Recruitment: Old World Charm, Runnin' in the 'Port Options

[Aaron]

Okay, my character is fixed.

Out of curiosity, how are we going to do rolls? Will you be rolling them, or will you be trusting us to roll them, or will we be using an intermediary (e.g. Invisible Castle)?

[Cthulhudreams]

If FFBA is on, are we using the entire armour section from that book including mods, or can I just by BBB legal armour and tack on FFBA?

[Tabula Rasa]

Do you have enough players who are "company men" to fill your quota or do you still need one? If so let me know and I'll pm you with a few possibilities.

[quentra]

I trust you guys, but I want the format to be like this:

Sample Test

6 (skill) + 6 (attribute) + 2 (modifier) = 14

Rolling 14 die:

1 6 1 6 5 6 3 2 3 4 3 2 4 1 = 6 Hits

We'll be using the cinematic optional rule ( 4's count as a hit)

And FFBA and drone mods are the only thing from Arsenal I'm allowing.

As for 'company men,' I don't have any backgrounds yet, so once I get those (just a paragraph or two), I'll decide. Like I said, a lot of the plot will be based off backgrounds and the characters themselves.

[Professeur]

I'll be posting my background & revised character sheet somewhere along thing afternoon. I've still got to think about it.

[kookyjeld]

quentra approved my mentor spirit idea so, at the very least, I should have a draft of my character sheet posted by this evening. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) Thanks for being patient, everyone.

[Aaron]

Okay, character's fixed, starting nuyen rolled. How much background do you want?

[kookyjeld]

Character sheet (draft)


Petra Vegard, Age 24 Female Human Shaman

Attributes (180 BP)

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Body: 3
Agility: 2
Reaction: 2
Strength: 2
Charisma: 5
Intuition: 3
Logic: 4
Willpower: 5
Initiative: 5
Essence: 6

Special Attributes (80 BP)

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Edge: 3
Magic: 5

Qualities (0 BP)

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Magician
Mentor Spirit (Arctic Fox)
+2 dice to illusion spells, +2 dice for water spirits
-2 dice on etiquette tests

SINner
Sensitive System

Skills (126 BP)

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Sorcery group: 3
Counterspelling
Ritual Spellcasting
Spellcasting

Influence group: 1
Con
Etiquette
Leadership
Negotiation

Stealth group: 3
Disguise
Infiltration
Palming
Shadowing

Perception: 2
Pistols: 1
First Aid: 1
Pilot Ground Craft: 1

Knowledge/Language Skills (0 BP)

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Parazoology: 3
Recreational hunting: 3
Saeder-Krupp politics: 2
European wines: 1

Norwegian: N
Dutch: 6
English: 4
German: 1
French: 1

Spells/Foci (20 BP)

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Powerball (Direct)
Clairaudience (Passive, Directional)
Improved Invisibility(Realistic, single)
Ice Sheet (Environ.)
Silence (Realistic, Single)
Trid Phantasm (Realistic, Multi)

Force 2 Spellcasting (Illusion) Foci
Pendant carved from deer hooves

Resources (14 BP)

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Fake SIN (Rating 3)
Ingri Alexander
Fake SIN (Rating 2)
Ana Sarova
Plasteel Restraints
Flashlight
CS/Tear Gas x 5
Medkit (Rating 6)
Stimulant Patch x 3

Hammerli 620S
Hidden Arm Slide
Regular Ammo x 10
Chameleon Suit
Actioneer Business Clothes
Armor Jacket
Thermal Dampening (Rating 5)

Commlink: Renraku Sensei
OS: Renraku Ichi
Subvocal Microphone

Glasses
Low Light
Thermographic Vision
Vision Enhancement (Rating 3)

Earbuds
Select Sound Filter(Rating 3)

Fetish(Illusion spells)
White rabbit’s foot

Harley-Davidson Scorpion Chopper
1 month of Middle lifestyle

Contacts (0 BP)

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Reaver, fixer 2L 4C
Olec, corporate underling 3L 1C

Suggestions/critique, please! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

[Aaron]

Do we get free contacts?

Strike that, just read the intro.

[Professeur]

First, you have 30 BP spare in your special attributes ! Magician automatically gives you 1 Magic, so bringing it up to 5 costs 40 Bp, and as a human you start with Edge 2, for a total of 50 BP for your special attributes, not 80. Use these points to bring up your agility to 4 (so you could have significant dicepool in infiltration and pistols, and agility is probably one of the most useful attributes in this game)

You might want to cut the 30BP in stealth, because it will only give you a dicepool of 5 (7 if you make my tweak, which isn't significat). Take 16 bp and build up Infiltration up to 4, maybe with a spec if you feel like it. With the remaining points, either put it in sorcery or influence group.

You could also take the 10 dice from your influence group and take the Infiltration spell. You'd save 7 BP, so you'd only have to find 3 more BP to gain 1 more agility point. You would use the remaining BP to augment your firearms skill, at least up to 2 with an semi-automatics spec.

My 2 cents !

EDIT : I just counted your BPs, and your total is really 420 BP. So you only have 10 BP left from your special attributes mistake. My other suggestions still stand though, so do whatever you feel like !

[kookyjeld]

Thanks for the input, Professeur! I used Autarkis' excel spreadsheet for the mathy portions but it looks like some of it is a little off. I'll take a look again when I get home from work. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)

[Professeur]

I used Daegann's character generator myself. It works pretty well, except for a few minor details. It does the math alright though, and it includes Street Magic spells (but not augmentation cyberware though, but that wouldn't interest you). Don't remember where I found it, maybe you could search for it on the board or on some site like Knasser's.

If I were you, I'd probably recount every singles nuyen and BP on that sheet, you don't know what else slipt through your chargen sheet. And quentra wanted to price-tag the stuff you bought so you'll have to count it anyways (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) . At that point, the best option would probably be to tweak it without any other program once you're sure of your BP total.

[kookyjeld]

I used Daegann's character generator myself. It works pretty well, except for a few minor details. It does the math alright though, and it includes Street Magic spells (but not augmentation cyberware though, but that wouldn't interest you). Don't remember where I found it, maybe you could search for it on the board or on some site like Knasser's.

If I were you, I'd probably recount every singles nuyen and BP on that sheet, you don't know what else slipt through your chargen sheet. And quentra wanted to price-tag the stuff you bought so you'll have to count it anyways (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) . At that point, the best option would probably be to tweak it without any other program once you're sure of your BP total.

Yeah, I think I'll be overhauling it with another sheet or program .. oy!

[Professeur]

Here's my revised character sheet. The background is mostly in my head right now. Will work on it later tonight, because it will soon be Hockey Playoff time here in Montreal ! I've written up the contacts though, so you can have a basic idea of the character. Any comments ?

Vladislav Fedorov
Face, EVO Henchman
29 years old.
Metatype 30 BP
Elf
Starting Nuyen : 4d6+1 x 500Y = 4,5,5,4 + 1 = 9 500Y

Background

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Basically a russian EVO henchman, who leads shadowrunning teams in favor of EVO.

Attributes 190BP

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Body: 4
Agility: 4
Reaction: 4
Strength: 2
Charisma: 6 ((IMG:style_emoticons/default/cool.gif)
Intuition: 3
Logic: 4
Willpower: 3

Special Attributes 60 BP

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Edge: 3
Magic: 5 (4)
Initiative: 7
Essence: 5,4

Qualities -30 BP

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Adept
Addiction, moderate (Alcohol)
Allergy com/mild (soy)
Geas (still haven't decided)
SINner

Skills 106 BP

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Influence Group : 3 (7)
Con : 3
Etiquette : 3
Leadership : 3
Negotiation : 3
Dodge (Ranged Combat) : 4/6 (6/8)
Pistols (Semi-Automatics) : 3/5
Disguise (Cosmetic) : 3/5
Perception (Visual) : 3/5
Inflitration (Urban) : 2/4
Running (Sprinting) : 1/3

Knowledge Skills
Russian : N
English : 3
Dutch : 3
Evo Corporate Politics (European Division) : 4
Area Knowledge : 2 (Europort)
Smuggling routes : 2
Vory Politics : 2
Safe Houses (Vory Safe Houses) : 1
Fine Restaurants (Italian) : 1

Gear 18 BP

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Bioware
Tailored pheromones 2 (30 000)

Ares Predator IV (350)
Concealable Holster (75)
Silencer (200)
3x Gel Rounds (10 shots) (90)
12x Regular Ammo (10 shots) (240)
10x Spare Clips (50)

Actioneer Businnes Clothes (1500)
Lined Coat (700)
Chameleon Suit (8000)
Nonconductivity (Rating 3) (600)
Thermal Dampening (Rating 6) (3000)
2x Feedback Clothing (Chic) (3000)

Commlink : Novatech Airware (1250)
OS : Redcap Nix (400)
Firewall (Rating 4) (2000)
Nanopaste Trodes (100)
Subvocal Microphone (50)
Agent/IC/Pilot (Rating 3) (3000)
Analyze (Rating 6) (600)
Browse (Rating 4) (400)
Edit (Rating 3) (150)
Encrypt (Rating 3) (150)
Black Hammer (Rating 3) (1500)
Medic (Rating 3) (1500)

Fake Sin (Rating 4) (4000)
Fake Sin (Rating 2) (2000)
Medkit (Rating 6) (600)
Medkit Supplies (50)
Respirator (Rating 6) (600)
Gecko Tape Gloves (250)
Earbud (10)
+ Audio Enhancement (Rating 3) (300)
+ Select Sound Filter (Rating 3) (600)
Glasses (25)
+Image Link (25)
+Smartlink (500)
+Vision Enhancement (Rating 3) (300)
+Vision Magnification (100)
Goggles (50)
+Ultrasound Vision (1000)
Fake License (Rating 4) (400)
5x Certified Credstick (Standard) (125)
2x Certified Credstick (Silver) (50)

2 Months High Lifestyle (20 000)

Adept powers (4)

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Kinesics (level 4)
Combat Sense (level 2)
Voice Control
Facial Sculpt (Level 2)

Contacts (6+2)x2 Free + 26BP = 42

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Mikhail Fedorov, Brother, EVO PR Executive, L6 C6 : 12 cp
Vladislav's older brother by 5 years, Mikhail has worked for the PR department of EVO since he got out of College. Although the nature of his activities have never been totally revealed to Vladislav, cooperating in the ranks of the same Megacorp has been mutually beneficial for the brothers. They go along really well, although the impulsive, sometimes arrogant ways of Vlad conflicts with Mikhail's conservative and rational approach to problems. He usually provides Vlad with information and tips to navigate both the 'corp and the City's troubled waters, along with various access to high-profile corporate events.

François Trouilly-Paillogues, "Le Trou" (The Hole), Fixer L4 C6 = 10 cp
A resourceful French-speaking Belgian (who also speaks Dutch) fixer Vladislav has been dealing with almost since he arrived at Europort. He is a great dealer of information, and a great fixer all-around. He also runs a small but refined wine distribution service, for which Vladislav is an excellent client.

Dimitri Lebedev, Vory Boss L5 C4 = 9 cp
Dimitri is a self-made Vory Boss. He rose from the rank-and-file Vory henchmen to his actual rank in the Vory hierarchy. Of course he isn't in charge of the whole city, but he still runs an important drug smuggling ring, along with information traffic, extortion, prostitution and all the happy stuff Vory leaders are involved in. He recognizes Vladislav as a valuable ally, partly because they have made good business together for some years already, but particularly because of his aspirations regarding cooperation with certain EVO operations.

Leon Souyaleb, Smuggler L2 C5 = 7cp
An Armenian Lebanese, Leon is adept at crossing frontiers and other barriers, physical or not. He is an accomplished smuggler, but can also act as a messenger or any job that requires expedient yet discrete movement of a physical object. He has also been known to indulge in semi-frequent burglaries. His relationship with Vlad is the fruit of fructuous business deals for both of them.

Jeremy, Corp Club Barman = L2 C2 = 4 cp
Jeremy is the barman of one of Vlad's favourite Club / Fine Restaurant. They both enjoy each other's company, and Jeremy has been open to various bribes on Vlad's part in exchange for information he eavesdropped from overconfident yet powerful bar patrons.

OR

6x2 Free + 26bp = 38 cp
Brother L6 C6 = 12 cp
Fixer L3 C6 = 9 cp
Vory Boss L5 C4 = 9 cp
Smuggler L2 C4 = 6 cp
Corp Club Barman L1 C1 = 2 cp

[Tabula Rasa]

Basic concept is corp hitman. Mostly done through advanced training but didn't finish the full program. Please give whatever advice on changes and omissions I made. I have never made a sammy type before.

Note: I have 10 BP left currently.

It's a bit hideous... sorry...

Basic Info:

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Street Name: Holda
Real Name: Ida Devenpeck
Race: Ork BP: 20
Character Concept: Corp Hitman

Attributes:

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Starting Mod TOTAL RACIAL MAX BP
Body 4 +2 6 9 20
Agility 1 +4 5 6 40
Reaction 1 +4 5 6 40
Strength 3 +1 4 8 10

Charisma 1 +3 4 5 30
Intuition 1 +1 2 6 10
Logic 1 +1 2 5 10
Willpower 1 +3 4 6 30

Edge 1 +1 2 6 10

Qualities:

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Incompetent -5
Addiction, Severe -20
Spirit Bane -10
[Negative Qualities Not Final]

Skills:

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SKILL GROUPS Rating BP
Athletics 2 20
Firearms 4 40
Influence 2 20
Stealth 3 30
Electronics 1 10

Throwing Weapons 1 4
Unarmed Combat 1 4
Pilot Ground Craft 1 4

Perception 3 12
Survival 1 4
First Aid 1 4

Contacts:

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Connection Loyalty BP
Fixer 5 1
Personal Contact 1 4 2

Resources:

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BP Spent Available Cash
Starting Gear: 50 250,000¥


Lifestyle: Middle for 1 month
Lifestyle Cost: 5,000¥

Weapons:

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MELEE Cost Avail Reach AP DV
Survival Knife 50 0 -1 3P

PROJECTILE Cost Avail Type Dmg AP Mode Cpc RC
Defiance EX Shocker 150 Taser 8P 0 SS 4(m)
Flechetti Security 600 450 6R Light Pistol 4P 0 SA 30© (1)
Ares Predator IV 350 4R Heavy Pistol 5P -1 SA 15©
Ares Predator IV 350 4R Heavy Pistol 5P -1 SA 15© 0
Steyr TMP 600 8R Mch Pistol 4P 0 SA/BF/FA 30© (1)
HK-227X 800 8R SMG 5P 0 SA/BF/FA 28© 2(3)
Ares Alpha 1,700 12F Aslt Rifle 6P -1 SA/BF/FA 42© 2
+ Grenade Launcher Grenade 0P 0 SS 6© 0
Stoner-Ares M202 4,500 12F MMG 6P -2 FA 50/100

WEAPON ACCESSORIES Top Mnt Avail Brl Mount Avail Ubrl Mount Avail Cost
Ares Predator IV Silencer 8F 200
Ares Predator IV Silencer 8F 200
Steyr TMP Smartgun 4R Snd Sprsr 12F 700
HK-227X Smartgun 4R GV3 System 6R 800
Ares Alpha Smartgun 4R GV3 System 6R 800
Stoner-Ares M202 Smartgun 4R GV3 System 6R Gyro Stb 7 3,800

AMMUNITION/EXPLOSIVES (# x 1) Avail Cost
Explosive Rounds 200 8F 1,000
Gel Rounds 200 4R 600
Regular Rounds 1000 2R 2,000
Flash-Bang Grenade 20 6R 600
Thermal Grenade 5 175
Detonator Cap 10 8R 750
1kg Foam Ex (Rating 15) 1 12F 1,500
1kg Foam Ex (Rating 8 ) 1 12F 800

Cyberware:

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Cost Essence Avail Implant Grade
Datajack 1,000 0.08 Alphaware
Bone Lacing, Alm 30,000 0.80 12F Alphaware
Muscle Rplc II 20,000 1.60 10R Alphaware
Wired Reflexes II 64,000 2.40 12R Alphaware
Cybereyes IV 1,500 0.50 8 Standard
+ Flare Compensation [1] 750 4 Standard
+ Low-Light Vision [2] 1,000 4 Standard
+ Protective Covers 100 4 Standard
+ Smartlink [3] 1,000 8R Standard
+ Thermo Vision [2] 1,000 4 Standard
+ Vision Enht III [3] 4,500 9 Standard
+ Vision Magnification [2] 1,000 4 Standard
Cyberears IV - Capacity 16 1,500 0.50 8 Standard
+ Audio Enht III [3] 4,500 9 Standard
+ Balance Augmenter [4] 5,000 10 Standard
+ Damper [1] 750 4 Standard
+ Select Snd Filter IV [4] 4,000 12 Standard
+ Spatial Recognizer [2] 750 8 Standard

Armor:

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Cost Avail
Armor Jacket (Ballistic/Impact - 8/6) 900 2
Camouflage Suit (Ballistic/Impact - 8/6) 1,200 4
Chameleon Suit (Ballistic/Impact - 6/4) 8,000 10R
Helmet (Ballistic/Impact - +1/+2) 100 2
FFBA (Ballistic/Impact - 6/2) 1,600 8

Gear:

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Skinlink 50 6
20 Security Tags 100 4
20 Stealth Tags 5 6
20 Standard RFID Tags 1
Micro-Transceiver (Rating 6) 1,200 12
Fake SIN, Rating 3 400 12F
Fake License, Rating 4 (Weapons) 400 12F
Fake License, Rating 4 (Armor) 400 12F
Fake License, Rating 4 (Cyber) 400 12F
10 Plastic Restraints 1
Autopicker (Rating 6) 1,200 8R
Maglock Passkey (Rating 4) 8,000 12F
Sequencer (Rating 4) 800 12F
Keycard Copier (Rating 6) 1,800 8F
Wire Clippers 25
Gecko Tape Gloves 250 12
Climbing Gear 200
GPS 200 3
Survival Kit 100 4
Standard Rope (100m) 50
Medkit (Rating 6) 600
Antidote Patch (Rating 4) 200 4
Stimulant Patch (Rating 4) 100 8
Tranq Patch (Rating 4) 80 8
5 x Trauma Patch 2,500 2
Latex Face Mask 500 8
Nanopaste Disguise, Small Container 500 12

COMMLINK Cost Response Signal
Hermes Ikon 3,000 4 3

STOCK OS Cost FW Sys
Novatech Navi 1,500 3 4

PROGRAMS
Firewall (Rating 6) 3,000 6

Vehicle

Suzuki Mirage 6,500

[quentra]

Eep! TR, mind spoilering your sheet? Its a bit long.

Anyway, I have suggestions for most of you, and sheet inconsistencies, so I spoilered all the sheets I have so far below, with individual suggestions in each. Tell me if I got your sheets wrong, and I'll fix em.

Aaron

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CODE

Metatype: Dwarf: 25 BP
Special: Techno: 5 BP

Attributes: 170 BP

Body: 3
Agility: 2
Reaction: 2
Strength: 3
Charisma: 5
Intuition: 5
Logic: 3
Willpower: 5

Special Atts: 75 BP

Edge: 2
Resonance: 6

Skills: 108 BP

Compiling: 5        
Decompiling: 2        
Registering: 5        
Computer: 3        
Pilot Ground Craft: 1        
Gunnery: 1        
Software: 4        
Perception: 2        
Etiquette:    2    
Hacking: 2    

Complex Forms: 22 BP

Armor: 6
Analyze: 5
Command: 5
Stealth: 6

Qualities: -10 BP

Positive:
Codeslinger (Compile Sprite)
Blandness

Negative:
Combat Paralysis
Sensitive System

Contacts: 3 BP

Marius, Smuggler (Connection 3, Loyalty 3)
Gisela, Drone Service Franchise Owner (Connection 4, Loyalty 3)

Resources: 7 BP

Full suit form-fitting body armor w/ fire resistance 6 and nonconductivity 6
Armor Jacket
Ruger Super Warhawk
10 rounds EX-explosive, heavy pistol
10 flash-bangs
High lifestyle (1 month)
Earbuds w/ audio enhancement 3 and spatial recognizer
Fake SIN (Rating 4)
CMT Clip w/ Vector Xim OS (Firewall 1, Response 1, System 1, Signal 2)
Medkit (Rating 6)
2 trauma patches
Shiawase Kanmushi drone
Sikorsky-Bell Microskimmer drone
"Henny," GM-Nissan Doberman Medium Drone w/ Walker Mode, Weapon Mount (external, fixed, remote control), Clearsight 3 and Targeting 3 [everything up to here included off-the-shelf], Armor +6 [takes 1 slot of 4], chameleon coating [takes 2 slots of 4, -4 to visual Perception Tests], mounted Ares Alpha w/ 1000 rounds EX-explosive ammo and 10 HE grenades.

Total:  400 BP

Kookyjeld

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CODE

Metatype: Human
Special: Magician: 15 BP

Attributes: 180 BP

Body: 3
Agility: 3
Reaction: 2
Strength: 2
Charisma: 5
Intuition: 3
Logic: 4
Willpower: 5

Special Atts: 50 BP

Edge: 3
Magic: 5

Skills: 112 BP

Sorcery (Group): 3        
Influence (Group): 1                
Perception: 2        
Pistols: 1        
FirstAid: 1        
Pilot Ground Craft: 1
Infiltration: 3
Summoning: 4        
Banishing: 2    
Banishing: 2        
Assensing: 2        

Qualities: 0 BP

Positive:
Mentor Spirit: 5 BP

Negative:
SINer: -5 BP
Sensitive System: -15 BP        

Spells: 18 BP

Powerball (Direct)
Clairaudience (Passive, Directional)
Improved Invisibility(Realistic, single)
Ice Sheet (Environ.)
Silence (Realistic, Single)
Trid Phantasm (Realistic, Multi)

Gear: 14 BP - 70000 Nuyen

Fake SIN (Rating 3)
--Ingri Alexander
Fake SIN (Rating 2)
--Ana Sarova
Plasteel Restraints
Flashlight
CS/Tear Gas x 5
Medkit (Rating 6)
Stimulant Patch x 3
Hammerli 620S
--Hidden Arm Slide
--Regular Ammo x 10
Chameleon Suit
Actioneer Business Clothes
Armor Jacket
--Thermal Dampening (Rating 5)
Commlink: Renraku Sensei
--OS: Renraku Ichi
Subvocal Microphone
Glasses
--Low Light
--Thermographic Vision
--Vision Enhancement (Rating 3)
Earbuds
--Select Sound Filter(Rating 3)
Fetish(Illusion spells)
--White rabbit’s foot
Force 2 Spellcasting (Illusion) Foci
--Pendant carved from deer hooves
Harley-Davidson Scorpion Chopper
1 month of Middle lifestyle

Contacts: 0 BP

Reaver, fixer 2L 4C
Olec, corporate underling 3L 1C

Total: 396 BP

I put in the modded skills, but you still have 4 points to go (unless I miscalculated, which is totally possible.) Also, what do you think your role will be in the group? Magical scout? Your spell choice seems to reflect this, but it isn't bad at all.

Professuer

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CODE

Metatype: Elf: 30 BP
Special: Adept: 5 BP

Attributes: 190 BP

Body: 4
Agility: 4
Reaction: 4
Strength: 2
Charisma: 6 (8)
Intuition: 3
Logic: 4
Willpower: 3

Special: 60 BP

Edge: 3
Magic: 5 (4)

Skills: 106 BP

Influence (Group): 3
Dodge (Ranged Combat): 4(6)
Pistols (Semi-Automatics): 3 (5)
Disguise (Cosmetic): 3 (5)
Perception (Visual): 3 (5)
Inflitration (Urban): 2 (4)
Running (Sprinting): 1 (3)

Qualities: -25 BP

Positive:
Adept

Negative:
Addiction (Moderate, Alcohol)                    
Allergy (Common, Mild, Soy)                    
Geas                    
SINner (Standard)

Resources: 18 BP

Ware:

Bio:
Tailored Pheremones 2

Gear:
Ares Predator IV (350)
--Concealable Holster (75)
--Silencer (200)
--3x Gel Rounds (10 shots) (90)
--12x Regular Ammo (10 shots) (240)
--10x Spare Clips (50)
Actioneer Businnes Clothes (1500)
Lined Coat (700)
Chameleon Suit (8000)
--Nonconductivity (Rating 3) (600)
--Thermal Dampening (Rating 6) (3000)
2x Feedback Clothing (Chic) (3000)

Commlink : Novatech Airware (1250)
OS : Redcap Nix (400)
Firewall (Rating 4) (2000)
--Nanopaste Trodes (100)
--Subvocal Microphone (50)

Programs:
Agent/IC/Pilot: 3 (3000)
Analyze: 6 (600)
Browse: 4 (400)
Edit: 3 (150)
Encrypt: 3 (150)
Black Hammer: 3 (1500)
Medic: 3 (1500)

Fake Sin (Rating 4) (4000)
Fake Sin (Rating 2) (2000)
Medkit (Rating 6) (600)
--Medkit Supplies (50)
Respirator (Rating 6) (600)
Gecko Tape Gloves (250)
Earbud (10)
--Audio Enhancement (Rating 3) (300)
--Select Sound Filter (Rating 3) (600)
Glasses (25)
--Image Link (25)
--Smartlink (500)
--Vision Enhancement (Rating 3) (300)
--Vision Magnification (100)
Goggles (50)
--Ultrasound Vision (1000)
Fake License (Rating 4) (400)
5x Certified Credstick (Standard) (125)
2x Certified Credstick (Silver) (50)
2 Months High Lifestyle (20 000)

Adept Powers:

Kinesics: 4
Combat Sense: 2
Voice Control
Facial Sculpt: 2
                    
Contacts: 26 BP

Brother L6 C6
Fixer L3 C6
Vory Boss L5 C4
Smuggler L2 C4
Corp Club Barman L1 C1

Total: 400 BP

Time for the GM to bitch again! ^_^ Nah, your sheet looks fine. Few questions, though. Allergy to soy? I suppose that's handable, given his high lifestyle. He's not a pornomancer (yay!), and fits the criteria for a good face. (HINT: Good face is the guy in combat shooting people and looking cool. Bad face is the guy in combat cowering in a corner and sucking his thumb while the sammy kills things and looks cool. The difference between a sammy and a face? Generally, the face will have a bigger...yeah. But then God made enhancements and implants. I have yet to see a player take those.) What's his geas gonna be? Have you decided? Other than that, just a well rounded background, and you're set.

Tabula Rasa

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CODE

Metatype: Ork: 20 BP
Special: None

Attributes: 180 BP

Body: 6
Agility: 5 (7)
Reaction: 5 (7)
Strength: 4 (6)
Charisma: 3
Intuition: 2
Logic: 2
Willpower: 4

Special: 10 BP

Edge: 2

Skills: 156 BP

Athletics (Group): 2        
Firearms (Group): 4        
Influence (Group): 2        
Stealth (Group): 3        
Electronics (Group): 1        
Throwing Weapons: 1                
Unarmed Combat: 1        
Pilot Ground Craft: 1        
Perception: 3        
Survival: 1        
FirstAid: 1        

Qualities: -35 BP

Negative:

SINner (Criminal): -10                    
Addiction (Severe, Limited): -30                    
Incompetent: -5

Resources: 50 BP

Ware:

Cyber:
Datajack (Alpha)
Bone Lacing (Aluminum, Alpha)
Muscle Replacement 2
Wired Reflexes 2
Cybereyes IV
--Flare Compensation
--Low-Light Vision
--Protective Covers
--Smartlink
--Thermo Vision
--Vision Enht III
--Vision Magnification
Cyberears IV
--Audio Enht III
--Balance Augmenter
--Damper
--Select Snd Filter IV
--Spatial Recognizer

Gear:
Lifestyle (Middle, 1 Month): 5000 yen
Survival Knife: 50 yen
Defiance EX Shocker: 150 yen
Flechetti Security:  600 yen  
Ares Predator IV: 350 yen
--Silencer: 200 yen
Ares Predator IV: 350 yen
--Silencer: 200 yen
Steyr TMP: 600 yen
--Smartgun
--Sound Suppressor: 700 yen
HK-227X: 800 yen
--Smartgun
--Gas Vent 3: 600 yen
Ares Alpha: 1,700 yen
--Smartgun
--Gas Vent 3: 600 yen
--Grenade Launcher
Stoner-Ares M202: 4,500 yen
--Smartgun
--Gas Vent 3: 600 yen
--Gyro Stabilizer: 3,800 yen
Explosive Rounds x200: 1,000 yen
Gel Rounds x200: 600 yen
Regular Rounds x1000: 2,000 yen
Flash-Bang Grenade x20: 600 yen
Thermal Grenade x5: 175 yen
Detonator Cap x10: 750 yen
1kg Foam Ex (Rating 15) x1: 1,500 yen
1kg Foam Ex (Rating 8 ) x1: 800 yen
Armor Jacket: 900 yen
Camouflage Suit: 1,200 yen
Chameleon Suit: 8,000 yen
Helmet: 100 yen
FFBA: 1,600 yen
Skinlink: 50 yen
20 Security Tags: 100 yen
20 Stealth Tags: 5 yen
20 Standard RFID Tags: 1 yen
Micro-Transceiver: 1,200 yen
Fake SIN, Rating: 400 yen
Fake License, Rating 4 (Weapons): 400 yen
Fake License, Rating 4 (Armor): 400 yen
Fake License, Rating 4 (Cyber): 400 yen
10 Plastic Restraints: 1 yen
Autopicker (Rating 6): 1,200 yen
Maglock Passkey (Rating 4): 8,000 yen
Sequencer (Rating 4): 800 yen
Keycard Copier (Rating 6): 1,800 yen
Wire Clippers: 25 yen
Gecko Tape Gloves: 250 yen
Climbing Gear: 200 yen
GPS: 200 yen
Survival Kit: 100 yen
Standard Rope (100m): 50 yen
Medkit (Rating 6): 600 yen
Antidote Patch (Rating 4): 200 yen
Stimulant Patch (Rating 4): 100 yen
Tranq Patch (Rating 4): 80 yen
5 x Trauma Patch: 2,500 yen
Latex Face Mask: 500 yen
Nanopaste Disguise, Small Container: 500 yen

Commlink:
Hermes Ikon: 3,000 yen

OS:
Novatech Navi: 1,500 yen

Programs:
Firewall (Rating 6): 3,000

Vehicles:

Suzuki Mirage: 6,500 yen

Contacts: 6 BP

Fixer C5 L1
Personal Contact  C4 L2

Total: 383 BP

K, this is what I noticed. First off, you have 17 BP to go, but I may have miscalculated. Also, you'll need to choose an incompetency. Change your lifestyle to high to reflect the costs of a tailor made drug. This'll mean you'll have to shuffle gear around a bit. What I don't get is why you chose such pimped out cyberears/eyes. I mean, it's cool from an RP standpoint (almost no natural senses left), but gamewise, you could save money and essense on putting the stuff in earbuds or glasses or contacts, even. I'd also like you to tell me what ammo goes with what gun, how many clips you have, and what exactly is skinlinked. (The answer should be everything.) You'll need seperate licenses for every class of weapon (Assault rifle, pistol, etc.) and tell me what license is linked to what SIN. One liscence for all your cyber is fine, just give the liscence a tag (like Military Reserve, Desert Wars, etc.)Other than that...you look good. Just flip me a background and we're set.

[Tabula Rasa]

Spoilered my post. Couldn't figure out the right tag at first... I guess it's pretty obvious what the tag is though.

[kookyjeld]

Thanks, quentra! I didn't notice those BP inconsistencies, but it looks like I didn't fully transfer over the skill list from my spreadsheet, either. That's what I get for trying to do too many things at once. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Changes(with your approval):

[ Spoiler ]

Remove stealth group (+30 BP)
Add Infiltration: 3 (-12 BP)
Add Summoning: 4 (-16 BP)
Add Binding: 2 (-8 BP)
Add Banishing: 2 (-8 BP)
Add Assensing: 2 (-8 BP)
Add +1 Agility (total of 3): (-10 BP)

That would bring me to 399, so I suppose I could just spend that last BP on some more gear.

[quentra]

Heh. Actually, 396, so you can bump another skill a point or specialize twice. I modded your charsheet to reflect the changes.

[Aaron]

Background and stuff sent.

[quentra]

Right, put suggestions down for everyone, hopefully modded charsheets correctly. If they're wrong, tell me. All I need now are some backgrounds (already have a few), and Cthuludreams to get his stuff together, and we'll be ready to rawk and roll, people.

EDIT: Put two news stories up, more upcoming.

[Professeur]

Quentra, I noticed just a few things with the numbers on the sheet you pasted. Your numbers give a total of 407BP. Here are the two mistakes you made while counting my BPs. It doesn't change anything, but I thought it would be better to dissipate any misunderstanding if anybody else notices it.

First, you listed my negative qualities balancing at -30BP, but you didn't count the Adept quality in there, because you already listed the BP cost at the beginning. I have -35BP worth of negative qualities, plus the 5BP adept positive quality, which balances at -30BP, and not -25BP.

Second, you listed my skills as worth 108BP, when they really are worth 106BP. 30BP skill group, 64BP skills, 12BP specializations.

Just thought I'd warn you (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)

EDIT: where are the stories you speak of ? RE-EDIT : no matter ! found'em !

[Aaron]

EDIT: where are the stories you speak of ? RE-EDIT : no matter ! found'em !

I haven't found them. Where are they?

[Aaron]

Never mind, I found them, too.

[Tabula Rasa]

I'm going to post an updated character soon.