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 Twenty Short Stories about Shadowrun, A new blog looking for feedback |
 Aug 22 2011, 06:14 PM
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Target  Group: Members Posts: 69 Joined: 30-August 10 Member No.: 18,986  |
Okay not 20 short stories...in fact just one for now. I'll be releasing a little bit of the story here and there. Usually a few hundred words a day. The first part of story #1 is up if you're interested. It deals with the young capa of Dona O'Malley's family who is in charge of Matrix operations.
http://shadowrunstories.blogspot.com/ Any and all feedback welcome. And yes, this is going to be in a "hard boiled" minimalist prose style. Sorry if it's not your cup of tea (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) |
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Aug 22 2011, 10:01 PM
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Running Target Group: Members Posts: 1,286 Joined: 24-May 05 From: A 10x10 room with an orc and a treasure chest Member No.: 7,409 |
Very nice, how often are you planning to update?
Edit- As far as feedback I'm liking the character so far. |
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Aug 23 2011, 07:37 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 175 Joined: 5-May 08 From: Matt, GA Member No.: 15,959 |
Love it so far!
(now here comes Mr. Nitpick... On the seventh paragraph, after the quotes, the font changes. See below for text.) Vicky couldn't see her girlfriend's face but she could picture the annoyed and petulant look on her fine elven features well enough. |
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Aug 25 2011, 05:19 PM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 69 Joined: 30-August 10 Member No.: 18,986 |
Thanks for the note on the font change...obviously that was unintentional. A snafu when I was transferring the text from Word I guess.
I have half of #2 already written hopefuly I"ll have it up by tonight. |
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Aug 25 2011, 10:22 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 175 Joined: 5-May 08 From: Matt, GA Member No.: 15,959 |
QUOTE (Krojar @ Aug 25 2011, 12:19 PM)  I have half of #2 already written hopefuly I"ll have it up by tonight. Sweet! Can't wait! |
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Aug 26 2011, 10:48 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 292 Joined: 20-April 09 From: Sydney 'plex Member No.: 17,094 |
Yeah, good so far. I'm interested.
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Aug 27 2011, 01:15 PM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 69 Joined: 30-August 10 Member No.: 18,986 |
Okay posted #2. It was a little more rushed than the first so there may be some more errors in it. Also sorry about the font...blogger sucks.
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Aug 28 2011, 02:54 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 174 Joined: 28-February 08 Member No.: 15,719 |
I like it thus far and looking forward to the future posts.
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Sep 2 2011, 06:30 PM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 69 Joined: 30-August 10 Member No.: 18,986 |
Sorry for the delay...been out of power since Sunday because of Irene. I did get a bit of writing done but it's been written the old fashioned way and needs to get put in digital form. Here's part 3 (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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Sep 12 2011, 02:48 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 175 Joined: 5-May 08 From: Matt, GA Member No.: 15,959 |
In part 1, next to last last paragraph, it is a Viper SLIVERgun, not a Silvergun. It shoots slivers, not precious metals (although the ammo cost FEELS like buying silver!). (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
Can't believe I missed it on first read, as one of my players actually pronounces it "Silvergun"! (I am catching up from a long hiatus from the internet!) Reading Part 2 next... |
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Sep 13 2011, 02:09 AM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 69 Joined: 30-August 10 Member No.: 18,986 |
Sorry for the delay in the new update...work sucks. It will be coming soon!
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Sep 13 2011, 03:44 AM
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Moving Target Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 681 Joined: 23-March 10 From: Japan Member No.: 18,343 |
Very nice. I juts read all three. Very nice indeed.
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