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What the fuck is wrong with that pdf file?
it's slow as hell, no matter if i download it or try and open in in a browser . .
it's slow as hell, no matter if i download it or try and open in in a browser . .
I'm having that problem, too.
Review: Part 1
The Untethered Life
It's a good story, writing about a plausible background for a runner, giving insight into him. Not exactly novel, but it sets the mood well. Somehow, I get the feeling the author is craving Deus Ex 3's release. I don't know why ... not that it's bad (and not that I wouldn't long for that release), but it's somehow jumping your face a bit.
The Intern's Tale
That guy's annoying, but it seems he is supposed to be, so that's fine. What he says isn't really new, the crash-wank is a little overdone, but it's readable, structured and hasn't got any glaring carniverous rebel sells like War had. No war over potted plants either. Decent, fairly solid, though not extremly outstanding. It wastes half a page again, though. What the hell.
Street Life
This Intro fic is a little weird, but tied in with the chapter's shadowtalk by Fastjack, so it's well enough, even though I couldn't help but hear it in the voice of that seasme street dealer muppet in my head first time I read through it. Anyway, nice intro fic, even if a bit unusual. Useful info (very useful actually, in parts, a bit cheesy in others, but the Halo system is rather unfavorly commented by shadowtalk, making it pick and choose), even if that's the second in-world writer that ticks me off a bit, but hey, the Shadows is no place for nice people, so what the hell. Also, Jean-Paul! For everyone, not for anyone (I am not sure if this works in English as it should ...). So this was written by Lars Blumenstein, I guess? Or is this coincidental? And terrific ending. I was hoping for this, but not actually expecting it. Well played, whoever wrote that piece.