I did G-Dogg's stuff...
Unfortunatly, I think the story itself suffered in a couple places for a couple reasons...
The first was simply our deadline. We had like 6 author's writing this, but we didn;t have the time to allow each one to finish before the next writer took over, like a round robin. Instead, everyone involved was writing each chapter concurrently. Occasionally someone would get done earlyl, and we were able to ise their sections for ours, but... that didn;t happen too often.
The second was the fact that this was originally slated to be a comic book, and was plotted to be such. the story was replotted for prose, but youc an tell it lost a little in the translation. There are definately scenes taht were written with a comic style in mind (Especially that last bit).
Overall, it was fun to work on and was a decent story, but the multi-author, multi-viewpoint mode of storytelling was a little... chaotic.
Bull