 Dog Days, Captain Obvious points to new SR Fiction |
 Apr 17 2006, 07:22 PM
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Ancient History Dog Days Apr 17 2006, 07:22 PM
FanGirl The poor doggie! WAHHH! Apr 17 2006, 07:39 PM coolgrafix A nice slice-of-SR-life sort of story, Dashiell Ha... Apr 17 2006, 07:49 PM PBTHHHHT Nice story.
And Fangirl you shoulda put that in ... Apr 17 2006, 07:53 PM SL James What a pro runner. Because the J stiffed him on a ... Apr 17 2006, 08:09 PM Lindt Seriously. Hes all slick and, 'Bam' broad... Apr 17 2006, 08:33 PM SL James Hey, I'm still wondering why in a ubiquitously... Apr 17 2006, 08:47 PM coolgrafix QUOTE (SL James) Hey, I'm still wondering why ... Apr 17 2006, 08:59 PM hyzmarca There is one thing about this story that just does... Apr 17 2006, 09:07 PM Lindt Good point. Cloning is easy. Apr 17 2006, 09:18 PM SL James QUOTE (coolgrafix @ Apr 17 2006, 02:59 PM) QU... Apr 17 2006, 09:35 PM FanGirl QUOTE (hyzmarca)The anrupt cange at the end there ... Apr 17 2006, 09:52 PM Ancient History QUOTE (SL James)But at least I'm not harping o... Apr 17 2006, 10:08 PM Moon-Hawk That was a sinister answer to an honest question. Apr 17 2006, 10:18 PM ShadowDragon8685 FanGirl, that's just groping.
It was a really... Apr 17 2006, 10:34 PM Kagetenshi The word you want is "reaching" or ... Apr 17 2006, 10:58 PM emo samurai *Whine*
If Chester didn't eat Stick while he... Apr 17 2006, 11:23 PM hyzmarca QUOTE (Moon-Hawk) That was a sinister answer to an... Apr 17 2006, 11:27 PM Wounded Ronin It's good fiction but I find it amusing that a... Apr 18 2006, 12:06 AM FanGirl QUOTE (ShadowDragon8685)FanGirl, that's just g... Apr 18 2006, 12:17 AM bclements QUOTE (emo samurai) If Chester didn't eat Stic... Apr 18 2006, 12:18 AM Kagetenshi George was trapped. Even in the event that they co... Apr 18 2006, 12:24 AM Pallantides Kept me occupied for a couple minutes at least.
A... Apr 18 2006, 12:27 AM Wounded Ronin QUOTE (FanGirl) Shooting your trusting, mentally r... Apr 18 2006, 12:32 AM hyzmarca QUOTE (FanGirl) QUOTE (ShadowDragon8685)FanGirl, t... Apr 18 2006, 12:38 AM Kagetenshi QUOTE (New Seattle page 14)The air around the metr... Apr 18 2006, 12:41 AM FanGirl QUOTE (hyzmarca @ Apr 17 2006, 07:38 PM) The ... Apr 18 2006, 12:52 AM emo samurai What if the people wanted to take you away in orde... Apr 18 2006, 12:58 AM SL James QUOTE (Ancient History)QUOTE (SL James)But at leas... Apr 18 2006, 01:11 AM Ancient History It was a play-on-words, SL James. Lighten up. Apr 18 2006, 01:14 AM SL James I was being sarcastic.
BTW, since he called the p... Apr 18 2006, 01:16 AM Ancient History Then my sincere apology for mistaking your subtle ... Apr 18 2006, 01:18 AM bclements QUOTE BTW, since he called the police and KE offic... Apr 18 2006, 01:28 AM Shrapnel QUOTE (bclements) QUOTE BTW, since he called the p... Apr 18 2006, 01:42 AM ShadowDragon8685 I got the impression that the K-E that showed up w... Apr 18 2006, 01:45 AM John Campbell Sticks is a fragging idiot. Get the RFID tag remov... Apr 18 2006, 01:51 AM SL James QUOTE (Ancient History) Then my sincere apology fo... Apr 18 2006, 01:56 AM hyzmarca QUOTE (FanGirl) QUOTE (hyzmarca @ Apr 17 2006... Apr 18 2006, 01:57 AM FanGirl QUOTE (John Campbell)Sticks is a fragging idiot. G... Apr 18 2006, 02:14 AM Kagetenshi I told you already, orphanages cost double. You do... Apr 18 2006, 02:20 AM Lindt Sigged.
It just seemed somehow, forced. Hyzmarca... Apr 18 2006, 02:26 AM FanGirl QUOTE (Kagetenshi @ Apr 17 2006, 09:20 PM) I ... Apr 18 2006, 02:35 AM Kagetenshi QUOTE (FanGirl) Liar! You never told me that... Apr 18 2006, 02:46 AM coolgrafix QUOTE So does that stick up your ass have a stick ... Apr 18 2006, 03:07 AM John Campbell QUOTE (FanGirl) And while you're taking furthe... Apr 18 2006, 03:42 AM FanGirl You hit the nail on the head! ^_^ Apr 18 2006, 04:01 AM hyzmarca QUOTE (FanGirl @ Apr 17 2006, 09:14 PM) Never... Apr 18 2006, 04:06 AM Kremlin KOA the dog licked my soup
HE MUST DIEEEEEEEEEEE Apr 18 2006, 04:13 AM James McMurray Where was the soup when he started licking? Your a... Apr 18 2006, 04:16 AM Wounded Ronin QUOTE (FanGirl)
And while you're taking furth... Apr 18 2006, 04:16 AM Lindt Hey, it could have been worse. He could have harv... Apr 18 2006, 04:42 AM FanGirl QUOTE (Wounded Ronin) QUOTE (FanGirl @ Apr 17... Apr 18 2006, 05:05 AM emo samurai The ending just seemed very "OMG SR HAS TO BE... Apr 18 2006, 05:28 AM Kremlin KOA oh come on
seriously people
The GM would have lai... Apr 18 2006, 05:50 AM ShadowDragon8685 Kremlin wins the thread. Apr 18 2006, 06:00 AM Kremlin KOA *dances the cabbage patch* Apr 18 2006, 06:15 AM James McMurray It isn't powergaming to reach for resources th... Apr 18 2006, 06:33 AM Kremlin KOA but if ya know the GM will punnish you for taking ... Apr 18 2006, 07:26 AM Kagetenshi Then you get a new GM, because this one is clearly... Apr 18 2006, 07:43 AM ShadowDragon8685 Nah, not broken. Nor defective.
Broken implies th... Apr 18 2006, 07:46 AM Kremlin KOA hehehehe
sadly though, far too many GMs end up us... Apr 18 2006, 03:12 PM James McMurray Most games need plot devices or things don't h... Apr 18 2006, 03:49 PM Kremlin KOA yes but what percentage of plot devices should inc... Apr 18 2006, 03:56 PM James McMurray 100% is almost assuredly the wrong number (unless ... Apr 18 2006, 05:07 PM Kremlin KOA true Apr 18 2006, 05:17 PM emo samurai They have to have a reason for their ability to tr... Apr 18 2006, 06:07 PM John Campbell QUOTE (FanGirl) You hit the nail on the head! ... Apr 18 2006, 06:38 PM Wireknight Maybe he had another reason for killing the dog. Apr 18 2006, 08:05 PM emo samurai Stick is Timothy Roberts? Well, they do share a la... Apr 18 2006, 08:09 PM Wounded Ronin QUOTE (SL James) QUOTE (Ancient History)QUOTE (SL ... Apr 19 2006, 02:22 AM emo samurai QUOTE Heh, Fan-Pro-owned!
Huh? Apr 19 2006, 02:29 AM Kagetenshi It flows better if you just say Fanpr0wned!
A... Apr 19 2006, 02:55 AM Kanada Ten Nice short story if a bit light on logic. Some cl... Apr 19 2006, 02:56 AM Club just before the KE show up, Sticks has for some re... Apr 23 2006, 07:15 AM Piecemeal is a cyberpets brain completely rewired? (yeah nev... Apr 23 2006, 11:04 PM Kagetenshi *Splutter* You really think he didn't have sig... Apr 23 2006, 11:12 PM Wounded Ronin QUOTE (Kagetenshi) It flows better if you just say... Apr 23 2006, 11:30 PM PBTHHHHT QUOTE (Kagetenshi) *Splutter* You really think he ... Apr 23 2006, 11:41 PM Piecemeal QUOTE *Splutter* You really think he didn't h... Apr 24 2006, 01:20 AM Kagetenshi Your original point is a good one, and stands. Nev... Apr 24 2006, 01:27 AM James McMurray Oh yeah. Refusal to pay and a backstabbing togethe... Apr 24 2006, 02:25 AM Taran "You'll have to forgive my friend. She... Apr 24 2006, 02:35 AM Backgammon Well, I kinda liked the story. For once it was act... Apr 24 2006, 03:47 AM John Campbell QUOTE (Piecemeal) is a cyberpets brain completely ... Apr 24 2006, 03:59 AM Piecemeal yeah.. true. thank you for pointing this out to m... Apr 24 2006, 04:57 AM Shadow Awesome.
First AH, congrats on getting some fict... Apr 24 2006, 11:36 PM Kagetenshi Proper grammar is imperative to flow and pacing. I... Apr 24 2006, 11:41 PM Shadow Yes and no. Many established authors often break t... Apr 24 2006, 11:45 PM SL James Stop trying to make sense and expect any type of w... Apr 24 2006, 11:45 PM Shadow Was that really necessary? AH is at least trying t... Apr 24 2006, 11:57 PM John Campbell Proper grammar is imperative to storytelling. Howe... Apr 25 2006, 12:05 AM SL James You've got to be kidding.
I've spent thou... Apr 25 2006, 12:19 AM Kagetenshi Maybe my standards have been lowered by the fictio... Apr 25 2006, 12:23 AM SL James Yes, it is brain-gouging. It's one of the few ... Apr 25 2006, 12:27 AM Ophis Man would you lay off. So you don't like it. I... Apr 25 2006, 12:29 AM Kagetenshi QUOTE (SL James) Red Eye.
I had forgotten, the... Apr 25 2006, 12:36 AM hyzmarca As much as I dislike the ending, the story as a wh... Apr 25 2006, 12:46 AM emo samurai I thought it was a great story, except for the ... Apr 25 2006, 01:07 AM Shadow QUOTE (SL James) You've got to be kidding.
I... Apr 25 2006, 01:22 AM
Ancient History Peace be to journey, children. Everyone is welcome... Apr 25 2006, 01:26 AM  |
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