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djinni
what do I need to change?
edit: increased skills decrease magic
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Metatype : Troll
Adept

Attributes
Body: 8
Agility: 4
Reaction: 4(6)
Strength: 8
Charisma: 2
Intuition: 4
Logic: 2
Willpower: 4

Edge: 2
Magic: 5 (4)
Initiative: 8
Essence: 5

Knowledge Skills
English (trogspeak) : Native
Crook Hangouts : 3
Club Circuit : 3
Sports (Urban Brawl) : 3
Mafia : 3
Black Markets (Magical Items) : 3
Street Drugs (Cram) : 1

Active Skills
Blades (Axes) : 6
Unarmed Combat : 4
Dodge (Ranged Combat) : 4

 
 
Positive Qualities
Quick Healer
Adept
Spirit Pact (Edge 4): Regeneration

Negative Qualities
Gremlins 4
Scorched
Addiction, mild


Bioware:
Synaptic Booster 2


 
Weapons:
Combat Axe

Armors:
Armor Jacket
Helmet (Regular)
Ballistic Shield
Equipment:
Weapon Focus (Rating 2)

 
Powers
Agility Boost (Level 1)
Mystic Armor (level 4)
Combat Sense (Level 2)
Sustenance
Quick Draw

   Contacts
The Fake (L:6 C:1) <-- this contact stands in for the troll during the meets as per the "other" thread.
Jaid
1) you can't use a power focus. you're an adept, not a magician.

2) all those boost powers... by the time you get around to fighting, the first one will have worn off, and the fight will be over. i would say keep one or maybe two, (actually, you have little to no use for a single simple action, so maybe 2) and beef up combat reflexes instead (i would suggest agility could use a boost, and either reaction or strength)

3) addiction? to cram i presume (the knowledge skill is what makes me guess this). i would suggest deepweed if you want to be able to assense, but cram?

ElFenrir
For starters....perhaps some more Active Skills.

A contact, you say? or is this a PC? if this is a PC, hell definately need those skills tweaked up a bit. Up the ones you have(well, the dodge: ranged seems ok), but perhaps some social skills, at least Etiquette, a 2 charisma will screw you pretty badly.
Increase his combat skills a few points, that he has. If you dont want him with guns(the Gremlins) perhaps a Throwing Weapon skill can help, but you could essentially be totally melee, and pump the Ranged Dodge a bit after all.

But a few points in Etiquette with a specialization will help alot. I know not every character has to be the stealthy type, but look into it. Negotiations might also come in handy, again, the 2 cha might hurt, unless your team has a dedicated face.

But yeah, perhaps look into those.




Glyph
From a purely min-maxing point of view, a Strength of 7 does the same damage as a Strength of 8 (due to the divide by two/round up thing). So, I would move a point from Strength and put it into Reaction, instead.

Definitely run that spirit pact by your GM first; a lot of GMs wouldn't allow it. Look at all of the sample spirit pacts - the spirit always gets something out of the deal, too.

I agree that you have too many Attribute boosts - keep the Agility, and lose the others. And the remark about the Power Focus is right, too. You can't use it, so lose it to free up some BPs.

Unlike previous editions, you can get by without social skills, at least to start with, thanks to the concept of "rating zero" skills. But something like one point in Etiquette and one point in Infiltration would probably be very helpful. Especially the Etiquette, since your Charisma is too low to use for defaulting.

Your combat skills are terribly low, and your Edge is minimal.


For general advice, I would say lose those three Attribute boosts (keeping Agility) and the Rooting: 1, and reduce Magic to 5 (4), saving 25 build points. Lose the power focus to get back another 12 build points. Spend 26 points to raise Blades to 6, Unarmed Combat and Dodge to 4, and pick up a specialization for unarmed combat. For the remaining 11 points, put 1 back into resources for some gear, then either 1) get a point of Edge, or 2) pick up Etiquette: 1 with a specialization of Street and Infiltration: 1. Then see if the GM is okay with your spirit pact. If he isn't, then put those 20 points into Edge.
djinni
QUOTE (Jaid)
1) you can't use a power focus. you're an adept, not a magician.

2) all those boost powers... by the time you get around to fighting, the first one will have worn off,

Power focus adds to my magic which then adds to all available functions of that new rating. level 1 attribute boost, magic of 5 with power focus 2 gives 8 dice.

my group said that using ability boost was a nonaction, where does the book say it's a simple action? this would help alot since the bad guy adepts we face all have ability boost
Glyph
Page 85, under Foci, states that adepts can only bond to weapon foci.

Page 187, under Attribute Boost, last sentence of second paragraph, states "Attribute Boost requires a Simple Action to activate".

You might want to see if your GM is house ruling either of these, though.
djinni
QUOTE (Glyph)
Page 85, under Foci, states that adepts can only bond to weapon foci.

Page 187, under Attribute Boost, last sentence of second paragraph, states "Attribute Boost requires a Simple Action to activate".

You might want to see if your GM is house ruling either of these, though.

on page 187 this is the last sentence of the second paragraph "The boost lasts for a number of Combat Turns equal to the twice the number of hits generated."

okay I misread "mystic adept" on 85.
lorechaser
QUOTE (ElFenrir)
but perhaps some social skills, at least Etiquette, a 2 charisma will screw you pretty badly.

This is the troll that doesn't attend meets. His contact goes in his place, so there's no need for social skills.
Glyph
QUOTE (djinni)
on page 187 this is the last sentence of the second paragraph "The boost lasts for a number of Combat Turns equal to the twice the number of hits generated."

Really? It's the second sentence of the second paragraph in my copy. But keep reading a few more sentences, and I think you'll find it.
Jaid
most likely he's got an unerrated copy. take a look at the newest errata djinni (available at shadowrunrpg.com)
djinni
QUOTE (Jaid)
most likely he's got an unerrated copy. take a look at the newest errata djinni (available at shadowrunrpg.com)

gotcha...
okay so don't need quickdraw anymore, or I dump Ability boost...
what should I replace which one with?
Kyoto Kid
...two skill groups to look at:

Athletics - you can replace Dodge with Gymnastics Dodge
Stealth - as an Adept (unless you are one of those social types) you want to do your best at not being seen.

Perception skill (even at minimal rating) is always helpful.

as a Troll you can get by with less Mystic Armour. I see you opted for the Bio enhanced adept. Not a bad idea if you can afford the implant, however, this is 32BPs applied to resources that could be put fleshing out to skills. I know that 3pp is a lot for Improved Reflexes but you would get one MA back from ditching the implant and by shuffling points around could still make a very effective combatant.

A force 2 weapon focus will also save another 6 BPs in resources over the unusable power focus.

Can adepts take Spirit pact? I thought that was only available to mages. I could be wrong.
djinni
QUOTE (Kyoto Kid)
A force 2 weapon focus will also save another 6 BPs in resources over the unusable power focus.

why do I want to be stealthy?
I should get rid of the weapon focus?
Glyph
Spirit pacts only stipulate that they are taken by awakened characters, so I don't see why an adept couldn't take one. My only concern was that you should check with the GM to be sure he will allow that specific spirit pact.

The weapon focus is actually pretty sweet if you can juggle enough points to keep it. Not only do you get two extra dice for melee, but you also can affect those pesky spirits with the Immunity to Normal Weapons power.

Gymnastics dodge is nice for a melee character who typically parries or blocks in close combat. However, unless your GM rules that the tumbling specialization is what is used for a gymnastics dodge, you won't get the benefit you do now, from taking the ranged specialization of dodge. If you can use a gymnastics specialization for dodging, then I would change it, because gymnastics is cheaper to take improved ability for, and can be improved by several pieces of bioware as well.
Kyoto Kid
QUOTE (djinni)
QUOTE (Kyoto Kid @ Feb 3 2007, 09:26 PM)
A force 2 weapon focus will also save another 6 BPs in resources over the unusable power focus.

why do I want to be stealthy?
I should get rid of the weapon focus?

...no, I was saying exchange the Power focus for a force 2 Weapon Focus and you save 30,000:nuyen: (6 BP) . You may have changed that before I saved my post for now I see it on the character listing..

The Stealth group includes Palming, Shadowing and Disguise. All very useful skills for an adept . You want to follow someone with out them noticing? Shadowing. You don't want someone to remember your face? Disguise. You want to get a weapon past a checkpoint? Palming.

A little bit of subtlety can go a long way to keeping a character alive.
lorechaser
You did notice the "Cha 2, Troll" part, right?

Generally, Adepts want to be sneaky or social. He's clearly not picking either of those. wink.gif
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