 Peanut Gallery: Never Trust an Elf: 2072, comments from spectators |
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 Oct 16 2009, 08:55 PM
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Old Man of the North  Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 10,241 Joined: 14-August 03 From: Just north of the Centre of the Universe Member No.: 5,463  |
That was one helluva scene guys. Very believable and engaging. Well done, both of you. Chrysalis .... man I am glad you aren't turning that on
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Oct 16 2009, 09:02 PM
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Neophyte Runner Group: Members Posts: 2,141 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Neverwhere Member No.: 2,048 |
Hi Peter,
Which one? The second post was originally going to be way more adult themed, but it was in contravention with the terms of dumpshock, so this one was used instead. |
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Oct 16 2009, 09:57 PM
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Running Target Group: Members Posts: 1,210 Joined: 5-September 05 From: Texas Member No.: 7,685 |
QUOTE (pbangarth @ Oct 16 2009, 02:55 PM)  That was one helluva scene guys. Very believable and engaging. Well done, both of you. Chrysalis .... man I am glad you aren't turning that on Ditto |
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Oct 16 2009, 10:35 PM
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Old Man of the North Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 10,241 Joined: 14-August 03 From: Just north of the Centre of the Universe Member No.: 5,463 |
QUOTE (Chrysalis @ Oct 16 2009, 05:02 PM) Hi Peter, Which one? The second post was originally going to be way more adult themed, but it was in contravention with the terms of dumpshock, so this one was used instead. Well, the whole lead up and climax worked for me. That's alright about details. A little imagination can fill in the blanks. |
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Oct 16 2009, 10:50 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 767 Joined: 18-November 08 Member No.: 16,610 |
*Walks in with a bag full of peanuts*
Thanks Pete. That was all Laurie. |
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Oct 17 2009, 12:42 AM
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Neophyte Runner Group: Members Posts: 2,141 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Neverwhere Member No.: 2,048 |
Aww thanks. I needed to blow off some steam. It was fun to write too. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
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Oct 17 2009, 02:52 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 767 Joined: 18-November 08 Member No.: 16,610 |
You guys should read the un-edited version. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/eek.gif)
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Oct 18 2009, 12:03 PM
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Neophyte Runner Group: Members Posts: 2,141 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Neverwhere Member No.: 2,048 |
It was quite steamy... (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
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Oct 19 2009, 12:17 AM
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Old Man of the North Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 10,241 Joined: 14-August 03 From: Just north of the Centre of the Universe Member No.: 5,463 |
So was my fill-in imagination. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/grinbig.gif)
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Oct 19 2009, 10:20 PM
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Old Man of the North Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 10,241 Joined: 14-August 03 From: Just north of the Centre of the Universe Member No.: 5,463 |
Double-triple-quadruple cross. Woohoo!
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Oct 20 2009, 03:02 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 602 Joined: 2-December 07 From: The corner of Detonation Boulevard and Fascination Street Member No.: 14,464 |
Wow! Incredible! Your thread just became mandatory reading for my n00b group! as they are starting out street level, I think it will give them a feel for what you can do once you are a prime runner.
Great characters and vivid descriptions make this an enjoyable read. |
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Oct 20 2009, 03:19 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 767 Joined: 18-November 08 Member No.: 16,610 |
Hey guys.
Thanks for the encouragement. This story has been fun to roleplay and to write since the get go. I wish it was possible for you guys to read some of Chrysalis's writing that is not allowed to be posted on Dumpshock, for valid reasons. [Then again. Imagination is a wonderful thing.] Laurie and I finished roleplaying this scene out earlier in the evening and I have to say Vera really shines as a deep, psychological character who constantly keeps you guessing on her actions and thought process. -Cheers, Agape. |
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Oct 20 2009, 12:09 PM
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Neophyte Runner Group: Members Posts: 2,141 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Neverwhere Member No.: 2,048 |
QUOTE (SincereAgape @ Oct 20 2009, 05:19 AM) Laurie and I finished roleplaying this scene out earlier in the evening and I have to say Vera really shines as a deep, psychological character who constantly keeps you guessing on her actions and thought process. -Cheers, Agape. Update coming soon. IRC is so much faster for conflict situations than posting. |
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Oct 21 2009, 01:36 AM
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Prime Runner Group: Members Posts: 3,987 Joined: 1-March 05 From: République Libre du Québec Member No.: 7,129 |
If you have to censor yourself a bit because of DSF, you could always "blogg" the story instead.
I dunno, just saying. |
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Oct 21 2009, 01:41 AM
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Neophyte Runner Group: Members Posts: 2,141 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Neverwhere Member No.: 2,048 |
New update up. SincereAgape and I agonized over it for too long. Enjoy.
I wonder what happens next? |
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Oct 22 2009, 05:23 PM
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Old Man of the North Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 10,241 Joined: 14-August 03 From: Just north of the Centre of the Universe Member No.: 5,463 |
Throwing AR money on the table. Nice touch.
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Oct 22 2009, 05:34 PM
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Neophyte Runner Group: Members Posts: 2,141 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Neverwhere Member No.: 2,048 |
I liked the looking in the teacup and seeing two spiders fighting over a dead fly.
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Oct 22 2009, 05:50 PM
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Old Man of the North Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 10,241 Joined: 14-August 03 From: Just north of the Centre of the Universe Member No.: 5,463 |
Yes, I liked that too, but I have come to expect that level of allegory from you guys. Forgive me for being jaded by your talent. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/notworthy.gif)
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Oct 22 2009, 06:11 PM
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Neophyte Runner Group: Members Posts: 2,141 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Neverwhere Member No.: 2,048 |
what further allegory did we add?
I know about the eyes of Galloway, but I can't think of much else... |
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Oct 22 2009, 06:25 PM
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Old Man of the North Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 10,241 Joined: 14-August 03 From: Just north of the Centre of the Universe Member No.: 5,463 |
In general, not just this thread.
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Oct 22 2009, 09:27 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 767 Joined: 18-November 08 Member No.: 16,610 |
:Thumbs up to Pete:
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Oct 25 2009, 10:28 PM
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Old Man of the North Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 10,241 Joined: 14-August 03 From: Just north of the Centre of the Universe Member No.: 5,463 |
I betcha this wasn't what he had in mind when he thought of being fucked to within an inch of his life by the likes of Vera.
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Oct 25 2009, 10:34 PM
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Neophyte Runner Group: Members Posts: 2,141 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Neverwhere Member No.: 2,048 |
Vera is doing some mad pushing of Ari's buttons. I wonder when will he snap? Or collapse?
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Oct 26 2009, 12:13 PM
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Neophyte Runner Group: Members Posts: 2,141 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Neverwhere Member No.: 2,048 |
In the words of Robin Williams: Divorce, from the Latin to rip off a man's genitals through his wallet.
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Oct 27 2009, 12:14 AM
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Old Man of the North Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 10,241 Joined: 14-August 03 From: Just north of the Centre of the Universe Member No.: 5,463 |
More chocolate? Of course! I followed this story closely, and both enjoyed the story itself and gained insight into Vera, who plays with a character of mine elsewhere.
At the same time, I am jealous of the time SincereAgape has been spending with Chrysalis. My poor Professor is aching to know what horror is about to happen in Washington. Come back to me Chrysalis. I need you. |
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