Because writing is best when discussed in the open. Here is my brief opinion of everything so far.
K10-4:
1: I like the story of the last time he hid behind a door. Synth arm sounds a little weird though. It is cyber, isn't it?
2: Ack! Shedim! The prose was a little overdone, IMO.
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Dr. Jest:
1: Very nice, I like the tone. Very Noir. Again, sometimes the prose becomes intrusive.
2: The cliche stuck out a bit, but hey, the world needs badasses, and the slimy guys who set them out.
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K-10:
Not really a story so much as a feral, surreal, day trip. visceral.
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K10-4: Short and rather meh. Very standard setup.
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CirclMastr:
A thing of beauty. 6th world coroners have got to have one of the most interesting jobs out there. I wish there was more.
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Crimsondude 2.0:
Setting you've got. Anything interesting going on? Not in this snippet. Move along people, nothing to see here.
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Critias:
I want what you've got. That was pure awesome. I think it would've worked better without mention of the girl, but the rest of what you've got there is solid orhalicum.
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Crimsondude 2.0:
You need some sort of line break between the two perspectives. Good setup though.
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K-10: 6th World emo. I love it.
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K10-4:
You've got the seed of awesomeness there, but I don't quite think it lives up to the potential. It just doesn't click for me.
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Voorhees:
Good prose, but the dialogue didn't work that well for me.
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K-10:
1:Nice shot from a decker's POV. I like the iconography.
2: The future can stuff itself. I see Cheetos I eat Cheetos.
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Me:
Tsk, what can I say? I think the impact would've been better if we knew that he wasn't her biological 'papa,' but that his street name was 'Big Papa,' and he was like a- well that's the problem with snippets, isn't it?