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Fenris
This is the OOC thread for Down the Rabbit Hole. Characters have been chosen and are as follows:

Main Group
Buddha72 - Priye - Free Spirit
MrAres - Close combat ninja phys-ad killer ( biggrin.gif )
BishopMcQ - Carter - Infiltration specialist
JxJxA - Human Street Sam Superhero
Combat Mage - Tiger - SURGE'd Elf Warlock
AStarshipforAnts - JD - Designer smuggler
Digital Heroin - Sam - Ex-Lone Star AI Investigator
Collateral Dynamo - Burner - Dwarf Face

In the Queue:
Mister Juan - Jiro - Ex-Yakuza Close Combat Specialist
Horvagab - Ex-Aztlan bloodmage or Ex-Horizon Techomancer
Renard - Beagle - Human Detective

Please don't forget to have your full character sheets in to me by the three week mark. For the record, I'll take character sheets as .xls, .xlsx, .doc, .docx, .rtf, .txt, and the Open Office native formats.

Combat Mage - I'll need a writeup of the 'warlock' tradition with your character sheet. I expect it to be as detailed as those listed in Street Magic.

Posting Conventions (IC):

I'd like to follow something akin to a normal literary template for posts. I realize that we have a riot of color, fonts, etc. available to us, but if I have to stop and think about what a particular format means I lose some of the enjoyment of the reading. So here goes:

Please pick and use a single font (except as listed below) throughout the life of your posts in the IC thread.

"Speech should be set off like this, in double quotes. Please make sure to end paragraphs before lines of spoken dialogue, and to start new paragraphs after the dialogue. Just like a book."

Any internalized comments or monologues should be italicized, like so.

Dialogue or information passed in a digital format should use the font=Courier New and Color=dark gray tags, as I've done here. This includes texts, files, maps, etc.

My one color exception. If it's in a language other than English, please set it off in orange. That's the easiest way to distinguish, since otherwise it should look like any other dialogue or internal conversation.

Posting Conventions (OOC):

Roll your dice however you like. Post rolls you want to make or that I ask you to make here in the OOC thread:

Agility + Acrobatics ( 8 ) = [2 hits]

That keeps it easy and minimizes the amount of typing you have to do, while giving me all the information I need about the roll. I'll try to be clear if there's an abnormal threshold your character would be aware of.

Whenever you're changing the gear your character is wearing or carrying, please post it here. I will check for the last "Gear Worn/Carried" entry for your character and assume that's what you're wearing / carrying. Same for PAN settings and False ID's. Astral and AR/VR states I'll take from IC posts, unless you explicitly state something here.

And away we go!
Fenris
Alright, the first history prompt is up. Keep in mind, I'm not expecting you to use the prompt in your history post, it's just flavor text. If you want to, awesome. But not required. Everyone has until the end of the day on the 28th to respond with your first bit of history with the twins.
Combat Mage
I put in my first history post, i hope it is along the lines of what you were looking for.

In case it wasn't apparent from the post, the girl Tig meets in the lab is J.D of course, and it was Nosh, the technomancer twin, who manipulated the doctors' schedules to give Tig and J.D. the opportunity to meet.
Fenris
Awesome post,CM, exactly what I was looking for.
JxJxA
Okay, I have my PC's first history post up. He's Aleksander Ceh, code name Krsnik (spelling intentional, its a Slovenian mythical figure). The twins intervened by touching Krsnik's mind and shorting out the robotroll.

Let me know if you need any edits! rollin.gif
Fenris
JxJxA - Amazing post, exactly the sort of thing I was looking for. Really well done, man.
JxJxA
Thanks! I love writing in pulp-style. biggrin.gif
AStarshipforAnts
J.D.'s first history post is up; I hope it's alright. If it isn't apparent, 'J.D.' is a moniker she picks up later.
Fenris
Great job on the histories guys, keep 'em coming.

Oh, and sorry, forgot to mention on Monday - Everybody take 1 point of karma.
Buddha72
My post is up!

Let me know if I stepped on any toes and took too much liberty with my post. I tried to stay with the flavor everyone had put out about their characters.
AStarshipforAnts
QUOTE (Buddha72 @ Jun 27 2010, 11:36 AM) *
My post is up!

Let me know if I stepped on any toes and took too much liberty with my post. I tried to stay with the flavor everyone had put out about their characters.


I thought it was a really interesting take on the character.
Fenris
Great job, Buddha, a very interesting perspective.
Fenris
A quick note = We're at the 24 hour mark for the first of the history posts, and I still need to see a post from MrAres and Malachite333.
malachite333
My post is finally up, sorry about the lateness.
MrAres
Ok ok its up, sorry its both hastly written and long. Just eat some more brownie and forgive me biggrin.gif
Fenris
Looks good, both are up.

Everyone can take 1 point of karma.
Fenris
New post is up.

I need the next history post from each person up by the end of the day on Friday, July 2nd. I'm probably going to give everyone July 4th weekend off, and the third post should go up Tuesday, July 6th. Anyone that does not comply will be bumped, and an alternate brought in. Sorry to seem harsh, but this is my chance to sift the wheat from the chaff, as it is, and do my best to assure that I'm moving forward with a group that's going to stay consistent.

Additionally, if you're finished with your character sheet, you can either post it to the OOC thread, if you'd like it for reference, or email it (or a link to it) to me at quantumthoughts at gmail dot com.

Any feedback so far? Plebians feeling oppressed? Thoughts about the game, questions about the twins? I might even answer.
Combat Mage
I'm out of town for all of thursday and friday with no internet access. I'll try to get something up tomorrow to make the deadline but I'm not sure how much time I have available.

Also, does the last scene imply that the twins are in the same lab as Tig and J.D. or did I misread that?
Fenris
Combat Mage - Since you brought up the issue beforehand, I'll extend the deadline out till Monday. As for the same lab, well...I wouldn't assume physical locality, but it's obvious that the people examining Tiger and J.D. are the same people working with the Twins.

Everyone - I'm extending the next posting deadline out till end of day Monday. I'll still post on Tuesday as planned.
Combat Mage
My post is in. Sorry that it is a little on the short side this time.
Fenris
Great posts guys, tons of great flavor and background and character development. Keep 'em coming smile.gif
JxJxA
Just posted. The dwarf is MrAres' character, and I think I left it open enough for you, dude. smile.gif
Fenris
Nice posts guys, I'm enjoying all the interaction and backstory.

I'd love to work a bit more of people's Important NPC's, contacts, enemies, etc. in to the stories, so if you have them already done, feel free to toss up a quick post here in the OOC thread giving enough of a physical and personality description. I'll give an extra 2 karma to anyone that gets the information up before Saturday so myself and others can use it in our posts.

That said, everyone take a point of karma for this week, since it's technically Monday.

As a reminder, posts from Malachite, Digital Heroin, and MrAres are due by 11:59pm Monday night.
Combat Mage
Here's what I have so far. There's at least one more Important NPC to come but that will take some more time

Important NPCs
[ Spoiler ]


Contacts
[ Spoiler ]
AStarshipforAnts
Putting up what I've got so far. The important NPCs are still in-progress. If anyone wants to share important NPCs, just leave me a reply or shoot me a comment.

Contacts
[ Spoiler ]


Important NPCs
[ Spoiler ]


Karma Track
[ Spoiler ]
Buddha72
CONTACTS

[ Spoiler ]


IMPORTANT NPCS

[ Spoiler ]


The NPCs are the ones Priye has the Friendship Pact with and are her charges she watches over for the Elohim in the hopes they will grant her membership.
Digital Heroin
Ok so I am currently in Hope B.C. with a dead alternator and no cable for my netbook... I may be net ready over the next few days, but I can guarantee nothing.
JxJxA
Okay, here Krsnik's contacts/important npcs/enemies:

Contacts
[ Spoiler ]


Important NPCS:
[ Spoiler ]


Enemies
[ Spoiler ]


Please let me know if you need more details, Fenris. ^_^
AStarshipforAnts
Just thought of a possibly important thing for character interaction that I forgot about earlier. I may need a gm fiat on some of this.

J.D. has tailored pheromones, giving her an effective charisma of 8. A lot of her clothing is chemically resistant to fit with her 'allergy' act. Would the pheromones be able to waft through her clothing, or would she have to make a few strategic, if very small, holes in the fabric in order to let it 'breathe'?

In either case, I'm not quite sure how tailored pheromones would work out in an in-character context. Does that mean that people just think J.D. smells really good, or what?
JxJxA
From my understanding, pheromones affect how people react. If J.D. has tailored pheromones that boost charisma, I would think that affected people would be drawn to J.D. for seemingly no reason. Smelling good could be another part of that effect though... spin.gif
Fenris
JxJxA - One quick thing, if you're planning on using the Ceh's as Important NPC's to qualify for the build point bonus I mentioned in the recruitment thread.
QUOTE
They can't be dead.


Other than that, you guys have got a great thing going here. Lots of great writing, interesting NPC's and characters, backgrounds, etc. I'm lovin' it, to quote a certain ethically void fast food giant.
JxJxA
Oops, I didn't mean for Alojz or Brina to count towards those build points, but I was hoping the Emersons and Radix Kane would. smile.gif
Fenris
Alright boys and girls, next post is up. The next deadline will be Saturday, July 12th, 11:59pm.

Unfortunately, it looks like we've lost Malachite133. So, hopefully the replacements are following along smile.gif

Collateral Dynamo, you and your ex-corp face are going to be our replacement. Please review the IC and OOC threads to get up to speed, and make sure to have your first post up by Saturday.

Don't forget, deadline for the 2 bonus points of karma for contact / Important NPC info is Saturday.
Combat Mage
I'm looking for someone for a cooperation for the current history post. Shoot me a PM if you're interested. Tiger is free and up for (almost) anything.
JxJxA
I added two more important NPCs to my original post. I thought I'd add another character to Krsnik's rogue's gallery and another flavor character just in case you need more personalities for the story. wobble.gif
CollateralDynamo
Hi guys. I'm coming in a little late from off the bench to bat some relief. I'm doing everything I can to catch up, which includes working out all of my character details and such. I will probably sending a few PMs out once I finally nail down who everybody's character is.

For now, you can call me Burner. And below I got the most basic of a backstory to start interweaving with other players:
[ Spoiler ]


Feel free to message me if you have ideas for working our backgrounds together. Until then, back to reading all the wonderful bits of fiction you guys have written!

Quick Question for Fenris: I see that you wanted people to post PRIOR to your post for the year. Does this mean you want my first backstory post to be the current year we are on, or four years ago? If you want I think I can catch back up to our current year if not by this deadline, by the next.

See you in the world!

AStarshipforAnts
My post is in. Let me know if I need to edit for clarity.
CollateralDynamo
Hey guys. I put my first post up. I was unclear on whether I should start at the beginning or not, so I'm hitting the way-back machine so you can see Frederick 'Burner' Alfonso's story from when he first 'met with' the twins.

If my post is unclear just hit me up and I can try to fix it up a bit. Usually I don't write such long narratives so I'd be happy to take any constructive criticism.

The first half of the post deals with my character meeting with MrAres' character and the gang that set him up. The second half has to do with my characters' first experience with the facility that it seems half of you broke out of.

I hope to be fully caught up with the timeline over the next week but I am waiting for a few PMs to get back to me. I don't want to step on anybody's toes as I cautiously do my little re-writes to history.

See you in the world!
Combat Mage
And it's up.
CollateralDynamo
My character is still coming together but here are what I think the important NPCs are going to be for Burner:

Contacts:
[ Spoiler ]


Important People:
[ Spoiler ]
Buddha72
Collateral - Fenris says that you don't have to worry about catching up, but you're welcome to if you want the extra build points from conjoined backgrounds. He also says that usually the history post goes up, and people post events that happened within the year after that event and before the next event. But, you're fine since you're just coming in.
CollateralDynamo
Buddha thanks for relaying that information. I'd like to secure the extra build points, and since I already wrote my t-minus 4 background post, I may as well write my t-minus 3. As a matter of fact, I am already trying to write both the 3 and the 2 in conjunction. So I think I can make Fenris' deadline for the t-minus 2 and be all caught up by this evening.
AStarshipforAnts
CollateralDynamo, J.D. is an elf, not a human. grinbig.gif
CollateralDynamo
Whoops, error corrected. Thanks for noticing. smile.gif
AStarshipforAnts
No problem.
CollateralDynamo
Okay, I'm all caught up. I'll stop spamming the IC and OOC threads now, I promise. smile.gif

If anybody notices any errors, or wants me to tweak a few details, feel free to comment here or send me a message. Thanks again for picking me out the back-up queue. biggrin.gif
Fenris
Collateral Dynamo - Thanks for getting things up. I've responded to the PM for your other questions, I'm sorry I didn't do it quick enough for you to put the info into your catch up posts. Really great posts, good tie-in's.

Everyone - Someone just pointed out to me that today is definitely not July 12th. I apologize if it bothers anyone, but in fairness to people that might be going by the calendar date, I'm going to go ahead and extend the deadline until Monday, July 12th, 11:59pm. Enjoy your extra days smile.gif
JxJxA
Heh, Krsnik's post is up. Just in case it's not obvious, it's the conclusion to J.D.'s post. (Kudos, btw, AStarshipForAnts, that was awesome. smile.gif )
BishopMcQ
Post is up. I also sent a request to remove the magic triple post, and give it back to just a single post.
AStarshipforAnts
Thanks for the collaboration guys; this is turning out double-plus cool.

Also, one quick question: are we going to be posting up character sheets or no?
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