 drawings: holychampion, character drawings: i'll try it |
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 Aug 13 2007, 02:56 PM
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Bushido Cowgirl  Group: Members Posts: 5,782 Joined: 8-July 05 From: On the Double K Ranch a half day's ride out of Phlogiston Flats Member No.: 7,490  |
...nice really nice. The finished background is great. Love the Monorail and old Renraku arcology in the background.
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Aug 16 2007, 03:23 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 347 Joined: 31-January 04 Member No.: 6,045 |
thanks :)
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Aug 16 2007, 02:47 PM
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Horror Group: Members Posts: 5,322 Joined: 15-June 05 From: BumFuck, New Jersey Member No.: 7,445 |
Scope does look good, I agree. The background is very "Seattle".
Just, uh... Why is there a strange void 'round where her crotch ought to be? |
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Aug 21 2007, 06:26 PM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 91 Joined: 25-July 07 Member No.: 12,356 |
Very beautiful, can't wait to see the next drawing.
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Aug 23 2007, 12:27 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 347 Joined: 31-January 04 Member No.: 6,045 |
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Aug 25 2007, 07:06 AM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 91 Joined: 25-July 07 Member No.: 12,356 |
Damn! That's actually really....awesome. Frikkin sweetly awesome. If you don't mind however, could you make the tail a little thicker? The balance tail from man and machine was actually a little bit bigger.
Very good first draft, and I love that you're working in a background. |
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Aug 25 2007, 03:11 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 347 Joined: 31-January 04 Member No.: 6,045 |
Thank you.
I absolutely will change the size of the tail, null persperation. That's why I like posting drafts, for the feedback. ;) should have a darkened image (with changes) by tommorrow. |
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Aug 26 2007, 09:48 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 347 Joined: 31-January 04 Member No.: 6,045 |
2nd draft.
http://holychampion1.deviantart.com/art/ik...ikasu2-63345786 awaiting comments before inking. |
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Aug 26 2007, 10:58 PM
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Bushido Cowgirl Group: Members Posts: 5,782 Joined: 8-July 05 From: On the Double K Ranch a half day's ride out of Phlogiston Flats Member No.: 7,490 |
...now those were the days, when Real Deckers Jacked in. None of that sissy wireless crap.:grinbig:
Small compositional detail. Maybe some signage, a picture, plant, or furniture on/by the wall next to the door to add a little visual balance. Otherwise, he looks great. Noticing his forearm blade, I always wanted to design a decker with a retractable spur that was also her matrix interface, ala Robocop. |
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Aug 26 2007, 11:53 PM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 91 Joined: 25-July 07 Member No.: 12,356 |
It's actually really great. The forearm snap blade looks a bit different then I pictured it, but at the same time I like how you did it. Like the large retractable bowie knife of detah. Ha. I really can't think of anything that would need changing, other then something on the opposite wall for sort of a balance in the picture. Oh, and I like how you made him actually jacking in. Can't wait to see it finished! |
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Aug 27 2007, 12:09 AM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 91 Joined: 25-July 07 Member No.: 12,356 |
Lets see. Cyber arm with a built in deck and retractable spur. I bet with a high enough cybertechnology and electronics skill you could rig yourself up a robocop arm. That'd be sweet. Might take a chunk of essence though, essence I couldn't spare. my current character has so much headware....but his hacking pool is out the wazoo. |
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Aug 27 2007, 02:38 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 347 Joined: 31-January 04 Member No.: 6,045 |
Thank you. I'll get the inking done and add something to the wall area.
I'm glad u like it. I kept thinking to myself that u wanted the blade to be cool but it had to have practicality, I tryed several styles including a double-edged blade. Being a collector of knives I went to my room and looked at the swords and daggers I have then started looking at my assorted pocket-knives and got inspired by a Kershaw snap blade I have. It's black, the blade is black with a silver edge and a serrated end. ;) Drew it as the Forearm blade and thought that it fit the build and the concept is simple but unique (compared to most drawings I've seen). |
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Aug 27 2007, 10:02 AM
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Horror Group: Members Posts: 5,322 Joined: 15-June 05 From: BumFuck, New Jersey Member No.: 7,445 |
Very nice, in my opinion. But why would you want a snap-blade out while you're about to go VR?
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Aug 27 2007, 02:41 PM
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Bushido Cowgirl Group: Members Posts: 5,782 Joined: 8-July 05 From: On the Double K Ranch a half day's ride out of Phlogiston Flats Member No.: 7,490 |
...boyscout motto: Be Prepared?
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Aug 28 2007, 12:04 AM
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Well, he could always have his RAS Over-ride off. if I was in the middle of a facility without team near like that I might keep my RAS off and watch for enemies too. Unless I got in Matrix Combat. |
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Aug 28 2007, 02:24 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 347 Joined: 31-January 04 Member No.: 6,045 |
Welll I'm glad this topic came up. Originally the empty space had outlines of two other people and the floor containing the body of a security guard. I didn't know if u wanted any other persons in the drawing and I wasn't certain what they should be... I didn't want to take too many liberties. So...what do u think? give me a brief description of one or two runners u associate with and I'll draw them in. Otherwise a tree in a pot is what is outlined in right now.
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Aug 28 2007, 06:00 AM
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Well, when you brought this up I tried to get in contact with the rest of my team, but sort of failed miserably to get their descriptions.....except for one. If you wouldn't mind drawing my room mates character into the picture. Here's the description I got out of him: "Elf dude" with white hair that goes into a long pony tail (all the way down to mid back). Build is semi masculine. Not buffed out or skinny, like what you'd see in a swordsman. A no-dachi (basically, a large two-handed katana) strapped to his back and two handguns (non-descriptive, whatever you so choose to draw), one to each side. He wears camo armor and a large black trench coat that goes down to his feet. He tends to carry a shotgun if you wouldn't mind drawing that into the picture as well. Thats what I got out of him description wise. If you can't get a draft out of that i'll try to include more information. His character name is Atma, street name Death. No cyberware. If it's too much of a hassle, of course, draw the tree instead. The fact you're doing this for free is enough really, I wont ask you to spend more time on the pic if it's a hassle. |
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Aug 28 2007, 01:19 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 347 Joined: 31-January 04 Member No.: 6,045 |
K, that will do. He will not be the focus of the pic but he will be there, the decription is fine just about all I need. Thanks.
Getting started. maybe, have something by tonight. ;) |
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Aug 30 2007, 01:04 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 347 Joined: 31-January 04 Member No.: 6,045 |
sorry, seems to be alot going on DA tonight. I'll try later or tommorrow otherwise, I believe it's done just want to present it before I ink.
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Aug 30 2007, 01:47 AM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 91 Joined: 25-July 07 Member No.: 12,356 |
Heh, yeah, Deviant art is kind of gay. Can't wait to see the pic though! |
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Aug 30 2007, 12:18 PM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 347 Joined: 31-January 04 Member No.: 6,045 |
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Aug 30 2007, 03:26 PM
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Bushido Cowgirl Group: Members Posts: 5,782 Joined: 8-July 05 From: On the Double K Ranch a half day's ride out of Phlogiston Flats Member No.: 7,490 |
...yeah, very nice.
The other character watching the door works well. It just wasn't DA last night. DS was also reacting pretty slow. When I clicked on your reply on the main menu, I ended up waiting forever for it to come up. It never did & I had to close out without logging off. |
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Aug 30 2007, 05:35 PM
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Target Group: Members Posts: 91 Joined: 25-July 07 Member No.: 12,356 |
That's awesome! In all seriousness it's a very well drawn picture and it's come out great so far! I can't wait to see it ink, and I like how you drew my room-mate's character. Very nice indeed.
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Aug 31 2007, 02:27 AM
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Moving Target Group: Members Posts: 347 Joined: 31-January 04 Member No.: 6,045 |
well here it is...
http://holychampion1.deviantart.com/art/ikasu-63700860 hope u enjoy. :) Now on to the next. |
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Aug 31 2007, 08:48 AM
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Horror Group: Members Posts: 5,322 Joined: 15-June 05 From: BumFuck, New Jersey Member No.: 7,445 |
Very nice, HC! Very, very sweet.
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