 Critique please - Cyberware Packages from Evo(R) |
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 Apr 20 2008, 11:04 PM
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Moving Target  Group: Members Posts: 606 Joined: 14-April 08 From: Phoenix, AZ Member No.: 15,884  |
{edited} Hrm, well, that totally fragged the formatting. Let me see if I can do this another way.
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Apr 21 2008, 08:49 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 606 Joined: 14-April 08 From: Phoenix, AZ Member No.: 15,884 |
Does anyone here know a good place to upload PDFs?
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Apr 21 2008, 10:08 AM
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Runner Group: Members Posts: 2,598 Joined: 15-March 03 From: Hong Kong Member No.: 4,253 |
You can use the [ code ] tags to make aligned tables. Find a text editor that uses a monospace font so that you can preview your stuff, and it should post just fine here. If you don't already have a monospace text editor, try notetab light
As for what I saw of the packages, they seemed a bit too involved for cyberware suites. From what I remember, cyberware suites are supposed to be mass produced, so you should only consider stuff for which you can expect to make 1000+ copies. |
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Apr 21 2008, 10:48 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 858 Joined: 25-August 03 From: Braunschweig, North German League, Allied German States Member No.: 5,537 |
QUOTE (Crusher Bob @ Apr 21 2008, 12:08 PM)  As for what I saw of the packages, they seemed a bit too involved for cyberware suites. From what I remember, cyberware suites are supposed to be mass produced, so you should only consider stuff for which you can expect to make 1000+ copies. I could only glimpse at the first package but I thought the same when I saw it was designed for trolls (the most rare metatype) only... |
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Apr 21 2008, 12:38 PM
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Great Dragon Group: Members Posts: 7,116 Joined: 26-February 02 Member No.: 1,449 |
Plus, they seemed a bit pricey for who they were aimed at. Cyberware suites for low-income troll meatshields or aspiring joytoys should be a lot more on the cheap end of the spectrum (say, dermal plating and muscle replacement for the troll one).
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