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Hey hey, I just finished up a character for a new campaign I'll be playing in soon. I've spent quite a lot of time on this character (and his contacts), so any/all criticisms/compliments are welcome.
EDIT: Changes are in bold.
EDIT:EDIT: Changes still in bold.

Name: Sgt. Karl Ziedrich
Alias: Kronos
Race: Elf
Sex: Male
Age: 31
Height: 6'4"
Eyes: Green
Hair: Dirty Blonde
Skin: Caucasian, lightly tanned

Description: Stands 6'4" tall, with dirty blonde shoulder length hair, green eyes, and lightly tanned skin. Has 3 studs in his right ear and a tattoo of Mjolnir, Thor's Hammer on his left shoulder. Can be spotted wearing almost anything, including clothing with an oriental flair and a dark green embroidered trench coat.

Attributes
Body:4
Quickness:8
Strength:5
Charisma:4
Intelligence:6
Willpower:6
Essence:6
Magic:0

Reaction:7
Initiative: 1D6
Combat Pool: 10

Edges/Flaws
Bonus Attribute Point-Quickness
Bio-Rejection
Pacifist

Skills
Active
Pistols-4
Pistols B/R-2
Rifles-5
Spray Weapons-3
Brawling-4
Demolitions-3
Stealth-3
Athletics-3
Electronics B/R-3
Etiquette-4
Negotiation-4
Throwing Weapons-4
Rifles B/R-3

Knowledge
Infamous Revolutionaries-3
Gunsmithing-5
Body Armor Fabrication-3
Lone Star Procedures-3
Miltech Manufacturers-3
Physics (Ballistics)-2(4)
SWAT Tactics-4
Shadow Organizations-3
Metroplex Law-3

Language
English[Read/Write]-4[2]
German[Read/Write]-3[1]
Sperethiel[Read/Write]-2[1]

Contacts
Col. Kelly Smith (Elf UCAS Military Armourer, Level 2)
Wrench (Human Mechanic, Level 2)
Doc Brown (Troll Street Doc, Level 2)
Lt. Cabbie (Human LS 'Irregular Assets' Acquisitions Officer, Level 1)
Mao Tze Ming (Human Owner/Operator of the 'Merciless Ming's Street Cuisine' Franchise, Level 2)
'Gabbi' (Ork Mafia Hit Man, Level 1)
'Hacksaw' (Ghoul Organlegger, Level 2)
'Louieville' (Human Mafia Soldier, Level 2)
'Fritz' (Ork Decker, Level 2)
Nate (Human Smuggler, Level 2)
Scar (Dwarf Ganger, Level 1)
Ralph Lyons (Elf Med Tech, Level 2)
Dr. Jon Kruger (Troll Pharmacist, Level 1)
'Finger' (Dwarf Talismonger, Level 1)
Olaf (Troll Bouncer, Level 2)

Gear
Weapons
Hardliner Gloves
Q. Draw Thigh Holster, 2 Q. Draw Hip Holsters
Morissey Elan (w/Personalized Grip, Conc. Q. Draw Ankle Holster, loaded w/ Gel rounds w/ 1 clip gel 1 clip normal rounds)
Colt Manhunter (w/ Personalized Grip, loaded w/ Gel rounds w/ 1 clip Gel 1 clip normal rounds)
Ares Predator (w/Personalized Grip, loaded w/ Gel rounds w/ 1 clip Gel 1 clip normal rounds)
FN-AAL Gyrojet Pistol (w/Personalized Grip, loaded with Normal rockets w/ 2 clips
Remington Roomsweeper (w/Personalized Grip, Conc. Q. Draw Holster [small of back], loaded w/ Stun shells, w/ extra 8 Flare and Slug shells carried)
Ruger 100 (w/ Personalized Grip, Sling, loaded w/ Gel rounds, w/ extra 5 Gel and 10 normal rounds carried)
2 Spray Tanks (1 w/ Freeze Foam, 1 w/ Slip Spray, both w/ 1 re-fill each)

Armor
Half-Body Form-Fitting Body Armor
Real Leather Jacket
Sleeping Tiger* Suit (all items)
Executive Suite Tuxedo
Actioneer Suit w/Long Coat
Large Riot Shield

Clothing
4 Outfits Tres Chic
6 Outfits Fine Clothing
20 Outfits Ordinary Clothing

Misc.
Grapple gun w/ 200m Grapple Line
Micro Flare Launcher w/ 10 Micro Flares
Rating 6 Micro-Transciever
Electronics Tool Kit
Gunsmithing Shop
Survival Kit
Full Climbing Gear w/ 200m Rope
Gas Mask w/ Air Tank
Pocket Flashlight
Wire Clippers
Pocket Secretary
5 Steel Restraints

Sgt. Karl Ziedrich doesn't officially exist. He 'died' during a botched SWAT excercise that ended in the death of 6 hostages, an event he still blames himself for. He has been known to work for Lone Star's 'Irregular Assets' Tactical Division on occasion, and under their direction, he helped keep a mafia hit man by the alias of 'Louieville' out of prison by tampering with evidence and threatening the jury. Although he still believes he has the authority to enforce the law, he is nothing more than another 'deniable asset' as far as Lone Star is concerned.

So, comments/criticisms/death threats/free money?