal," to you? |
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Freelance Elf ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 7,324 Joined: 30-September 04 From: Texas Member No.: 6,714 ![]() |
And, for some reason, "edit" doesn't work.
In closing: Look at that character I just described. The giant dude with tusks in a dress, with all the stupid guns and lasers and stuff in his arms. Picture that guy, in your head. Now, imagine yourself as a professional criminal in your default Shadowrun game. Picture walking into a Meet, and being told you're doing an extraction with that...dude/chick, ork/troll/human...whatever. And now picture them flirting with you, and Mister Johnson, and your dog, and your girlfriend, and your team-mate, all either at the Meet or at the planning session just afterwards. Do you really wanna trust your life and rep with that person? Do you want to go on a sneaky-sneaky-tip-toe intrusion with them? Do you want to hear they specialize in "subtle, nondescript, extraction" work? |
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Shooting Target ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,651 Joined: 23-September 05 From: Marietta, GA Member No.: 7,773 ![]() |
May I suggest that all of these "cool new character concept" posts be archived for posterity in the official Shadowrun NPC Wiki?
Seriously. That's what the thing is for. |
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 135 Joined: 8-November 05 From: Toronto, Ontario - Canada Member No.: 7,934 ![]() |
As I mentioned before, I fully support the idea of a flamingly homosexual troll, however, I do agree with Critas about him being, well, riddiculous. He needs to be the baddest mother-fragger in the room, so bad that Mr. Johnson doesn't care that he showed up to the meet wearing lipstick and a mini-skirt (or pink star shaped glasses, or whatever). He definately doesn't need all of that superfluous crap in his cyberarms. Really, he doesn't need two cyberarms either, one will sufice. That way he saves quite a bit of money, and gives him a 'good hand' for melee combat (because the Strength scores on cyberarms just plain suck). A crossbow is a dumb cyber-implant weapon too, give him a silenced SMG instead. From a game mechanic point of view, Human Looking is just a waste of BP if you also take Ork-Poser, you can safely drop that aspect of his character without hurting the concept too much (just take one of the two, you don't need both). I think you just need to tone him down a bit (and by a bit, I mean to the point where he fits within the boundries of common sense).
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 232 Joined: 19-October 04 Member No.: 6,773 ![]() |
I just wanted to add that I hereby agree with Critias in all things he may say in the future. Unless he's bashing SR4.
I remember when I went through a phase where I would makre REDICULOUS characters for no reason. I can clearly look back on those days and say to my self "what the hell was I thinking" Yet no character i ever concieved even comes close to these. And I made an " Albino quadrapeligic troll mouse shaman" once. *shudder* |
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Target ![]() Group: Members Posts: 88 Joined: 28-December 05 From: Québec Member No.: 8,110 ![]() |
Don't we all? I mean, we all came up (yes, we did ALL) with these kind of characters: 1)Quadraplegic hacker 2)Blind swordman-adept in aura perception Comon, I know we all did... and we all droped them too, at least, most of us did. And the funny part is: we all think our idea is better than the one from the guy next'door. We all came up with something unique in their backgroud to make them 'alive', 'special'. My hacker wasnt really quadriplegic he was just lying in a DocWagon hospital'bed because he felt that was the safest place for him, and such he hacked the medical tools to make him appear as comatose. See? We all had those 'pass'... youth has to come-and-go-by I guess ((Can I say come-and-go-by? I speak french, and it makes sense when I translate it..))) |
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 135 Joined: 8-November 05 From: Toronto, Ontario - Canada Member No.: 7,934 ![]() |
Nope, never made a decker.
Nope. The closest I ever came to a swordsman are my plethora of psychotic razorboy characters. The closest I ever came to a blind character were my ghoul characters.
It should be 'come, and go by'. Also, remember to capitalize proper nouns, that's the number one mistake I see Francophones make when they write in English (I can't blame them either, I think that it's a rather stupid convention of this language). |
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 208 Joined: 9-October 05 Member No.: 7,827 ![]() |
Look My Human Looking Troll Ork Poser Could Just Be A Giant Metavriant Ork Poser---And Yes He Likes to Cross Dress But He Also uses that AS A TALENT in his RUNS~as for his sex like well......He will do it with just about anything.....PERIOD![U]....ok Though I could see him having just one cyberarm with The Peppper Spray/Mace and the Microwave Laser....But PLEASE!!!~~~I need feedback on my WINDLING CYBERADAPT!!!!-[A Cyberadapt is an updated version of the Theroetical O-Rigger] :grinbig: :cyber: :cyber:
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 208 Joined: 9-October 05 Member No.: 7,827 ![]() |
and yes I have many other ideas for characters!
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Running Target ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,283 Joined: 17-May 05 Member No.: 7,398 ![]() |
Let me guess, Boskop-albatros: You decided to go off your medication because you thought it wasn't helping you.
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 834 Joined: 30-June 03 Member No.: 4,832 ![]() |
Feedback for Windling Cyberadapt (updated O-Rigger):
Well to start, what do the following terms mean:
I'm guessing the windling is a earthdawn critter like a D&D pixie might be. I'm not even sure what to make of an O-Rigger, does the O stand for something? like "Oh crap"? or "Orgasm"? "Organic"? ooh, organic would work. So if we're looking at a pixie looking adept that drives cars. Given that my guess work above is true or close enough to the truth, then my only question is: What would being a windling add to the mix? If they can fly, why drive? |
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Running Target ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,219 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Lofwyr's stomach. Member No.: 1,320 ![]() |
And Jesus, B-A, learn learn when to use capitalization and smileys. I thought I was bad, capitalizing words in the middle of sentences. Do Not capitalize whole sentences. you think it adds emphasis. It just makes your posts impossible to read. Do not add smileys, especially more than one. You think it adds emotion. It just makes you look dumb. Use parapgraph breaks. It makes your posts easier to read.
If you want your ideas taken seriously, learn to present them well. Please. |
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Neophyte Runner ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 2,168 Joined: 15-April 05 From: Helsinki, Finland Member No.: 7,337 ![]() |
A good point was made when it's been said many of us have been thru the 'weird character' phase. Where you just want to make something as different as possible, for whatever reason...somtimes we tire of playing the 'Ninja Adept' or 'Elven Mage" or 'Bruiser Troll". But we learned the hard way there is going against the grain (troll mages, adepts built not like ninjas, etc), and then there is just plain WAY different....to the point where the usefulness of the character is questioned.
"Troll Magician with Infirm" isn't so bad. That character can still act professional, can still be a useful member of the group. 'Elf with Two Kid Stealth Legs, 2 Cyberarms with Flamethrowers, Horns, a Tail and fangs with SURGED red eyes and a furry chest with the Criminal SIN flaw, a severe addiction to BTL, Combat Monster, Vindictive and Impulsive" just becomes well.....not a good idea. |
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