Nice and comprehensive. Thanks for the time.
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Art is, otherwise, consistently high quality, and two pieces deserve special kudos; more on that in the appropriate section of the review.
I haven't found these mentioned yet, but there's a lot to go yet. For the sake of discussion, which two pieces are they? I'm sure I'll find them somewhere in all the spoiler tags, but just in case....
I'm not sure what happened with the layout, but "The Shadow Network" was supposed to be a large chapter comprised of several smaller pieces, which apparently turned into chapters themselves. "First Among Equals," "Sleeping With the Enemy," and "The Artful Dodger" were supposed to be sub-chapters for "The Shadow Network." As I said, I don't know what happened there.
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Review (Chapters 9 and 10) 8/10 and 9/10
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Sleeping with the Enemy adds to the anti-Twilight DeVries storyline, where DeVries now is officially outed as a vampire, and to Asamondo, which is shrunk back to plausible size. It also makes life more miserable for the Infected, so maybe SR5 will have a change of mind from the ultra-soft take on them in SR4. I'd really appreciate that myself, but tastes vary.
Writing-wise, this is among the best in the book, has good flow and decent structure, and is generally fun to read. Some details grate, but cannot entirely be laid at the author's feet. I'm not happy with the New World Order take on the UN, but that's Loose Alliances fault; I'm also not entirely happy about the inconclusiveness with the Mealtime Killer stuff, but alas, there seem to be products in the pipeline dealing with that, so I withhold judgment here. It's a bit of a letdown is that this chapter, like denver, seems to set up future releases rather than tie up previous ones. I can understand why, but I'd still like the full picture. Teasing isn't nice. Still, by itself, solid writing and enjoyable.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'm sorry if some of it seems a tease. It's not what I'd intended, but it's how things worked out.
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I'm working on getting Sail Away, Sweet Sister finished, honest to God, and that will deal more with the fallout from the Mealtime Killer plot, set a few things up, and knock a few others down. I wanted to get it finished a long time ago, when there was still some warmth from Another Rainy Night, but the universe apparently saw what I was up to and mocked my efforts roundly.
Martin de Vries found time to write another book while he was in publicity/roving hunter mode with the last one; I'm not certain if being outed as a vampire will affect the new book positively or negatively, though The House of Saint Bela took a short-term hit in the light of the Houston incident. We'll see how that shakes out, but I'd love to do more with him. He's fun to write.
I can't speak to SR5 beyond what's been mentioned already; NDA. I can say that it's my intention to try and firm up the tone for the Infected without necessarily borking things entirely.
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The Artful Dodger also is well written and offers some interesting insights. One is that at least one Techno believes Paragons are actual 1st Gen AI, bringing them in line with both my theory on them (heh) and the second Sprawl trilogy book's (Neuromancer's successor, Biochips) take on the Matrix after the Singularity of Wintermute/Neuromancer. At least this story seems to follow some inner logic for now, and the Matrix maybe is demagicized. I'm all for that, I absolutely loathed 4e's magical take on Mancers and the Matrix. It also picks up The dodger's story, who has been dropped in 4E almost entirely because the generic Matrix was the new cool or something, so nice to see he's back.
Also, props for some info on Tir na nÓg. That neck of the woods has been quite neglected by SR4, too.
That was a thing of beauty, wasn't it? One of my favorite pieces in the book.
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Chapters 12 & 13: Fractures/The Cracks Inside 8/10
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Also, whoever did the art in Fractures and saluting Slamm-O deserves a special heads-up, because that art is awesome. The good-byes are nice, too, and all in all, this may be one of the best parts of StormFront. If all of it had been like that, it'd be a decent, even nice, book.
Oh, there's the art you liked a lot. Yeah, those two are great.
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... with the Africa writeup in the Almanac that might just as well have been labeled 'here be black people'.
I jacked around a little with Africa, and I even killed someone there, but I didn't notice anyone's skin color. Most of my characters are, more or less literally, gray.
I do tend to be a little bit America-centric, I admit, but I try to spread it around. I mean, one of my (adopted) characters is Dutch (and as I mentioned, he's turning out to be a blast to write). I'm going to get to play around now with an African queen sometime in the future. Much of the big research for HMHVV is somewhere in what used to be Germany; some of it's in England, too.
I can't answer for the rest of the game, but I know that I someitmes contribute to this issue, and I'm sorry if I help make things unpleasant for you in that regard. I do try to remember that there's other countries out there.