QUOTE (hermit @ Mar 12 2011, 12:08 PM)
Agree on all you wrote. I had the same feeling, regarding Clockwork, reading Emergence.
I was feeling his way to thinking as well... Right up to the point where he sold out one of his own contacts for money. Then I agreed with everyone else on the JackPoint.
"I have to go punch a Clock."
QUOTE (Tymeaus Jalynsfein @ Mar 12 2011, 12:09 PM)
The fact remains, /dev/grrl is a Shadow talker, therefore she is not a "Normal Person" in the typical sense. She has access to information that the normal person does not. Normal people look at those kinds of people like they are a bit touched, and move along. She is in the Shadows, which sets her apart, regardless of whether you like that or not.
I have no issues with a Corp Kid being in the Shadows, nor even her being a Hacker (Makes better sense than some kind of Combat Monster! A Rigger might also be possible. Some people just have a natural knack for things, but some things require training and body size/weight/magic.).
The issues I have with her are that she's pretty much the poster child for "DERP!" of the Shadows. Which usually are people that do not live long. Like that guy that bragged that he got one over on S-K and was found dead, like, two days later. Her character is heavily 2D, and not very well thought out in a lot of ways. Is this an issue of how she was created, how she was described, or the authors, I'm not sure, but the rest of the characters seem to be more "Real" than she does.
Of course, I'm pretty heavy into character backstory, even if it's not talked about. The amount of information I use to tease people I know about Jon "Money" Johnson's background is staggering, like exactly which building was dropped on him, to where he grew up, to even who his Father is and why they hate each other so much. Even the fact that his sister is a Nun doing Missionary Work in Africa, which is outright stated in one story, often surprises people.
And then there's the whole chapter on Nas' history. And that doesn't even touch on his family or upbringing.
Maybe I'm just elitist about character development being something that you don't do from the start, but have from before the character hits text.