QUOTE (hermit @ Mar 14 2013, 09:10 AM)

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QUOTE (hermit @ Mar 14 2013, 09:10 AM)

Okay, so let's start with the title image. The image not only looks sweet, it also hammers home the topic of the file. It shows off, but not with seminude babes (which bore me by now, more than anything else) but with hilarious simsense Johnny Spinrad-esque orc versus RL ork bum. The interior art also is quite impressive. AAS is fast becoming THE artist for Shadowrun in this era, much like Mike Jackson and Geier were in early SR. Not that the others are shabby, but he gets the feel I want Shadowrun to have best, I think. And all the detail that's speaking to dedicated fanboys like me.
Yeah, I
really like the cover, and wish I could claim credit for it. But that decision was someone else, and the artwork another person who knocked it out of the park.
QUOTE (hermit @ Mar 14 2013, 09:10 AM)

The opening story is fantastic and pretty much ... well, it deals with the one thing that defined SimSense craziness for me, early on, back when 2E was new and I had just spent two weeks' worth of pocket money on 2XS. It's just a throwaway sentence in that book, and yet it has stayed with me through all these years. This story is the story of that sentence. And it's written in a way, with tone and flavor, that is worthy of Nigel Findley.
Want to know something? Same sentence stayed with me, that's why I used it, despite there being 20-game years between when it was used and when I wrote this story. I had a copy of 2XS in my hands as I wrote it one-handed to make sure I got the feel and story right.
QUOTE (hermit @ Mar 14 2013, 09:10 AM)

Generally, this details the SimSense and BTL usage as I have done for myself, which I of course like. I'm probably biased here, but I think that's a logical expansion on what has been written, and especially the therapeutic SimSense used to 'resocialise' criminals and addicts I have already used, as a private expansion on what SimSense can do. Also, CGL, you totally owe me brain bleach for Hannibelle's comment on snuff beetles.
I wanted to push home how
dark Shadowrun really is, dystopia only goes so far as a word before people stop getting it. Hell, even Snuff Flicks wouldn't have covered it (an actress or two in Sam Raimi's original Evil Dead movie was worried he was making a snuff movie!) So, I went to the deepest, darkest places of Rule 34 of the Internet. The brain bleach is my own personal reaction to what I learned. I figured it was a nice humorous touch after hitting so dark a note.
QUOTE (hermit @ Mar 14 2013, 09:10 AM)

As aways with Croteau's writing, it's the little details that get me. Victor Vigilante, the intro-fic referencing that one half-sentence from 2XS, the sheep. Hell, I'd pay if he wrote a "runs gone bad" PDF! I feel that, among the current writers, he is among those who most "get" Shadowrun as I love it (and kudos for the Molly Millions shout-out). Also, he's so far the only author whose /dev/grrl writeups make me actually kinda like her. AAS' fantastic art full of inside jokes (Neill!) is the icing on this delicious epub cake. Old Art has seen re-use too, but thoughtfully; the Bunraku pic is among the best Chernik did for SR, and the down-and-out junkie is the weakest art but at least fits in thematically.
Spare my blushes. I did ask for the Neil artwork I will admit (again, AAS knocked it out of the park!), and am glad someone caught the Molly Millions shout-out. As her story
created the idea of Bunraku Parlors in Cyberpunk (Not sure if they existed in Sci-Fi before hand), I felt I had to include it.
QUOTE (hermit @ Mar 14 2013, 09:10 AM)

The addiction qualities are varied, reasonably balanced, and flavorful. I know a character who has two of them out of hand, and I certainly will use them as soon as I can. That's what the system has been missing, far more than yet another combat rifle, stats for great dragons or Charm of Nurgle, the spell. As with the additional lifestyle qualities of Safehouses, this adds flavor instead of more items of +2. The new addiction list and the simsense-based drugs price list also add to the game, I think.
My Mother is a cook. I learned to season to taste.

That said, I do loves me my gear porn books, so... Yeah, I'm their target audience for that.
QUOTE (hermit @ Mar 14 2013, 09:10 AM)

Some small dark spots cannot be ignored, though they're a wide trend with CGL products. There are typos, more than one, and sometimes glaring. Proofing apparently wasn't effective enough. Neither was editing, some sentences look positively mangled. If editing even happened, this looks a bit like handed in close or slightly over deadline and just handed down to layout for production without any editing happening because a bad product still sells, while editing takes time that could be put to use making more sub-standard product instead.
Um, actually, some of those (in the fluff) was intentional. Turbo Bunny is drying out while she's writing that, so it not exactly at her best. Also, because her addiction is being a chiphead, she can't slot "Writer 6.0" knowsoft as she's cleaning out.
QUOTE (hermit @ Mar 14 2013, 09:10 AM)

9/10, with one point below perfect for the nonexistent editing and bad post-writing treatment CGL seems to consider business standard by now.

No comment about the second piece of fiction? The one that gives Bull another reason to want to beat me with my own cane?