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Total BP: 400
Name: Bile (dwarf +25bp)
Attributes: (200 bps)
Body: 4/7 +20bp
Agility: 3/6 +20bp
Reaction: 4(6)/5 +30bp
Strength: 4/8 +10bp
Charisma: 2/6 +10bp
Intuition: 5/6 +40bp
Logic: 5(7)/6 +40bp
Willpower: 5/7 +30bp
Initiative: 9(11)
Condition Monitor: 10s/10p
Edge: 1
Init Pass: 3
Essense: 1.54 (4.2 + .12/2 = -4.46)
Qaulities: (-15bp)
-Positive:
Hardening +10bp: +1 biofeedback
CodeSlinger +10bp: +2 Exploit
-Negative:
Phobia Common(drowning), Moderate -15bp: -4 while exposed to large bodies of water, Charisma+willpower(x) test to avoid running away.
Infirm(fat) -20bp: physical skills cost x2, can't take group skills, unaware in skills he doesnt have.
Contacts: (none...)
Active Skills: 140bp
Electronics 4 40bp
First Aid 1 4bp
combat wounds(+2) 2bp
Perception 2 8bp
Dodge 4 16bp
Hacking 5 20bp
Stealth(+2) 2bp
Cybercombat 5 20bp
vs IC(+2) 2bp
Electronic Warfare 4 16bp
Gunnery 2 8bp
Heavy Weapons(+2) 2bp
Knowledge Skills: (5+7)x3= 36 free bp
Hacker Nodes 4
Matrix security 5
Software Design 5
Hardware Design 4
Online Games 4
Graphic Design 4
Language:
Normal N
Hacker 2
Spanish 4
Japanese 4
Gear 50bp (249,975/250,000)
-Armored Jacket (900)
-Low Income (1 month) (2000)
-First Aid Kit 6 (600)
-Mercury Comet (14,000)
Rigged (2500)
Signal 5 (1000)
-Stun baton (400)
-Defiance X Shocker (400)
Smartgun(external) (400)
concealed holster (75)
-Tool Kit(software,hardware,drones)x3 (1500)
-Fake SIN 4(Chris Louder) (4000)
Fake License: Pilot(ground) 4 (400)
Fake License: Hack Programs 4 (400)
Fake License: Cyber 4 (400)
Fake License: Stun Baton 4 (400)
Fake License: Smartgun 4 (400)
-Glasses (50)
Low Light av+4 (100)
Flare Comp av+2 (50)
Smartlink av+4 (500)
Vision Mag av+2 (100)
-Fake SIN 1(Duane Hopper) (1000)
-Activesofts(rating 3 x 3000 = 9000 per skill) (4x9000+ 1x3000 = 39,000)
Pistols 3
Pilot(ground) 3
Etiquette 3
Mechanic(drones) 3
Clubs 1
-commlink: Meta Link + Vector Xim(300)
-Commlink: Meta Link + Vector Xim(skinned) (350)
Response 5(4000), Signal 5(1000), System 5(2500), Firewall 6(3000)
-Sim Module(hot) (250)
-Satellite Link (500)
-subvcal mic(skinned) (100)
-Virtual music (50)
-virtual person (150)
-virtual weather (100)
-wall space (50)
-PROGRAMS: (all Rating 5)
Common programs(all 7, Ratingx100=500 x7 = 3,500)
Hacking programs(all 15, ratingx1000=5000 x15 = 75,000)
Agent R4 x1 (10,000)
-Cyber: es= 4.2
Wired Reflexes 2 es=3, (32,000)
Control Rig es=.5 (10,000)
Datajack(skinned) es=.1 (550)
Skillwire 3 es=.6 (6000)
-Bio es= .52 /2 = .26
Sleep Regulator es=.12 (10,000)
Cerbral Boosters 2 es=.4 (20,000)
Abilities:
Thermo Vision
+2 vs desease/toxin
+2 when controlling drones/ +4 if hot
Only need 4 hours of sleep
Name: Bile (dwarf +25bp)
Attributes: (200 bps)
Body: 4/7 +20bp
Agility: 3/6 +20bp
Reaction: 4(6)/5 +30bp
Strength: 4/8 +10bp
Charisma: 2/6 +10bp
Intuition: 5/6 +40bp
Logic: 5(7)/6 +40bp
Willpower: 5/7 +30bp
Initiative: 9(11)
Condition Monitor: 10s/10p
Edge: 1
Init Pass: 3
Essense: 1.54 (4.2 + .12/2 = -4.46)
Qaulities: (-15bp)
-Positive:
Hardening +10bp: +1 biofeedback
CodeSlinger +10bp: +2 Exploit
-Negative:
Phobia Common(drowning), Moderate -15bp: -4 while exposed to large bodies of water, Charisma+willpower(x) test to avoid running away.
Infirm(fat) -20bp: physical skills cost x2, can't take group skills, unaware in skills he doesnt have.
Contacts: (none...)
Active Skills: 140bp
Electronics 4 40bp
First Aid 1 4bp
combat wounds(+2) 2bp
Perception 2 8bp
Dodge 4 16bp
Hacking 5 20bp
Stealth(+2) 2bp
Cybercombat 5 20bp
vs IC(+2) 2bp
Electronic Warfare 4 16bp
Gunnery 2 8bp
Heavy Weapons(+2) 2bp
Knowledge Skills: (5+7)x3= 36 free bp
Hacker Nodes 4
Matrix security 5
Software Design 5
Hardware Design 4
Online Games 4
Graphic Design 4
Language:
Normal N
Hacker 2
Spanish 4
Japanese 4
Gear 50bp (249,975/250,000)
-Armored Jacket (900)
-Low Income (1 month) (2000)
-First Aid Kit 6 (600)
-Mercury Comet (14,000)
Rigged (2500)
Signal 5 (1000)
-Stun baton (400)
-Defiance X Shocker (400)
Smartgun(external) (400)
concealed holster (75)
-Tool Kit(software,hardware,drones)x3 (1500)
-Fake SIN 4(Chris Louder) (4000)
Fake License: Pilot(ground) 4 (400)
Fake License: Hack Programs 4 (400)
Fake License: Cyber 4 (400)
Fake License: Stun Baton 4 (400)
Fake License: Smartgun 4 (400)
-Glasses (50)
Low Light av+4 (100)
Flare Comp av+2 (50)
Smartlink av+4 (500)
Vision Mag av+2 (100)
-Fake SIN 1(Duane Hopper) (1000)
-Activesofts(rating 3 x 3000 = 9000 per skill) (4x9000+ 1x3000 = 39,000)
Pistols 3
Pilot(ground) 3
Etiquette 3
Mechanic(drones) 3
Clubs 1
-commlink: Meta Link + Vector Xim(300)
-Commlink: Meta Link + Vector Xim(skinned) (350)
Response 5(4000), Signal 5(1000), System 5(2500), Firewall 6(3000)
-Sim Module(hot) (250)
-Satellite Link (500)
-subvcal mic(skinned) (100)
-Virtual music (50)
-virtual person (150)
-virtual weather (100)
-wall space (50)
-PROGRAMS: (all Rating 5)
Common programs(all 7, Ratingx100=500 x7 = 3,500)
Hacking programs(all 15, ratingx1000=5000 x15 = 75,000)
Agent R4 x1 (10,000)
-Cyber: es= 4.2
Wired Reflexes 2 es=3, (32,000)
Control Rig es=.5 (10,000)
Datajack(skinned) es=.1 (550)
Skillwire 3 es=.6 (6000)
-Bio es= .52 /2 = .26
Sleep Regulator es=.12 (10,000)
Cerbral Boosters 2 es=.4 (20,000)
Abilities:
Thermo Vision
+2 vs desease/toxin
+2 when controlling drones/ +4 if hot
Only need 4 hours of sleep
>>Description<<
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A 17 year old Dwarf male, 4 feet tall, 200 pounds mostly fat. Thick black/brown dreads pulled back into a pony tail. Heritage is African, medium darkness. Usually dresses in sport's jerseys for various Court Ball teams, urban camo cargo pants, and biege short-top boots. Has had silvery metalic tusks installed along the bottom row of teeth.
>>Role<<
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Hacker/ with some rigging skills
>>Personality<<
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Pissed off, angry, mean, prideful. Being short, fat, and black he has had to endure alot of abuse. But he usually gets the last laugh in the matrix. Being so good at the matrix has given him an ego and a place to vent all of his frustrations though.
>>Iconography<<
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-Theme: zombie stuff on the player side, humans and anti-zombie stuff for opposition.
-Persona: Bright green cartoony human zombie, with an Orange mohawk. The only clothes the zombie is wearing is a tore up pair of jean shorts.
-Home node: Will look like a cartoony cemetary with a field of headstones with a Chapel/Mosque/Crypt building at one end. There is a very thin layer of fog along the ground that doesnt rise above the ankle. There is a giant full moon in the sky casting everything in a bright moonlight that casts shadows.
-Attack programs: Projectile vomiting, Biting, and a baseball bat w/ barbed wire wrapped around the end.
-Agents: Each agent will most likely be represented by a swarm of cartoony zombie's, and when they attack they slowly overwhelm the target and begin biting it.
-hostile entities that conform to my reality filter will look like swarms of humans with pitchforks or shotguns or pistols or maybe chainsaws.
-ARE programs like music/person/weather will be used to bring bits and pieces of his zombie theme to the meat world. When agents complete tasks he will hear in the meat world "bbbbBBbrrraaaiiinnss". If his analyze program picks up intruders he might hear humans shout the things people say when fighting zombies like "aim for the head!". Virtual person will be used to represent his agents and he will have them set to discreet appearences for example, he might be walking down the street and look up at a skyscraper and he might see in the windows of a random floor thats its filled with zombies, or a passing car may be filled with zombies or have zombie arms and legs hanging out of the trunk. Weather will make daylight into the same full moon night sky of his home node(no vision mods).
>>Background<<
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Grew up in a poverty stricken, violent ghetto of mixed races and groups where everyone hated everyone else who was different. Being fat, black, and a dwarf he was picked on alot which caused him to become mean and spiteful. He had friends though, friends who were in a gang and they protected him when they could but they didnt recruit him either. Instead they just let him hang out with them. One day one of his friends gave him a commlink he had jacked off some random person or rival ganger and gave it to him to see what was on it. Thus begun his love afair with the matrix. As he learned more about the matrix and commlinks he found out he could help his friends out in all manner of ways. He could make court cases and tickets disappear, he could delete footage from security camera's, stop alarms from going out.
His friends started making alot of money thanx to his matrix overwatch and hacking and alot of it flowed his way to help him get better shit so he could help them more. Eventually the law caught up with his friends though and most of them were taken down and the rest disappeared but nobdy ever gave him up. Now that he could finally fight back against people by using the matrix his confidence rebounded and he feels like a king amongst peasents. He even had
some shiny orc tusks implanted to show off. Being alone for the most part he started focusing more and more on being in the matrix. When he wasnt jacking bank accounts and syphoning money to survive he was online playing games, designing software, and fighting with other hackers.
Some of his closer friends who were caught though are in deep shit for all the things they have done and they need some good lawyers or they are going to be written off and sold off to god knows who for god knows what. He needs to get a few big scores to help his friends so he turns to the shadows...