Good? Bad? Missing something glaring?

http://eninn-sr.blogspot.com/2010/04/jonat...-sys-godol.html

I've not played SR4 (and only previous versions occasionaly), so hopefully I haven't completely fudged up.

(BTW, Sys-Godol stems from cysgodol, meaning Shadow in Welsh, and Godol meaning Great One in Hebrew, and Sys being a throwback term for a node admin...just the kinda layered/geeky meaning I'd expect a smart guy would choose)

Ok. If that is your first SR char, you owe someone else a BIG thanks for helping. Seriously. Good job.

Nice I'm not looked over the numbers much but looks solid.

Well, the Genetic Heritage is a bit iffy, but still. Given the quality of the concept presented, I´d help the player along.

Seems fine to me (even has Perception ).

Yea, I felt a little dirty taking that. Per Augmentation, you can duplicate any bioware with geneware. (I saw a character that had taken the Restricted Gear quality, along with Genetic Heritage, to take synaptic boosters 3...)

And thanks for the compliments. It's my first SR4 character, but he's been through several "drafts", as I've had the concept bouncing around for a long while. I learned a lot looking at other characters that were built for online games.