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> NPC Group: The Kinetic Mavericks, More NPCs to share
bibliophile20
post Jun 17 2007, 01:07 AM
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An NPC concept that's been in my head for a while, I decided to finally evict them when the clamoring got too loud. They'll be making an appearance in my campaign (HatterMadness, no clicking on that link!) but considering the oft heard lament around here for more NPCs and prompted by knasser's Carnival (which sets a damn high bar for quality), I decided I'd share.

Direct Download: The Kinetic Mavericks.

Kudos to knasser for being nice enough to host the file for me.

I'll probably have some more stuff in the new few months: some more NPCs, a few runs, and a goodie or two (I won't say what exactly, or it'll spoil the surprise, but it's NERPS related)

Comments, opinions, and such are welcome and appreciated (even if you're criticizing); and if you use them in your game, a story about it would make my day.
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post Jun 17 2007, 09:02 AM
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Well you've already had my comments via email. All I'm going to say here is that I know what the NERPS one is going to be and it's just supercool! :D

-K.
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post Jun 19 2007, 03:51 PM
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Um... so... knasser tells me that people have downloaded this--can I get some feedback please? What I did right, what I did wrong, things to watch out for in the future... Should I have separated the stats and descriptions like I did, or put them together so they'll associate easier? Should I have included a writeup of a typical performance? Should I not have included pictures? Stuff like that. Please? It's rather hard to improve if no one tells you what you are doing wrong--or right.
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post Jun 19 2007, 05:26 PM
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just started skimming through it now, so no valuable feedback here yet. All I have to contribute so far is that a group of performers is called a "troupe" as opposed to a "troop".
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post Jun 19 2007, 05:33 PM
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QUOTE (2bit)
just started skimming through it now, so no valuable feedback here yet. All I have to contribute so far is that a group of performers is called a "troupe" as opposed to a "troop".

huh. I thought it was spelled either way. Thanks!
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