QUOTE (phlapjack77 @ Jul 29 2013, 02:01 PM)

So as someone with no experience with the publishing of (rule) books, is it normal to have this many pages of proof-reading? I'm not trying to start anything or denigrate your work, I'm just curious if someone had a leg to stand on by saying "See! That's a lot of proofing, it means the writing quality was bad to begin with!"
You have to be sure what you want changed, so you should always include the sentence to be corrected, followed by the corrected sentence, which takes up much more space, that the actual end product, and then you might even adde notes as to why you think it should be changed:
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P. 184, Sensor Attacks, paragraph 1, sentence 3-4:
Replace:
If the target is trying to evade detection, make this an Opposed Test versus the target’s Infiltration + Agility [Physical] (metahumans, critters), Infiltration (Vehicle) + Reaction [Handling] (driven vehicles), or Pilot + [Model] Stealth [Handling] (drones). Since vehicle stealth is limited by the driver’s ability, the dice applied for Infiltration skill should not exceed the driver’s appropriate Vehicle skill.
With:
If the target is trying to evade detection, make this an Opposed Test versus the target’s Sneaking + Agility [Physical] (metahumans, critters), Sneaking + Reaction [Handling] (driven vehicles), or Pilot + [Model] Stealth [Handling] (drones). Since vehicle stealth is limited by the driver’s ability, the dice applied for Sneaking skill should not exceed the driver’s appropriate Vehicle skill.
[LWH: The Infiltration is changed to Sneaking in SR5, consider doing a search and replace]
Even though it only replaces Infiltration with Sneaking 3 times it takes up nearly a 3rd of a page in a document. Add comments and notes from the proofers, and you often end up with very long proofing documents.
It's not uncommon to have more pages of proofing than pages in the final product.
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And with so many pages of proofing, did they not (all) get used in the final product? Did they all get used, and yet there are still this many little things that need errata'ing? Is this level of errata'ing that's needed somewhat normal for the RPG industry?
Usually most of the proofing suggestions get used, especially the factual errors, like the ones above. But not all proofers manage to read everything, and we have different levels of competence and focus on different things. English is not my first language so I don't focus on spelling or gramma. I tend to focus on consistency end rules. Unfortunately I didn't manage to read the skills chapter, so I didn't notice that Infiltration was changed to Sneaking until after our deadline.
I've done proofing for CGL, Fantasy Flight Games, and for a few danish publishers, and the amount of proofing seems quite consistent. CGL is no better or worse that the other companies IMO.