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Feb 11 2009, 11:58 PM
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Prime Runner ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Retired Admins Posts: 3,929 Joined: 26-February 02 From: .ca Member No.: 51 |
In Bad Moon Rising in the East, a team of shadowrunners is hired to track down the source of a new drug shipping into Hong Kong. Directly connected to the Ghost Cartels campaign, the team of six Caracas natives are thrust into a criminal underworld far from their home. With few contacts to turn to, they may find themselves deeply involved in a vicious underworld conflict.
This 22-page scenario was used for the Gen Con 2008 Shadowrun tournament. While it may be used with other characters, the included team of shadowrunners is fully fleshed out with contacts, backgrounds, and motivations. This complete package allows for a night or two of Shadowrun with little prep work for the gamemaster or the players. Bad Moon Rising in the East totals 37 pages, with 1 cover/credits page, 21 pages of scenario, 3 pages with 1 map each, and 12 pages of pregenerated characters: Covert Ops, Face, Hacker, Melee Artist, Pistol Adept, Shaman. Bad Moon Rising PDF - $3.95 Bad Moon Rising PDF from DriveThruRPG - $3.95 |
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Feb 12 2009, 12:03 AM
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Beetle Eater ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 4,797 Joined: 3-June 02 From: Oblivion City Member No.: 2,826 |
"a team of shadowrunners are hired" - is hired, neh?
"This 22-page scenario scenario " - one less: scenario "the included team of shadowrunners are fully fleshed" - probably just "included shadowrunners" or "is fully fleshed" ? |
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Feb 12 2009, 12:04 AM
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Running Target ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,336 Joined: 25-February 08 From: San Mateo CA Member No.: 15,708 |
When I get home for <strike>the salt mines</strike> work, I fully intend to check this out.
/me crosses his fingers and wishes for the best. |
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Feb 12 2009, 12:04 AM
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Running Target ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,336 Joined: 25-February 08 From: San Mateo CA Member No.: 15,708 |
"a team of shadowrunners are hired" - is hired, neh? "This 22-page scenario scenario " - one less: scenario "the included team of shadowrunners are fully fleshed" - probably just "included shadowrunners" or "is fully fleshed" ? Don't worry, the promise to issue an errata for the announcement. And since its PDF you get the updated announcement for free! |
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Feb 12 2009, 12:07 AM
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Beetle Eater ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 4,797 Joined: 3-June 02 From: Oblivion City Member No.: 2,826 |
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Feb 12 2009, 12:35 AM
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Prime Runner ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Retired Admins Posts: 3,929 Joined: 26-February 02 From: .ca Member No.: 51 |
Problems with the BCC, blame me. Problems with the interior editing, blame someone else. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
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Feb 12 2009, 12:40 AM
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Target ![]() Group: Members Posts: 80 Joined: 18-August 08 From: Germany Member No.: 16,249 |
why out of all available old covers did you have to pick this ugly piece of crap? (IMG:style_emoticons/default/rotate.gif)
sry, but I always hated the cover-art of the SR1/2-GM-screen and now it comes back haunting me (IMG:style_emoticons/default/ohplease.gif) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/ohplease.gif) but great to see some earl geier-art again (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) anyway, I'll start reading now... |
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Feb 12 2009, 12:45 AM
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Prime Runner ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Retired Admins Posts: 3,929 Joined: 26-February 02 From: .ca Member No.: 51 |
why out of all available old covers did you have to pick this ugly piece of crap? (IMG:style_emoticons/default/rotate.gif) Because there's a series of adventures and they're going to each use a piece of it. |
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Feb 12 2009, 12:49 AM
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Target ![]() Group: Members Posts: 80 Joined: 18-August 08 From: Germany Member No.: 16,249 |
Because there's a series of adventures and they're going to each use a piece of it. this is my personal nightmare (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wobble.gif) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wobble.gif) edit: it's just a cover anyway. as long as the content is good, I'm fine |
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Feb 12 2009, 04:13 AM
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Shooting Target ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Retired Admins Posts: 1,784 Joined: 28-July 04 From: Cleveland, OH Member No.: 6,522 |
Problems with the BCC, blame me. Problems with the interior editing, blame someone else. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) Right, I'll fall on the sword for those issues. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) |
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Feb 12 2009, 05:50 AM
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Running Target ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,336 Joined: 25-February 08 From: San Mateo CA Member No.: 15,708 |
$thanks = "Thank You"
foreach (0...1000) print $thanks This is what I have been looking for since 4th Edition came out. I think its fantastic. The layout is readable. The NPC stats and condition monitors are blocked off on relevant pages. if it had Karma rewards it would be an honest to Rod adventure. This is A grade work. I would be willing to buy one of these a month at this price should you have more that are this good. |
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Feb 12 2009, 08:32 AM
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Neophyte Runner ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 2,336 Joined: 24-February 08 From: Albuquerque, New Mexico Member No.: 15,706 |
"a team of shadowrunners are hired" - is hired, neh? "This 22-page scenario scenario " - one less: scenario "the included team of shadowrunners are fully fleshed" - probably just "included shadowrunners" or "is fully fleshed" ? shadowrunner is shadowrunners are are is very much correct for a plural. Do not try to correct grammar if you don't have a firm grasp on the language (aka above high-school [American] education - high schools here suck balls). |
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Feb 12 2009, 09:16 AM
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Shooting Target ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,748 Joined: 25-January 05 From: Good ol' Germany Member No.: 7,015 |
it is still one Team that is hired : So the Team of Shadowrunners is hired should be correct
(and I'm a foreigner (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) ) with the 100th Dance Medicineman |
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Feb 12 2009, 11:18 AM
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Moving Target ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 343 Joined: 3-October 07 From: Birmingham, UK Member No.: 13,515 |
In British English, "a team of shadowrunners are" would be correct. In American English, it wouldn't.
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Feb 12 2009, 11:28 AM
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Target ![]() Group: Members Posts: 60 Joined: 23-January 09 From: Greenock, Scotland Member No.: 16,803 |
In British English, "a team of shadowrunners are" would be correct. In American English, it wouldn't. So We're right nyahhhh (IMG:style_emoticons/default/spin.gif) |
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Feb 12 2009, 12:43 PM
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Shooting Target ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,629 Joined: 14-December 06 Member No.: 10,361 |
Oh no he didn't!
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Feb 12 2009, 01:42 PM
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Shooting Target ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Retired Admins Posts: 1,784 Joined: 28-July 04 From: Cleveland, OH Member No.: 6,522 |
I would be willing to buy one of these a month at this price should you have more that are this good. I'll see what we can do to accommodate that. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) And, as a minor spoiler, that formatting is what we'll be using in the next series of Missions scenarios. |
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Feb 12 2009, 03:29 PM
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Beetle Eater ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 4,797 Joined: 3-June 02 From: Oblivion City Member No.: 2,826 |
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Feb 12 2009, 05:34 PM
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Neophyte Runner ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 2,336 Joined: 24-February 08 From: Albuquerque, New Mexico Member No.: 15,706 |
it is still one Team that is hired : So the Team of Shadowrunners is hired should be correct (and I'm a foreigner (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) ) While technically you can be correct, "is" is prefixed by shadowrunners, & thus what it is referencing. It is incorrect for the plural, & should be "are". To reference the team, the sentence should be worded "A shadowrunner team is". Because of its wording, you cannot clearly tell if it is "a team of shadowrunners" or a team of shadowrunners", making everything potentially incorrect. The wording does suggest that team & shadowrunners are two separate entities. Edit: Yet another reason why I hate this damn language. I should really learn another. |
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Feb 12 2009, 05:43 PM
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Beetle Eater ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 4,797 Joined: 3-June 02 From: Oblivion City Member No.: 2,826 |
While technically you can be correct, "is" is prefixed by shadowrunners, & thus what it is referencing. It is incorrect for the plural, & should be "are". To reference the team, the sentence should be worded "A shadowrunner team is". Because of its wording, you cannot clearly tell if it is "a team of shadowrunners" or a team of shadowrunners", making everything potentially incorrect. The wording does suggest that team & shadowrunners are two separate entities. Edit: Yet another reason why I hate this damn language. I should really learn another. Are you talking about the second or first instance of "team of shadowrunners"? Clearly, in the first sentence, team is the subject, and the prepositional phrase "of shadowrunners" is acting as an adjective describing what type of team. Taking a look at the second sentence, we can conclude that the author intended to expound upon the shadowrunners, but constructed a poor sentence to do so, which is why I suggested an alternate fix, rather than just altering the to be verb. |
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Feb 12 2009, 05:48 PM
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Ain Soph Aur ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 3,477 Joined: 26-February 02 From: Montreal, Canada Member No.: 600 |
Ahh, the SR2 GM screen cover. I love that piece of art. I pretty much love all SR2 art come to think of it.
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Feb 12 2009, 05:49 PM
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Shooting Target ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,748 Joined: 25-January 05 From: Good ol' Germany Member No.: 7,015 |
Edit: Yet another reason why I hate this damn language. I should really learn another.
Don't learn German ,its very Difficult. I'm glad its my Mother's tongue. Maybe Portuguese/Brazilian ?It's got a pleasant sound and Roman languages are usually easier dancing to Fado Medicineman |
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Feb 12 2009, 06:35 PM
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Immortal Elf ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 10,289 Joined: 2-October 08 Member No.: 16,392 |
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Feb 12 2009, 06:47 PM
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Running Target ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,379 Joined: 16-April 02 From: the LI shadows Member No.: 2,607 |
I'll see if I can bag this later.
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Feb 12 2009, 06:54 PM
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Old Man of the North ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Dumpshocked Posts: 10,558 Joined: 14-August 03 From: Just north of the Centre of the Universe Member No.: 5,463 |
"The corporation are" "The company are" "The team are" "The group are" All correct in British English. In British English, one may refer to a group as a plurality. In American English, one may not. We who live in Canada and are exposed to both forms regularly find this duality a source of psychosis. In a typically Canadian attempt to find a third way, we come up with "the corporation arse". |
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