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> My work in progess/not-so-dedicated char thread, Because I enjoy criticism!
X-Kalibur
post Jun 20 2006, 05:51 PM
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Haven't had a chance to go over background and contacts yet with my GM, so those are being left out until I'm 100% satisfied with them and so is my GM.

No house rules, straight, by-the-book 400 BP character.

Alias: Vagabond (also "The Reaper")
Real Name: Mike Tiernan
Metatype: Human

ATTRIBUTES (220)
Body: 5
Agility: 4(6)
Reaction: 3(7)
Strength: 2(4)
Charisma: 3
Intuition: 4
Logic: 3(5)
Willpower: 4
Edge: 4
Essence: 1.59

QUALITIES (-10)
Blandness
First Impression
Ambidexterous
SINner (Civilian)
Bad Luck
Addicition, Mild: Caffiene

SKILLS (120)
Athletics Skill Group: 2
Electronics Skill Group: 1
Influence Skill Group: 3
Firearms Skill Group: 4
Stealth Skill Group: 1
Unarmed Combat (Martial Arts): 2(4)

Sports:2
Merc Hangouts: 3
Firearm Design: 2
Gang Turfs: 1
Safehouses: 3
Computer Background: 1
History: 2
Military Backgroud: 1

English: N
German: 4
Japanese: 2

GEAR (50)

Cyber/Bio
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Touchlink (alpha)
Reaction Enhancers (2) (Alpha)
Obvious Full Hand
Cyberarm Gyromount
Flare Compensation
Image Link
Smart Link
Wired Reflexes (2) (Alpha)
Cereberal Booster (2)
Muscle Toner (2)
Muscle Augmentation (2)
Bone Density (2)
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Colt America L36 (3 clips regular ammo) (Silencer)(Concealable Holster)(ext Smartlink)
Ares Predator IV (3 clips regular ammo, 2 explosive)(Silencer)(concealable holster)
Ingram SmartgunX (5 clips regular ammo)
HK-227X (4 clips regular ammo)
Steyr TMP (5 clips regular ammo)(Gas Vent 3)(ext. Smartgun)
Armor Jacket
Lined Coat
Commlink : Transys Avalon
AR Gloves
OS: Novatech Navi
Browse (4)
Encrypt (4)
ECCM (4)
Spoof (4)
Analyze (4)
Track (4)
Fake SIN: Detective (name to be determined by GM)
Fake Lisence: Detective
Medkit Rating 6 (6 resupplies)
Autopicker rating 6
Lockpick set
Wireclippers
Chisel
1 month low lifestyle

CONTACTS (20, no free BP based on CHA)
Saeder-Krupp Middle Mgmt L:2 C:3
Bartender: L:2 C:1
Arms Dealer L:3 C:3
Street Doc L:2 C:2
Beat Cop L:1 C:1


next time, I use a spreadsheet I can copy/paste from.
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Nim
post Jun 20 2006, 06:55 PM
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What role are you looking to play in the team? Knowing that would help with giving criticism. You're obviously going the street-sam route, but your skills are spread out a bit. Do you know who else you've got on your team?
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X-Kalibur
post Jun 20 2006, 07:16 PM
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Well, we have a dedicated face and a shammie, I just don't like my characters to be terribly one sided (hence having points in CHA skills). But essentially my character is filling the fire support role.
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post Jun 20 2006, 07:16 PM
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You can't take Addicition, Mild: Caffiene. It specifically states the addiction must be very bad for you. Cigarettes, caffeine, sex, all that stuff is not allowed.
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X-Kalibur
post Jun 20 2006, 07:22 PM
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QUOTE (Backgammon)
You can't take Addicition, Mild: Caffiene. It specifically states the addiction must be very bad for you. Cigarettes, caffeine, sex, all that stuff is not allowed.

Good call, I had forgotten about that. Unless he's been hitting pure caffiene (ewwww). I'll change it to alcohol then.
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post Jun 20 2006, 07:48 PM
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Hmm. No hacker? Hopefully your face will take on some of that role.

I think you're going to want more stealth. With a group like that, your character will probably be frequently called on to be the unseen cover while the face has a meet.
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