Who cares if there's a buried ellipsis, where it doesn't alter the sense of the thing? Once in the public domain, quotes have always been mutable: just check out how many versions you'll find of, oh, Santayana's.
I'd just like to express a vote of appreciation for writing which, more than just cold and isolated fact, brings across the breadth and depth of something living. That's what we learned to love in the old Shadowrun books. Anyone remember the beautiful cultural depths of the Laughing Man / Ambrose exchange in
Virtual Realities 2? Until now, in v.3, by and large we've seen only pale shadows of it ... but for the first time this shows real potential.
(It was perhaps inevitable that those who seek out only rules and absolutes would object vigorously and sometimes viciously to anything for in-game use that could not be quantified: but for now human beings remain more than a collection of quantifiable abilities and interactions, and I see no reason why meta-beings should be any different.)
Now, if only we could get a return of the time-stamps, if only for the subtleties of cross-temporal interaction and later cross-referencing based on what was known (or should have been known) when something was said, Shadowrun life would be perfect