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Name: Sasha Firehair
Race: Dryad
Gender: Female
Total karma:750

Attributes: (276)

Body........5 (42)
Agility.....6 [8] (54)
Reaction....5 [6] (42)
Strength....3 [5] (15)
Charisma....5 (27)
Intuition...4 (27)
Logic.......3 (15)
Willpower...4 (27)

Edge........4 (27)
Essence.....2,36
Initiative..9 [10]
IP..........1 [2]

Qualities: (0)

Positive:

Ambidextrous (10)
Firefight 1 (10)
(Attacker in meleecombat modifier -1)
Krav Maga 1 (10)
(Ready weapon becomes a free actions)
Escrima 1 (10)
(+1 DV on Club attacks)
Born Rich (20)
Bilingual (10)


Negative :

Uncommon moderate allergy(cold iron) (-20)
SINner (Standard) (-10)
In Debt 4 (-40)

Skills: (304)

Active: (239)

Athletics (Group) 3 (35)
Pistols (Semi-automatic) 4 (24)
Automatics 3 (14)
Longarms (Shotguns) 2 (10)
Heavy weapons 2 ((IMG:style_emoticons/default/cool.gif)
Throwing Weapons (Lobbed) 2 (10)
Dodge (Ranged) 2 (10)
Blades (Swords) 2 (10)
Clubs (Batons) 2 (10)
Unarmed 3 (14)
Pilot Ground Craft (Motorcycles) 2 (10)
Pilot Watercraft (Motorboats) 1 (6)
Perception (Visual) 2 (10)
Parachuting (Base jumping) 1 (6)
Diving 1 (4)
Con (Fast talk) 2 (10)
Intimidation (Mental) 2 (10)
Etiquette 2 ((IMG:style_emoticons/default/cool.gif)
Negotiation 1 (Bargaining) (6)
Leadership 1 (4)
Infiltration (Urban) 2 (10)
Armorer (Firearms) 2 (10)

Knowledges: (51)

Fashion 3 (7)
Cyber Augmentations 2 (4)
Magical Theory 1 (2)
Weapons 4 (11)
Military Theory 2 (4)
Gun Smugling 2 (4)
Cooking 2 (4)
Celebrity Gossip 3 (7)
Motorcycles 2 (4)
Ballroom dances 2 (4)

Languages: (14)

English N (0)
Russia N (0)
French 3 (7)
Sperethiel 3 (7)

Contacts: (50)

6/6 Nikolai (24)
4/4 fixer (16)
2/3 Bartender (10)


Gear: (120)

Cyberware:
Attention coprocessor 3
Two engraved alphaware datajacks
Aplhaware fiberoptic hair(≈1m)
Aplhaware breast implants
Rating 3 cybereyes with low-light vision, eye light system, smartlink, vision enhancment 2, vision magnification and flare compensation
Rating 2 cyberears with balance augmentor, spatial recongnizer and audio enhancer 2
Obvious full right arm with body 7, agility 10, strenght 7, armor 2 and cyberlimb casemod

Bioware:
Synaptic booster 1
Sleep regulator
2nd Hand Muscle toner 2
2nd Hand Muscle augmentation 2
2nd Hand Platelet factories
2nd Hand Synthacardium 3
Clean metabolism
Dietware
Silky skin

Weapons:
Pair of smartlinked Defiance EX Shockers
Two hidden gun arm slides
200 Taser darts

Pair of smartlinked Colt Government 2066:s with extended clips, silencers and level 1 custom look modifications
108 Hollow point rounds

Pair of smartlinked FN 5-7C with personalised grip, gas vent 3 and level 1 custom look modifications
80 Stick-n-Shock rounds

Pair of sawed-off PJSS Model 55 shotguns with laser sight, personalized grip and custom looks 1 modifications
200 Shock lock rounds

Ceska Black Scorpion with laser sight,personalized grip, gas vent 3, extended clip and custom look 1
88 EX-Explosive rounds

Smartlinked snub nose ruger super warhawk
24 EX-Explosive rounds and three speed loaders

Yamaha Sakura Fubuki with laser sight and personalized grip
80 explosive rounds

Ares Viper Slivergun with laser sight and gas vent 3
60 Flechette Rounds

Eight Concealable Holsters
Three quick-draw holster

Smartlinked FN P93 Praetor with an additional clip, gas vent 3 modification, personalised grip and a lanyard
100 EX-Explosive rounds
200 Regular rounds

Ares Desert Strike with internal bipod, silencer and an external smartgun system
56 EX-Explosive Rounds

Franchi SPAS-22 with a personalised grip and sling

20 Thermal smoke grenades
20 Flash-Bang Grenades
10 High Explosive Grenades
10 White phosphorus grenades
10 Pepper punch gas granades

Hardliner gloves with custom look 2
Claymore with custom look 2 and personalised grip
Katana with custom look 2 and personalised grip
Four ceramic knifes
Pair of extendable batons
telescoping staff

50 Spare Clips

Armor:
Vashon Islands Steampunk line custom tailored:
Overcoat with gel packs, fire resistance 2 and nonconductivity 2
Corset with chemical protection 2 and nonconductivity 1
Knickers with insulation 1
Blouse with Chemical protection 1 and noncondutivity 1
Trousers and boots in same style

Form-fitting body armor half-body suit with Fire resistance 2, chemical protection 2 and nonconductivity 2

Vashon Islands Aces High Jacket with Fire resistance 2, insulation 2 and nonconductivity 2

SecureTech PPP System discreet set

Vehicles:
Evo Pegasus with Motorcycle Gyro Stabilization

Lifestyle:
Two months of high lifestyle

Other:
Transys Avalon Commlink with Hardening 6 and Armor 5
Novatech Navi OS
Firewall 6
FT L Matrixware Power Suite
Personality Software and Virtual Surround Music
Rating 3 sensor software: empathy, gait and noise analysis, lie detection, vehicle identification, facial and noice recognition
Rating 3 linguasoft: Japan, Spanish, Chinese and Arabic
Rating 6 mapsoft: Seattle, Hong Kong, Istanbul, Los Angeles, Neo-Tokyo, Dubai, Prague, Venice, Lisbon, Oslo, Stockholm, Geneva, Amsterdam, Jerusalem, Moscow, Vladivostok, Singapore, New Orleans, Karavan,
Calcutta, Guam, Honolulu, Mumbai, Hamburg, Caracas, Vienna, Paris, Rome, GeMiTo, Trieste, Christiania, Helsinki, Antwerp, Europort, Kronstad, Denver,
Subvocal Microphone, AR Gloves and Satellite Link

40xSkinlink
Rating 3 fake SIN
Rating 4 fake license