What'd I break?, Probably every thing.... Options

[lorechaser]

So, I've got my first SR4 game coming up. I've put together a couple adepts (mystic and physical), and I'm hoping folks will look them over for me....

This one is my gun bunny - he's mostly a physad, with the ability to counterspell and summon at a basic level. I took a single magic point to activate those. I know I'd be better off w/o that, but I want to play with the magic system some. ;)

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Yun Zheng, aka Sake
Orc Mystic Adept

B 4
A 5 (7)
R 5 (7)
S 3
C 2
I 3
L 1
W 3

Magic 6 (4)
Edge 2
Initiative 10 (3 initiative passes)
Essense 4.34

Qualities:

Mentor Spirit (Mountain)
Mystic Adept
Talisman Geas:
Ritual Geas:
Alcohol Addiction, moderate
Inept (Ritual Spellcasting, Archery)

Active Skills:

Automatics (Assault rifles) : 6 (8)
Longarms (Shotguns) : 2
Pistols : 2
Heavy Weapons : 1
Blades (Knives) : 1
Counterspelling (Combat spells) : 3 (5)
Summoning (Air spirits) [Earth Spirits] : 2
Spellcasting : 1
First Aid (Combat Wounds) : 2
Inflitration : 2
Perception : 1
Climbing (Assisted) : 2
Gymnastics (Tumbling) : 2
Etiquette : 1

Knowledge Skills:

Sci-Fi Sims : 1
Ares Macrotechnology (Ares Arms) : 1
Security Design : 2
Mercenary Hangouts : 2
Local Junkyards : 2
History (Asian) : 2

Languages:
Chinese : N
English : 2

Cyberwear:

Used Cybereyes Basic System (Rating 2)
+ Eye Recording Unit
+ Image Link
+ Flare Compensation
+ Smartlink

Used Cyberears (Rating 3)
+ Audio Enhancement (Rating 2)
+ Sound Link
+ Damper
+ Balance Augmenter
+ Spatial Recognizer
+ Select Sound Filter (Rating 2)

Bioware:

Platelet Factories
Muscle Toner 2
Synaptic Booster 2

Relevant Equipment:

Ares Alpha (airburst link, gas-vent 3, shock pad, skinlink, smartgun system, Smart Firing Platform, Imaging Scope)
Survival Knife
Chameleon Suit (+ Helmet (Regular), + Respirator (Rating 4), + Thermographic Vision, + Ultrasound Vision, + Vision Magnification, + Vision Enhancement (Rating 2) + Thermal Dampening (Rating 4), + Nonconductivity (Rating 2), + Insulation (Rating 2), + Fire Resistance (Rating 2), + Chemical Protection (Rating 2))
Steel Lynx w/FN Har
MCT FlySpy

Adept Powers:
Combat Sense (Level 2)
Improved Ability: Automatics (Level 2)
Three Dimensional Mastery
Mystic Armor (Level 1)

Spells:
Armor

Contacts:

Lydia Fabri, Fixer (L:2 C:2)
James Pickett, Fence (L:2 C:1)

And the 2nd is a straight Troll Physad

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Yuri Stanislav "Beatdown" Greginski
Troll Physad

B 8
A 4
R 4 (6)
S 8
C 1
I 2
L 2
W 4

Magic 6 (5)
Edge 2
Initiative 8 (3 initiative passes)
Essense 5

Qualities:
Astral Beacon
Spirit bane (Air Spirits)
Alcohol Addiction, moderate
Allergy Moderate

Active Skills:

Archery (Bows) : 3
Unarmed Combat (Martial Arts) : 5
Astral Combat (Spirits) : 4
Pilot Ground Craft (Bike) : 1
Assensing (Spirit Auras) : 2
First Aid (Combat Wounds) : 1
Perception (Sounds) : 2
Gymnastics (Tumbling) : 1
Gunnery (Ballistic) : 1

Knowledge Skills:

Seattle Street Gang : 2
Hong Kong Triads : 2
Wines : 4
Smuggling routes : 3

Languages:
Russian : N
English : 1

Cyberwear:

None

Bioware:

Synaptic Booster 2

Relevant Equipment:
Armor Jacket
Shock Gloves
Bow (Rating 8)
+ 20 normal arrows
+ 10 Injector arrows

Vehicle
Suzuki Mirage (Racing Bike)
Weapon Mount: Ingram White Knight
Weapon Mount: Ruger 100


Adept Powers:
Critical Strike (Level 5)
Killing Hands
Inertial Strike
Penetrating Strike (Rank 3)
Astral Perception
Magic Sense
Improved Sense (Damper)
Boost Agility (1)

Contacts:

Bob (3/2)

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[Gort]

"Used" cyberware? What rules are you using, there?

[xizor]

you can save 200 :nuyen: and a top mount by instaling vision magnification on the smartlinks camera

[lorechaser]

Gort: Used is -20% cost, +20% essence drain.

I'm not sure if it's an SR4 rule, or an hold over SR 3.

Xizor: Hmmmm. Can you also add other mods to the camera?