Hi. This is my first hacker/combat and only my second 4th edition character. Any feedback or comments are appreciated and thank you ahead of time for reviewing the character.
A few quick points before the review. The character is conceptual in nature. In terms of improved qualities I wanted one mental (analytical thinker), one physical (double jointed), one emotional (guts), and one social (made man).
Brief Biography: Paris Tintagel is the younger brother of Tir Paladin Alexander Tintagel (Lugh Surhand's bodyguard). Young Paris was loyal to the former monarchy based government of tir tairngire. Lacking the magical ability to become an adept, or magician. Seeking to serve like his brother, Paris also trained in a few combat skills and used some of his families wealth to become infused with some cyberware and bioware. He also dabbled in learning about eletronics and hacking. The 2064 came, Paris was 18. He took to the streets fighting the factions that were attempting to bring down the old council of princes. During the fighting, Paris was defeated and thrown in prison as an enemy of the new Zincan regime.
-He eventually escaped (either through a jailbreak or political means, not sure of this yet). Eventually he was recruited by a Russian Vory outfit (not sure which one). The Russian's backed by Evo sponsored the rest of the implementation of Cyberware and Bioware into his system. Along with helping him focus on hacking/programming. Paris now serves as a shadowrunner who works with a Russian Vory outfit in Seattle. All of the whilte attempting to escape and evade the extremist factions of the current Tir government who are looking to hunt down anyone associated with the old regime.
Character sheet is below.
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Build Point Break Down (Out of Standard 400 BP)
Race: 30 (Elf)
Resources: 50
Attributes: 190
Edge: 10
Skills: 122
Contacts: 8
Qualities: +10
Real Name: Paris Tintagel
Street Name: Trojan
Height: 1.82 Meters (6’0)
Weight: 76.65 Kg (169 LBS)
Age:26
Birthdate: 2/1/2046
Physical Description: Tall skinny elf with golden pigmented skin. Long black hair tied back into a pony tail. On the left side of his face there is a black nanotattoo of a knight chess piece which covers the datajack that is on his left temple and stretches all of the way down to his jawline.
Attributes:
20 Body – 3
10 Strength – 2 (3) – Muscle Augmentation
30 Agility – 5 (7) – Muscle Toner
30 Reaction – 4 (5) – Wired Reflexes
30 Logic – 4 (5) – Cerebral Booster
30 Intuition – 4
20 Willpower – 3
20 Charisma – 5
Edge – 2
Essence – 2.22
Initiative – 8 (9)
IP – 2
Matrix Initiative – (Cold Sim = 9 (10), Hot Sim = 10 (11) – Customized Interface)
Physical CM – 10
Stun CM – 10
Armor – 6 (7)/ 4 (6): Dermal Sheath Rating 1.
Skills:
Perception – 2
Infiltration – 2
Etiquette (Russian Vory) – 2 (4)
Exotic Melee, Monofilament Whip (Reflex Recorder bioware gives plus 1 to skill) – 4 (5)
Pistols (Semi-Auto) -- 2 (4)
Cracking Skill Group – 4
Electronics Skill Group – 3
Knowledge Skills: (27 Free)
Tir Tairngire Politics: 2
Elven Culture: 2
Seattle Underworld Politics: 3
2060s Trid Films: 3
Governmental Matrix Security Procedures: 3
Evo Corporation Cybernetics: 2
Operating Systems: 2
Corporate CEOs: 2
Sperethial – N
English – 4
Russian - 4
Qualities:
- Guts 5 BP
- Made Man – 10 BP
- Analytical Mind – 5 BP
- Double Jointed – 5 BP
- Sinner [Criminal] -- +10
- Weak Immune System -- +5BP
- Wanted – +10 BP
- Distinct Style (MonoWhip + Gold Skin + Trojan Horse Nano-tattoo) – +10BP
Contacts:
--- Local Vory Syndicate (Free Group Contact from Made Man Quality): Rating 8, Loyalty 4
--- Tir Paladin (Brother, Alexander Tintagel): Connection 5, Loyalty 3
Gear: 250,000 nuyen total
Cyberware – 3.28 Essence Cost
(Alpha) Wired Reflexes Rating 1 – (22,000 nuyen) --- Essence Cost 1.6
(Alpha) Dermal Sheath Rating 1 – (20,000) – Essence Cost .48
(Alpha) Data Jack – (1,000) – Essence Cost .08
(Alpha) Finger Tip Compartment – (1,500) – Essence Cost .08
(Alpha) Flex Hands – (7,000) – Essence Cost .24
(Alpha) Cyber Eyes Rating 2 – (1,500) – Essence Cost .24
--(A) Thermal Graphic Vision – (2,000) -- .08
--(A) Smartlink – (2,000) -- .08
--(A) Vision Mag – (2,000) -- .08
(Alpha) Internal Built in Modified Fairlight Caliban (Response 5, Signal 5, Firewall 5, System 5) – (21,000) – Essence Cost .16
--Customized Interface – (250)
-- Optimization (Exploit) – (500)
-- Biometric Lock – (150)
--Armor (10) – (500)
-- Nanopaste Trodes – (100)
-Internal Sim Modle with Hot Sim Mod ---- (10,350) – Essence Cost .16
--Skin link – (50)
--Tag Eraser – (50)
-- Satellite Link – (500)
--Simrig – (1,000)
--Holo Projector – 200
--AR Gloves – 250
Programs
--Analyze 5 (500)
--Browse 5 (500)
--Command 5 (500)
--Edit 5 (500)
--Purge 5 (500)
--Scan 5 (500)
--Reality Filter (500)
--Armor 5 (5,000)
--Attack 5 (5,000)
--Medic 5 (5,000)
--Biofeedback 5 (5,000)
--Black Hammer 5 (5,000)
--Blackout 5 (5,000)
--Exploit 5 (5,000)
--Stealth 5 (5,000)
--Decrypt 5 (5,000)
--Defuse 5 (5,000)
--Corrupt 5 (5,000)
--Track 5 (5,000)
--Spoof 4 (4,000)
--ECCM 4 (4,000)
--Sniffer 4 (4,000)
Bioware: Essence Cost – 1 (Counts as .5 towards Essence Loss)
-Nanotatoo + Skin Pig – (1,500) – 0 Essence Loss
-Reflex Recorder [Rating 1Mono Whip Single Skill] (10,000) -- .1
-Muscle Tone [Rating 2] (16,000) --- .4
-Muscle Augmentation [Rtg 1] (7,000) -- .2
-Cerebral Booster [Rtg 1] (10,000) -- .2
-Clean Metabolism – (2,500) -- .1
Items + Weapons:
--Indian Pathfinder Motorcycle (6,000)
--Monofilament Whip (3,000)
--Salvatte Guardian Pistol (800)
--20 Ex Explosive Rounds (2,000)
--10 Gel Rounds (300)
--Lined Coat (700)
--1 Rating 4 Fake SIN (4,000)
--2 Fake Licenses (800)
--Maglock Rating 4 (8,000)
--2 Month Paid Low Lifestyle (4000)
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