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On to crunch (which is mixed IC and OOC, despite what's said above; describing an item IC and then giving an OOC stat line is not separating the two).
This isn't exactly accurate. Yes there is OoC text imbedded in the IC text, but the OoC/crunch stuff is in big black boxes. While I'm sure not everyone will like this format, you can clearly tell which is which.
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The disguise rules for equipment are a nice idea, but the even example provided includes the necessity to tell a pen's Device rating. And, but of course, it's never cross-checked with Arsenal, things like SA Puzzler should hardly work with the rules suggested. Same for drone case rules - minidrones, which are said to be the size of a large insect to the size of a mouse in Arsenal, are suggested to be hidden in pen- or key-shaped cases; small drones, which are commlink or toaster to large dog in size, are said to be possible to hide in a commlink- or shoe-shaped case (or a hidden pocket)
The device rating limitation only applies to adding Secondary Functionality. And why is this a problem? Its not saying that you need to give every pen a device rating every time a character goes to write something. Just that if you want to build a laser torch into a given pen, you need to consider that pen's device rating (which should be 1 or 2 at most). Seems pretty reasonable to me, and limits the amount of functions you can build into a device without adding a new mechanic (device ratings being well established in cannon, which states that just about everything has one).
And there is mention of Arsenal's disguise rules in the very first paragraph of the section, with page reference even.
The Puzzler is manufactured from start to finish to break down into disguised components. It hardly applies to a discussion of rules for modifying existing gear to be broken down or disguised. Its rules don't even work the same way- requiring a Logic + Armor test implies that the observer needs to be somewhat skilled to even realize what they are looking at. Thats not the same as realizing that a lighter has a microphone built into it, or that a bunch of undisguised pieces can be assembled into a gun.
Drone Cases: If you ask me a pen is about the size of a large insect and disguising a drone the size of a commlink as a commlink seems pretty reasonable. It seems a bit nit-picky to argue that items that are only described in vague size ranges can't be disguised as other items that are only described in vague size ranges. Obviously there has to be some level of common sense and GM logic applied here.
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Commlink accessories are cool, as well. Although the section leaves you wondering - why is there nothing as handy as Nanite Slicers in Augmentation, and where can I get a whole vat of these Nanite Disassemblers 2.0? Does the Gyroscopic Winch mod come "w/ 50m of high-tensile microwire", as listed in the stats, or without any, as said in the description? Is the "Small Explosive Device" the same as "Self-destruct, Area" mod from Unwired, and if yes, why list it twice, if no, what's the difference?
Nanites:Seems like the rules as written can easily be adapted to any other nanite.

Wench: This is a little confusing. As I read it, the wire is included in the price of the mod, but cannot be housed inside the modified commlink. You have to conceal it elsewhere on your person and thread it into the commlink when you intend to use it.
Explosive: This is a good question. As far as I can tell there isn't a lot of difference except that the Spy Games mod packs a much smaller punch. And of course the assumption is that the user plans to use the commlink as a grenade at some point in the mission, whereas the mod in Unwired assumes that the commlink will only be detonated if the shit hits the fan. donno.
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Same goes for Intelligence Gear. Assembler assembles documents "regardless of the style of shredder used"? Good ultra-secure shredders turn paper into a pulp. There are shredders with a tiny fireplace inside. How does the assembler work, is it magitech, after all? Does it have magnets inside, perchance? Does Card Skimmer record first ten swipes or first ten cards? Is CarnivoreGold your universal lingvosoft to make all lingvosofts obscolete, after all? How is MonaLisa different from Facial Recognition from Arsenal, and why are the rules different? What determines the UM material rating when it's shaped neither as a hood nor as a body bag?
Assembler: I think its implicit that you actually have to have shreds to reassemble. Not sure what magnets would contribute?
Card Skimmer: Rules say first ten swipes.
CarnivoreGold: Linguasofts allow the user to speak an unknown language in realtime. CarnivoreGold is only used to translate after the fact. Trying to use it in place of a linguasoft would be like 3 people sitting and having a conversation where 2 are speaking fluently and one is using Babblefish to try to follow along.
Monalisa: Another good question. I think both CarnivoreGold and Monalisa were initially conceptualized as specialized Browse programs used for Data Search tests specific to their types. That didn't seem to translate well to the final product, tho.
UM: The rating is whatever you want to pay for. The hood and body bag are apparently pre-manufactured products, which have a rating of one. You could purchase rating 6 material and make a rating 6 hood, if you wanted to.
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Olfactory sensors with a range of four kilometers? And how is Bloodhound Olfactory Sensor different from the usual Olfactory Sensors?
A bear can smell a carcass up to 20 miles away if its upwind. Although there are no ranges listed, I think the Olfactory Sensor/Olfactory Booster are meant to be short ranged and used in the immediate vicinity of the user. The Bloodhound System is long ranged, directional and intended for use with the BioTags listed on the previous page. Interesting to note the Std. Upgrades for the drone lists "Olfactory Booster" which is the cyberware system, and clearly a mistake.
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What the hell does "anywhere the caster can telepathically communicate" mean for Synesthesia? Can he "telepathically communicate" through wards, for example? How does Spell Masking metamagic interact with Extended Masking, which allows you to mask sustained spells, as well, afaik? Why does Master of 1000 Faces limit your weight at 50 kg minimum, is it only available for human males?
Synesthesia: It means not on the metaplanes, as stated in the text. I would say the basic rules for Ward apply (i.e.- the threshold is increased by 1 for every 3 force the ward possesses).
Spell Masking: Another good question. Lots of overlap there. The advantage seems to be that Spell Masking only works for spells and does not require Masking as a prerequisite. Its also weaker than Extended Masking, since you don't add your Intuition. Overall, not a great ability.
Master of 1000 Faces: 50 kg would be a very skinny human male. But otherwise you are right, the limits don't seem to account for a female, dwarf or other adept with smaller body type using this power.