Dollface wasn't always so pretty. Once upon a time he was one rough-lookin', tough-talkin' son of an ork. Then he ate a facefull of birdshot and had to get serious reconstruct done on his face - and unfortunately, it got done on the cheap. Now, with a face that looks like a Botox job gone horribly wrong, and more human than he'd ever like to admit, he's the least threatening looking ork on the block, no matter how massive his muscles are or how big his fists - and his habit of indulging in hallucinogens to remember what it was like to move his face around is starting to get expensive.

He's learned to accept his handicaps and focus on his intellectual side, walking the transmetahumanist path of the street samurai. Someday, when he's grown enough, he intends to get some deltaware Cerebral Boosters and retire to a life of contemplation and introspection - until then, he's quite content working for the corp's in the shadows and waiting, very, very patiently, to be served at the local Quik-E-Mart.

-you short changed your attributes. 190/200
-you dont take reflex recorders for specific skills when you can take an entire group and get the same skill.
-If you get shot at you can do reaction+dodge(13) or reaction+gymnastics(11). If you get melee attacked its rea+dodge x2 (19) or reaction+gymnastics(11). Is 14bp worth 2 extra dice for firearms and 8 extra dice vs melee?
-why do you have an imaging scope with image link in it to display images?? Plus i think an image scope only allows for one vision mod.
-you took some medical gear but you have no medical skill.

-smartweapons and cybereyes. You either:
A. go through a comm and let urself get hacked
B. skinlink to your eyeballs which means you cant give mental commands to your gun like eject clips.
C. skinlink to a datajack which will give you mental commands.

You need to update the essence at the top (it still says 6.) You've also shortchanged yourself on knowledge skills. You get 18 free points of knowledge skills, not 18 free BP. You can add another 5 points of knowledge skills and put those 6 BP somewhere else.

Yeah, looks like you have no Commlink. Which it could be hard to get around without.

I think it's 18 free BP, not 18 skill points, but I don't have a book here I should really be working.

BTW thats the best use of an incompetancy flaw I've seen, good job.

Skill points are on a 1 for 1 basis at chargen (yes, you buy additional points at 2BP per point) and specializations are also bought at 1 skill point. So you are shortchanged 5 points BEFORE the 1 BP which bought you nothing with.

Just buy him high-rating programs and the Computer/Hacker skill groups All that extra cash goes to things like a decent commlink and all the other useful stuff.

Hey, not MY fault the RAW doesn't use stats for script-kiddie hacking...

I've updated my character and I'm already working on the challenge. It's name is Stalker 07, and it's not natural or right in this world.

Edit: Meh, I gave up. I was going down the 'cyberwared to the gills vatgrown clone' route, but it wasn't working out.

Okay, I'll start a new thread for this, since I issued the original challenge. Post ideas there.

RiotGearEpsilon : I just like your character !

Thanks.