 Mind Benders, a short story showcasing SR4 concepts |
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 Jul 27 2006, 03:37 AM
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Ain Soph Aur  Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 3,477 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Montreal, Canada Member No.: 600  |
THE END.
No, you don't get to find out if he gets the painting back. I've dragged this humongously long story for long enough now. Thanks for reading! |
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Jul 27 2006, 04:42 AM
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Mr. Johnson Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 3,148 Joined: 27-February 06 From: UCAS Member No.: 8,314 |
Bravissimo, sir.
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Jul 27 2006, 10:03 AM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 19 Joined: 3-June 06 From: Somewhere in the Utah-Anglo reserve. Member No.: 8,642 |
Kudo's sir. You wove an incredible tale. You sure we can't get you to tell us a little more? Joking! heh
Thanks for finishing it up, mostly. 8) |
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Jul 27 2006, 04:13 PM
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Neophyte Runner Group: Members Posts: 2,453 Joined: 17-September 04 From: St. Paul Member No.: 6,675 |
Now that was a good piece. Thanks for sharing.
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Jul 27 2006, 07:44 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 834 Joined: 30-June 03 Member No.: 4,832 |
Awesome, thank you.
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Jul 28 2006, 03:07 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 256 Joined: 24-October 04 Member No.: 6,784 |
Fine writing, indeed!
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Jul 28 2006, 05:57 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 144 Joined: 19-June 06 From: CAS baby Member No.: 8,736 |
So I was really liking it up until the elf porn and I have to say that I loved it afterwards! Seriously, it's so hard to portray realistic sex scenes, one thing though, you forgot the post "i have to have you right now oh god my clothes won't come off fast enough" game of "where are my boxers and how the hell did my pants get up there?".
Oh and kudos for throwing in little details like him peeing when he gets up, you made the characters very real. Again, great job, I would so have your man babies. |
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Jul 29 2006, 06:28 PM
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Ain Soph Aur Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 3,477 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Montreal, Canada Member No.: 600 |
Thanks everyone, I'm glad it was well liked. :)
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Aug 1 2006, 06:42 AM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 21 Joined: 2-June 06 From: Toronto, Ontario, Canada Member No.: 8,637 |
"The end." <picks up a pitch-fork and torch>
:rotfl: Nicely done! <keeps fingers crossed in the hope of more Elf porn... or at least a quicky!> :D |
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