QUOTE (Mach_Ten @ Feb 23 2013, 05:23 AM)
have a quick look at this guys, let me know where I can make any needed changes
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== Info ==
Street Name: Silas
Name: Unnamed Character
Movement: 10/25, Swim: 5
Karma: 0
Street Cred: 0
Notoriety: 2
Public Awareness: 0
Ork
Composure: 7
Judge Intentions: 9
Lift/Carry: 12 (105 kg/70 kg)
Memory: 6
Nuyen: 0
== Attributes ==
BOD: 4 (5)
AGI: 5 (6)
REA: 5 (7)
STR: 6 (7)
CHA: 4
INT: 3
LOG: 3
WIL: 3
EDG: 2
MAG: 5
== Derived Attributes ==
Essence: 5.0
Initiative: 8 (10)
IP: 1 (3)
Astral Initiative: 6
Astral IP: 3
Matrix Initiative: 6
Matrix IP: 1
Physical Damage Track: 11
Stun Damage Track: 10
== Active Skills ==
Archery : 0 Pool: 5
Armorer : 0 Pool: 2
Artisan : 0 Pool: 2
Automatics : 0 Pool: 5
Blades : 4 Pool: 11
Climbing : 2 Pool: 10
Clubs : 0 Pool: 5
Computer : 0 Pool: 2
Con : 2 Pool: 8
Cybercombat : 0 Pool: 2
Data Search : 0 Pool: 2
Demolitions : 0 Pool: 2
Disguise : 0 Pool: 2
Diving : 0 Pool: 4
Dodge : 0 Pool: 6
Escape Artist : 0 Pool: 5
Etiquette : 2 Pool: 8
First Aid : 0 Pool: 2
Flight : 2 Pool: 10
Forgery : 0 Pool: 5
Gunnery : 0 Pool: 5
Gymnastics : 2 Pool: 9
Hacking : 0 Pool: 2
Hardware : 4 Pool: 9
Heavy Weapons : 0 Pool: 5
Infiltration : 4 Pool: 11
Instruction : 0 Pool: 3
Intimidation : 0 Pool: 3
Leadership : 2 Pool: 8
Locksmith : 0 Pool: 5
Longarms : 0 Pool: 5
Navigation : 0 Pool: 2
Negotiation : 2 Pool: 8
Palming : 0 Pool: 5
Parachuting : 0 Pool: 4
Perception : 1 Pool: 4
Pilot Ground Craft : 1 Pool: 8
Pilot Watercraft : 0 Pool: 6
Pistols : 1 Pool: 7
Riding : 0 Pool: 6
Running : 2 Pool: 10
Shadowing : 0 Pool: 2
Survival : 0 Pool: 2
Swimming : 2 Pool: 10
Throwing Weapons : 0 Pool: 5
Tracking : 0 Pool: 2
Unarmed Combat : 0 Pool: 5
== Knowledge Skills ==
== Contacts ==
Fence (2, 2)
== Qualities ==
Adept
Allergy (Uncommon, Severe) (Animal fur)
Incompetent (Animal Handling)
Incompetent (Animal Training)
Low-Light Vision
Restricted Gear (Rating 1)
Signature
== Powers ==
Counterstrike Rating: 1
Improved Ability (Combat) (Blades) Rating: 1
Improved Ability (Non-Combat) (Hardware) Rating: 2
Improved Reflexes 2
Kinesics Rating: 2
== Lifestyles ==
Low 1 months
== Cyberware/Bioware ==
Reflex Recorder (Skill Group) (Stealth)
Suprathyroid Gland
Synthacardium Rating 1
== Armor ==
Chameleon Suit 6/4
+Thermal Damping 6
Form-Fitting Full-Body Suit6/2
+Fire Resistance 6
SecureTech Forearm Guards 0/1
SecureTech Leg Casings 0/1
SecureTech Shin Guards 0/1
SecureTech Vitals Protector1/1
== Weapons ==
Katar
+Personalized Grip, Melee
Pool: 12 DV: 6P AP: -2 RC: 0
Savalette Guardian
+Concealable Holster
+Additional Clip, Pistol
+Personalized Grip
+Silencer
+Smartgun System
Pool: 9 DV: 5P AP: -1 RC: 2
Unarmed Attack
Pool: 5 DV: 4S AP: - RC: 0
== Commlink ==
Erika Elite (3, 4, 3, 4)
+Subvocal Microphone
+Novatech Navi
== Gear ==
Ammo: Gel Rounds (Heavy Pistols) x100
Autopicker Rating 6
Biomonitor
Contact Lenses Rating 2
+Smartlink
+Flare Compensation
Earbuds Rating 2
+Audio Enhancement Rating 3
+Select Sound Filter Rating 3
Fake SIN (Close Protection) Rating 4
+Fake License (Savalette Guardian) Rating 4
Foam Explosive Rating 10
Goggles Rating 3
+Thermographic
+Vision Enhancement Rating 3
+Image Link
Grapple Gun
+Stealth Rope (100 m)
+Catalyst Stick
Jammer, Hand Held Rating 2
Keycard Copier Rating 6
Latex Face Mask
Maglock Sequencer Rating 4
Medkit Rating 6
Miniwelder
Plasteel Restraints x2
Radio Detonator x5
Respirator Rating 6
Smart Pouch System, Combat Load Vest
+Smart Pouch System, Smart Canteen
+Smart Pouch System, Ammunition Pouch
Tag Eraser
White Noise Generator Rating 6
== Vehicles ==
Indian Pathfinder (Racing Bike)
+Anti-Theft
+Morphing License Plate
+Run Flat Tires Rating 2
+Spoof Chip
+Vehicle Sensor
Character looks interesting, should work well for a melee/stealth character. Did you change things since you first posted? I thought I saw a few different things when it was first posted. I could be wrong, I only took a quick glance the first time.
QUOTE (Slacker @ Feb 24 2013, 09:26 PM)
Well, I was giving other people time to comment if they wanted to. But overall, I would say that's a pretty good generalist. If you're happy with him. I'll likely be posting up the start of the Mission sometime tomorrow.
We'll be starting soon? cool.
QUOTE (Slacker @ Feb 24 2013, 09:27 PM)
I would say we are much more in the vein of Mirror Shades than Pink Mohawk. I see nothing wrong with Pink Mohawks, but thus far the group's been pretty serious minded.
Yeah, we are definitely a bit more serious, than ostentatious. My character definitely stands out, but he is definitely a down to earth character himself.