Hi guys. I've been working on my Shadowrun page (4th Ed) for a few weeks now, and I think I've got it presentable and ready to open to the viewing public (namely, you). I've put a good bit of work into it, both content and format/presentation, and feedback would be appreciated. I don't expect you guys to read all of it and then write me a thesis or anything. I realize there's a lot there. But read over at what seems interesting to you, and if you wanna comment on it that would be great. And this includes negative feedback; especially negative feedback. While I tried really hard to balance things, there might be wonky or straight-up broken rules. That's what the feedback is for. I want to present stuff that's useful and fun, not things that will break your game.
What does my page have on it? Why should you take valuable time out of your day to come look at it? Well, Upgrades has a brief list of house rules. The Menagerie presents new metahuman variants and sapients. My Mysticism page has new magic rules, traditions, spells and adept powers. And finally, Dark Ops Tech gives SR4 rules for Perfect Dark weapons (yes, that old N64 game).
While I edited my page meticulously, I'm sure I've missed stuff: typos, grammar errors, subject number disagreements, etc. Feel free to point those out too. i liks cumin acros az liturit. Even if it's difficult to read, or you have a suggestion how to make it look better, I'm open.
I plan to expand on the page, and I have a significant expansion in the works right now. But I figured this is enough to shovel at you guys for the time being.
Thanks for your time.